- Oct 7, 2017
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To be brutally honest, it feel strange reading this.
It's like some words of each sentence are either wrong, or using synonyms that don't fits for said sentence.
Plus, it can be felt that these sentences were kind of constructed to match, I guess, the medieval background of the game and their way of talking.
Adding to that some obvious grammar issues even to a non-native English like me
My advice would be to look for a proofreader, if possible someone who can also talk your original language, and work with him so that he can correctly edit it.
It's like some words of each sentence are either wrong, or using synonyms that don't fits for said sentence.
Plus, it can be felt that these sentences were kind of constructed to match, I guess, the medieval background of the game and their way of talking.
Adding to that some obvious grammar issues even to a non-native English like me
My advice would be to look for a proofreader, if possible someone who can also talk your original language, and work with him so that he can correctly edit it.
