VN - Ren'Py - How to Fix the Future [v0.3.2] [mr.moonmi]

This is for v0.2.2... The first thing that stuck out to me were the gorgeous renders at the beginning of the game. Then I started to notice that the writing was pretty damn good with the story plot and dialogue. This has all the ingredients in it to be one of the top 1% games on this site. Most of the models I havent seen before in other games which is a giant plus. BJ being a hard masochist had me laughing because I enjoy some humor in the games I play. Theres easily more than 5 hours of content so far if you use the auto button. Keep up the fantastic work dev looking forward to more of this.

The renders can be seen by everyone just by looking at the preview photos. I honestly find them to be in the top 1% when it comes to their quality.

Dev managed to create gorgeous characters while at the same time keeping the natural proportions for the women.

Story-wise it's still in the begining, but so far it really helps lay the groundwork for what's to come.

If there is anything I would change, are the interactions between Octavia and the MC. However I strongly believe that after a few more updates things will even out and make more sense.

What exactly is the future? It is through the knowledge and the philosophy of nature that we propose to find the answer to this general question. We find nature before us as an enigma and a problem, the solution of which seems to both attract and repel us; it attracts us in that spirit has a presentiment of itself in nature; it repulses us in that nature is an alienation in which spirit does not find itself From this arose Aristotle's dictum that philosophy has its origin in wonder. We begin to observe, and we collect data from the multifarious formations and laws of nature, which may be pursued for their own sake into endless detail in all directions; and because we can see no end to this procedure, it leaves us unsatisfied. What is more, despite all this wealth of knowledge, the question, ' What exactly is the future? ' can always be asked and never completely answered.

Positives:
- Very nice renders
- Interesting story

Negatives:
- Multiple characters don't act like a human would including MC

This is mostly story related so I will explain it below

I don't want to give a template review of this game project. I will be guided only by my impressions from reading this game. As a developer I am well aware of the difficulties encountered in the development process... Lack of enough PC power to work, difficulties in translation and adaptation of texts for a wide audience, especially if you are not a native English speaker. Music that you have to scavenge through a pile of free junk. The game is still at the start, and it's a very good start!

Now I want to flatter the developer (I know how nice and important this is). The rendering in the game is delightful! Beautiful everything, the color, the light... When you see this rendering - you realize how much time and effort it took the person to give us this exciting hour and a half of the game. The characters in the game are detailed. Each character has their own special charm in the look, which accentuates their individuality and nature in a very clever way. My favorite: the rebellious Chloe. I read the game in its original language and it is delightful! The story is interesting and gripping. I loved the way the author tied in with the story, the high emotional connection to the mother, the scene where she worries about her son evoked compassion and empathy in me. I am sure that soon a native English-speaker will appear in the development team and help him to adapt the texts correctly and well!

I want to wish the developer a lot of success. Another game added to my personal top 10. My humble support on patreon - a token of gratitude for the excellent work of the developer.

Have a nice day, everyone.

PROS

1.- Interesting concept, the regular dude travelling to the near(ish) future to prevent a believable apocalypse sounds pretty cool.

2.-The characters are well written for the most part.

3.-The renders are pretty well done.

4.-The focus seems to be more on world building and story than gratuitous sex, so that's a fucking win for me. (there are still pretty good sexy scenes though)

5.- Trans content! (not much so far and is avoidable if you are not into that)

6.- The MC is not a 3 legged freak, also is not super ripped, so is easier to believe he is kinda of a regular dude.

7.- Sub dom paths (if you are into that kind of stuff)

CONS

1.- Male characters aren't that well written. There is an ugly bastard that seems to be a irredeemable asshole/harmful stereotype of fat people, and your male buddy in the future is...not amazing so far, but I still have hope he can become a great character though.

Story look nice , i'm not a fan of futuristic games itself , but i will give a chance to this game , beside the graphics of this game is awesome , is another level for sure.
Not to mention that Ellie , Cathy and Riley are gorgeous as fuck
Hope you keep doing this awesome work

So far it is pretty awesome.
The girls look good, story is building up.
Futa is avoidable/ish... still wish it could be turned off.
Sex none so far, yet you get a BJ scene and I'd rather wait than to hump each girl at the beginning.


Keep up the good work.

This one has a good and promising story, very good renders and the girls are pretty.
Everything seems "fixed" now so I'll change my rating accordingly. Now we have the choice.

Thank you and good luck.

v0.2.1

v 0.2

Story is entertaining, but amount of text is overloaded sometimes.

Renders are fine, but sometimes too much noise and grain. On the other hand dev using cool assets I haven't met elsewhere (iirc).

Girls are beautiful, BUT...
..here's why 3 stars. I understand it's early version, although I don't like games where devs, due to time required, prefer to add more bj, peeking, nude scenes instead of actual SEX. There's no sex scenes atm and I have some doubts when they will be added soon.
Animations are above average but once again, there's almost nothing to look at.

Keep in mind, there's unavoidable sub OR dom route atm.

There are decent music tracks in the game.

Give it a try if have nothing else to do, but I'd advise to check it in six months or later.

Peace.

Blown away by the renders, it looks great so far. But the story is a whole other thing.

*The main character seems to be a guy just trying to get by, that's what we saw so far. He doesn't have any friends, lives with his mom, the usual game setting. He then plays this mysterious game ang ends up in the future curtesy of two time travelers .

*Meets a dictator who's more fixated on her needs and kinks then saving the actual world or planet. She immediately wants him to submit and that's basically the story so far, spent two updates on deciding whether the main character will be a Dom or Sub. Not an actual strategy yet, just the main character and Octavia having a ego trip.

*Game tries to give you options to reject some things but in the end it doesn't matter.

*The latest update ended with the Olga character interrupting Octavia's sex party lol, some responsible dictator she is right?

* Renders are nice, but if the story continues like this I'll have to skip it.

*The Dev thought it would be a brilliant idea to trap players with this trans Daisy character and he's all like "give her a chance" . I got a good laugh out of that because I thought he was joking, but he wasn't. My advice is respect players wishes and kinks and we'll all get along fine.

the game looks stunning for starters. really liked the story telling part . renders are very good and top notch animations are cherry on top. only thing missing was the part when we go in future what happens to present life maybe a seen or 2 might be available but there was nothing in that life or was it. rating it 5/5 stars for the animation story and renders . definitely has the quality to be amongst the top game as it has offered so much for 0.2 version. keeping this in my play list.

Review version of 0.2

• The Art/Renders are amazing
• The UI and text design are good. World environment & character design is one of the best in the industry
• The flow of the story is good. The pace is good and a good amount of world building
• There is need to remove false choice where the choice don't really any impact
• Maybe extend the development time so that there is better amount of smut together with story and character building
• Overall, one of the very promising game among all the titles here

O.2 had one of the best femdom scenes, in a non explicitely femdom game. So clear recommendation from me for people who like femdom.

Also renders are of a very high quality and the writing is good. Not perfect sure, but compared to other games translated from Russian it's top tier.

Story like most time travel stories has some plot holes, but overall is fun and easy to follow. Personally I just go with the flow there and try not to overthink too much.

We also get a good amount of option to form the personality of our MC. Sure in the end of 0.2 this was somewhat botched, at least if you are not into femdom, but the dev promised to fix that for the next update.

Enjoyable and intriguing story so far. Very interested to see where this all leads, and what the MC ultimately ends up making of himself. Didn't run into any bugs, has rollback which is always appreciated, and the UI is nice.

The text writing is too small hard to read it... Any reason so small ?. Anyway beside the story does not make any sense and hard to follow,
Could be better if the writing text is bigger and faster to read, otherwise its booring

Obviously it's just an 0.1 so far, but it seems decent. The artwork is obviously a standout, though there are a lot of stock models that's not necessarily a bad thing. If you know me, you know I'm going to point out that the game has a poor translation. In places it verges on being incomprehensible, but for the most part it's just poor grammar and the occasional typo. I don't blame the developer for this, he's clearly a native Russian speaker putting his story in English to try and reach a wider audience.

In terms of plot, it's not the most original setup in fiction ever, you play as a down-on-his-luck young guy who gets mysteriously transported to the future in order to save the world. If the dev is smart, he'll use this somewhat generic setup to tell interesting character driven stories - there's already a few things set up that could prove to be good in future. I'm assuming there's going to be more travelling back and forth from present to future so we get to see more of the characters that were set up at the start. In fact, most of the playtime in this 0.1 is spent in the present.

It could improve by getting someone to properly translate the script, not giving the player meaningless choices that change nothing but a single line of dialogue, and spending less time dumping exposition unnaturally in conversations over and over about how the MC is a 20 year old failure who's father and girlfriend both left him yada yada

addictive and interesting plot plus beautiful render - I give fucking five stars) because for the first release(intro) it's very cool.

played on android, everything works correctly. I sincerely hope to see the gallery in the future or the opportunity to revisit the intimate part of the chapter.

I'm looking forward to continuing, bro)
p.s. sorry for my english)