VN - Ren'Py - Completed - How to Lose One's Virginity [v1.1FE] [GPoint]

Certain aspects of the plot are ridiculous and things escalate a bit too quickly, but I like the concept, the character models are nice looking, the h-scenes are surprisingly well animated, and aside from some plot issues, I'm enjoying the writing. The house mates all have interesting relationship dynamics and nice banter with the MC. It's not a slow burn VN but at least it doesn't waste your time with unnecessary padding.

The premise is pretty stupid and it starts off generic. We've seen the loser MC with Sisters and Mother a million times.

The initial scenes are fairly standard and follow porn logic. So far, so disappointing.

BUT the writing gets better. The scenes and the women start to be more interesting in their motivations. The art, especially the expressions are excellent and make a huge difference.

In the end, it's still a porn game, but I found Annabel's attitude towards sex interesting and I liked Kate's struggle with loneliness. I stopped skipping and began reading and I became invested. If you suspend your disbelief regarding the basic story, you'll find that the writing is engaging.

So, great art, decent writing, stupid premise. All in all, worth checking out.

The story is so bad and the plot is so cringe, it's so hard to play with this type of stuff going on.

The MC has a microscopic brain or something proof is that he is on his last straw in his class and how do you even fall down from a building that obvious unless you have dementia.

Pros

• An excellent story emphasizing incest & poly amorous. Incest approach with mom was very unique and excellent. Mom’s reaction after knowing she enjoyed a most joyful sex with her own son is greatly expressed.
• A uniqueness of story, more logical almost but for few (like the mom couldn’t identify her disguised son; Kind of accidental sex with elder sister, etc.,)
• Excellent quality of image renders. Well portrayed the lewd facial emotions/expressions.
• Good to have some lewd sound; but lot of improvement needed.
• Excellent quality of animations.
• Play ability, performance and grammar are all just OK no issue.

Cons

• Spell errors
• Mismatch of dialogues’
• Other than the lewd expressions most of the normal facial expressions are terrible.
• Lack of seductiveness in sexual approach
• Few Errors:
• Pseudonym; when the MC met Kate (the professor) no pseudonym but when come to his mom he is hidden with pseudonym; funny
• One major error is that mom’s thoughts about the secret letter and thinking to visit to the club is not heard by son (which the specialty he had after the suicide attempt)

For English knowledge the vocabulary is excellent
Eagerly looking forward for next release

Have to admit i did not manage to stick to it as long as i would have wanted, while graphics are fairly good the story and characters are just horrible.
It's only use would be if it had an open gallery to watch the h-scenes and skip the story entirely.
So in essence some modder might save what little there is to save with this, but as is i would avoid it like the plague.

Currently this is one of my favorit games on the site.
Especially because of Bella and Annabel. The side LI-s (teacher and girl from the gym) also look nice and have interesting personalities. I hope the relationship with them will be developed further.
Unfortunately Chloe, who is being set up as the main LI has the worst model from all LI-s and her personality is also annoying.

The story is nothing great, MC starts off as a total, loser and an idiot but later he finds the strength to improve himself.
After an accident he gains the ability to hear the thoughts of woman in some cases. This changes his luck with women, though he still acts like an idiot most of the time. At least he really puts in some effort to improve himself.

The mindreading power could lead to some interesting story and situations but it doesn't play a role in most scenes and later on it becomes even more rare of an occurrence. Almost as if the dev wanted to phase it out completely. Clearly it doesn't play a big role in the story and only used as a convenient tool to provide the MC some extra confidence in some scenes.

As such I think it would be better if it wasn't in the game at all.
MC-s initial motivation to improve himself could simply come from his near death experience and some knowledge about how to treat some situation with girls could come from Bella as it even happens in some cases.

The games is quite fast paced, I hope the ending won't be rushed and will be satisfactory for all LI-s, even for the side girls.

Graphics and animations is 3-4/5 stars.
Character models 4/5.
Story 2,5/5.

If not for Bella, Annabel and maybe the teacher this game would only be average at best. But because of them I give it 4 stars.

The game is very decent, with lively dialogues. The standard scenario is revealed by non-standard situations. This is very close to 5 stars. I hope the author will have enough strength to maintain the level.

Well after a very slow week on F95 I tried this again. I don't usually redo my reviews but once you get passed the opening the game isn't that bad. The MC changes quite a bit and the story is easier to put up with when he gets in shape etc.

The story is still pretty silly at times though. His teacher and Mom not recognizing him at the club is really out there considering they had sex with him after talking with him for awhile at the club.. Sure he changed his hair and clothes but seriously....

The rest of it is pretty standard harem stuff which so far works pretty good. I personally like the competition between the women. I hope it continues instead of following the usual lesbo harem. The three main women are all the usual types, sexually frustrated and lonely mom, the crazy sister and the bitchy sister. They do eventually develop more depth which again rescues the game from it's beginning.

The base art assets are pretty decent. The sad thing is the expressions really take away from the characters. The expressions are pushed too far and distort the faces in weird ways. It's not a deal breaker but it doesn't do much for the game.

Anyway, I redid my review from 1 star to 3. The game isn't that bad and comes close to being good at times. The first part is still pretty silly I think and gives a bad impression of the game which will get better later.


edit-
after finishing or almost finishing the game I'll leave the rating at 3 out of 5. The ending sucked but I still feel like the models (sans expressions) and most of the game were decent enough. Sometimes it was even more than just the lure of sex which motivated the characters. The ending though ruins any chance of it getting a good rating.

The sex in the club scene with the Mom/Mc and Bella was terrible. Seriously dev I get you want to finish the game but public sex with the MC and both Mom/daughter was really dumb. Even dumber was when Bella started kissing her mom while the MC was banging away. Jeez, the auto-lesbo thing is a perfect way to ruin a harem game. I didn't even finish the game after the Mom starts fondling her daughter saying they should go hook up with the MC and the other sister. Lazy ending and the sudden lesbo action between mom/daughters just vaporizes the story. instead they're just hillbillies screwing anything. Anyway, it's an average game that has it's moments but loses any chance of a decent ending because the dev thinks lesbos are a wild card.

3/5

This was one of those timeless examples of a good underlying effort game that ends up shooting itself in the foot without a fluent english proofreader. The review a couple posts down really nailed it while pointing out that the writing resides in this uncanny state where it really would be better off if it was worse. Which at least for me just made it more off putting then usual.

On top of that the story itself was clearly in a massive rush to get to full sex scene payouts. If like me you prefer gradual buildup and/or a sense of accomplishment with your girls...you might want to skip this one by.

Which is a shame too, since the girls and animated sex scenes themselves are pretty solid. Enough so that it would feel wrong to give this game less then an average rating. It's a decent "download for one fap and probably never care for playing again" pick on that night nothing else popping up on the update looks interesting.

Great game! The renders look good, the story is funny, the dev seems to care for the project and I really like that there are no choices all the time where one needs to be careful not to miss anything. I also like how this VN motivates readers to work on themselves like the MC does.

I thought the game was really good!
In my opinion, the graphics and animations are excellent too. The plot isn't bad either. I'm very curious to know how the game will end, especially with what was said by the developer.

Appealing so far. Great models, nice animations, promising things to come.

I have to take two whole stars off because the English is not great. It's in that uncanny valley state where it might be better if it was worse, if that makes sense. It's just wrong enough to really bother you when you see it.

If you're going to release a game in a language you do not speak fluently, have a proofreader who is fluent in that language.

Love the quality of the renders. Looking forward to further developments in the story. There is enough originality in the story line, that the little twists from other stories using similar tags, make it a legitimate stand alone game, that is worth the time to play through. I feel the attention to detail on this game is up there with the best of them

This is a demo. Not bad, good animations, and everything but lacks content.

Bad:
1. faces contort weirdly sometimes. It seems it's really hard to make the characters look sad, or have any negative emotion. maybe the ai is "ethical"?

2. lack of content.

Boring:
1. the story. I have no clue who is the mc and what does he want.

2. featureless characters with nice bodies.

3. long dialogues, painful to click through.

I played through v0.7FER in two or three hours. Rather than a VN, it might be more accurate to describe this as a kinetic short-story, or demo. The animations are next-level, facial expressions are the best I have seen in any game. It is essentially a light-hearted comedy, and it kept a smile on my face throughout my play.

If you are okay with the incest theme and kinetic structure, I recommend taking the time to experience this game.

This one is a hit or miss. Renders are nice and animations are unique and smooth with unpredictable loops unlike most DAZ premade ones that we so often witness AVNs. It's a harem incest game yet sadly, since it's so far been a kinetic novel, you have no agency on which girls you want to seduce or recruit to your harem fuckfest, you are doing Ash Pokémon gotta fuck them all. This has so far been the only downside that I can't ignore no matter what. The MC starts out as a beta loser type of guy who is having a character development and will probably become dominant in future updates, yet this might seem off putting for some audiences so I'm pointing this one out and my believe in the prospect of it changing for the better so definitely don't avoid this game just for this aspect.

Game version: 0.7FE

The writing reads like written by a child and the plot is boring, redundant.
The MC looks like a undesirable jerk (which might be intentional, whatever).
The animations look stiff.
The women/ their personalities are like 99% of this page: 1 Milf, 1 Slut, 1 Smug, and all are hungy for the MC's oversized c*ck.

Edit:
The game DOES improve with time and wasted potential:
The story stays weak, though.


All in all, there is nothing worth spending time on. Just skip it.

[Review v0.7FE]

At this point, I have to drop this game because the experience is just awful.

First and foremost, I DON'T LIKE kinetic novels, especially regarding the harem genre. I want the usual harem buildup process that requires a bit of choice and consideration (even the simple "accept" or "refuse" option for LIs), so the game already annoys me a bit because of its KN tag.

Second, the story itself is a hot mess. The start of the story is the usual loser description, that's fine for me because it can set up the premise for MC's transformation in the future, but I'm not too fond of excessive anxiety-inducing scenarios, and unfortunately, the first 30 minutes of gameplay is full of them. I almost rage quit this game but still, I toughed it up and the story seems better and better. But then in this update, the need for suspension of disbelief is just OFF THE CHART. You are telling me that by losing only a few pounds, adding a bit of gel on your hair, and wearing some goofy sunglasses, both your teacher (she even calls MC his name in their "first" meeting at the nightclub OMFG!) and your mother (who apparently doesn't recognize her son's voice and face! WOW, talk about mother of the year!) just fuck you instantly because MC's transformation is sooo profound that they can't recognize him anymore! This is the most illogical scenario I've ever seen, and the typical lazy way to skip relationship buildup, which is the exact opposite when it comes to creating good incest and/or harem stories.

To be fair, the render in this game is fine, so credit where credit's due. But for the dev's next game, he/she needs to hire some competent storytellers to set up the story and sort out the relationship buildup, otherwise, I just hope it doesn't end up a hot mess like this game is.

It's a funny game but the plot is absolutely atrocious. Everything is completely stupid. The MC effectively rapes his drunk sister in her sleep and she's just completely fine with it. No mention of her boyfriend, by the way, that she is apparently still with the entire time they are fucking, with the player having no clue if they are a sexually active couple or not. The MC's teacher and mother fuck the MC because apparently, all it takes is a bit of gel in your hair for people that see you every day to not recognize you and your voice. So for you guys that want to fuck your mom, all you have to do is get a nice suit and slick up your hair and she won't have any idea it's you! Easily the most half-assed way to skip relationship build-up I've ever seen. It's Incest porn where you don't know anything about any character before they're all screwing, and for that, I'm not giving it more than 1 star. The romance tag being on this game is laughable. There is no romance here.

3 star game? Sure, that'd be a fair evaluation. A 4.5 star game? Hell no.

Given the effort to create a normal looking protagonist (Not a gigachad, not an ugly bastard), I was thinking some effort would be made to try to keep the dialog and the relationships believable, too. I was so terribly wrong. The VN isn't bad, but it's not anything new, either. If you're not new to these things, you can reliably predict exactly what's going to happen next, which is problematic for a kinetic novel. If you're only here to fap, I'm sure you'll be just fine with this, which is why I'm not going lower than a 3, but if you were looking for anything interesting, this is not it, which is why I'm not going higher than a 3.