VN - Ren'Py - How to Fix the Future [v0.4] [mr.moonmi]

Intro Review:
A really good start.
The Renders are great and the animations are nice.
I thought the story setup with the present and future was well executed so far, including the presumably third party AMWP Choices already matter as far as either changing the Mc's attitude towards his situation or others (Can be more pushy and aggressive or more romantic and gentle)
There is definitely potential for this one.

Sincerely i didn't expect to be this good, excelent i could say. l love the main concept, (travel in time, the future and evil corporation that ruined the future world ) and how they blend to give us this. Renders are more than enough to portray the atmosphere of the world could look. I also want to say that i love how the characters are so different (the little details are enough) from the usual models that we often see in 80% of the VNs.
More than i expected, really hoping this game continues. 5 out of 5.
P.S. I would love the harem concept implemented, i can't see myself in the future choosing between all this girls.

While the pacing is a little quick for just an intro, the quality is nothing short of amazing.

The interface, render, and animation are all well above average with hints of Echoes of Lust and Broken Dreamers and a concept that I can only assume is drawn from Transformers in that our MC was found via a virtual presence.

There are choices here that figure to play a decent role in the game and scenes that promise more sexual content in the upcoming updates.

There are enough grammar/spelling mistakes that have made me pause a few times but that's just a minor tidibit

Also, having a buff, pixie-cut version of Evangeline Lily is always a win

Definitely keeping tabs on this one

Wow, what a start a game! It probably is one of the best 0.1 versions of the games this year. The art is awesome and the story is unique and interesting(especially to the ones who can relate to MC)
My favs are Octavia, Chloe, Cathy, and Ellie. I like other chars too but they are my favs of the bunch. Anyhow, I am sure this game will get big.
Good luck to the dev. All the best.
Peace.

Man, this is a pretty good start. The renders are nice and the animations are smooth.

On the story, I don't know what to think of it, YET. I hope it doesn't get too convoluted since that is pretty easy to do when writing science fiction. The characters are different from each other in both personality and looks so there's something for everyone, which is nice.

There's a lot of potential for something great here. I definitely can't wait to see more, good luck!