v0.4 An excellent story that's starting to get better and better as the future is catching up to the past and the puzzle is starting to make sense. I wasn't too impressed at the start - this is boring and we've seen it before goes through your mind - as I initially was disappointed by the LI and character choices and the BDSM storyline just didn't work. I can see where the dev was trying to go, authoritarian dictatorship / matriarchy = BDSM but only fear and oppression only came through instead of hot and fun. Sadly the vanilla path seems a bit like a petulant child in it responses rather than a reasoned argument for why you won't follow her. But it does the job as the choices really do matter and I have left most of them behind and moved on to the great selection of new characters after the story grows as that side of the story drops away. The visuals and animations are decent but the writing can be a little childish with some responses; more comic book than novel. If you think the same about the start keep going, as it improves massively. The first 30 minutes or so reading is probably only 2 to 2 1.2 stars but after that the next couple of hours quickly go from 3 to 4. It's not perfect but this one could go to 5 stars if the ending is nailed. It's a grower.