VN - Ren'Py - Completed - I Am Her Pet [Final] [Zulyus]

Yeah, this game didn't do it for me sad as it is to say.

Pros: At least, want to keep things constructive and mention a few (somewhat) redeemable qualities about this game.

+ Honey select models were decent enough. Both mom and step-sister models were pleasant to look at. I especially liked the hot springs/sauna scenes between the female characters and the black NTR Chad character .

+ Sissification of the main MC was decent. The MC's sissified model looked pretty decent as well.

+ Sex scenes were good. QOS content was decent, although I felt like it was rushed in a bit tbh.

Cons:

- Horrendous writing and a plethora of typos/grammatical errors scattered throughout the game. Dev needs to do serious proofreading before even considering releasing a stable instance/update of their game. As it stands, even some MTL games that I have played in the past had better and more passable writing.

- No sense of natural and/or corruption plot progression. Events just seem to randomly flow from one plot progression point to the next.

- No real sense of exploring any of the character relationships or any type of build-up between the characters. Characters just felt really shallow and haphazardly thrown into the game with no real fluidity and/or chemistry with one another. Good chemistry between characters can make the scenes more memorable and enticing to see.

- Some of the honey-select models during the sex scenes appeared "whitewashed" and too bright/shiny in appearance which kind of was a bit of a turn-off for me in a sense.

Conclusion:

Decent for a quick playthrough. Don't pay too much attention to the plot/narrative as there essentially is none. But the images and honey-select models are decent enough to an extent. Would probably end off by giving 'I Am Her Pet' a 2.5/5 rating.

terrible writing, pointless choices, lazy cg.

there is not a single redeeming quality about this game, projects like this make me wish this site had some sort of quality control because the amount of garbage renpy games like these is astounding.

Excellent QoS work again. Although it's not exactly realistic, this is a porn game so give it some slack. The writing is pretty bad, like worse than edited MTL but still understandable for the most part. Overall, this is a good game to only fap to and not to take seriously.

I'm torn because the images and situations are pretty hot, but the pacing, characters and dialogue are all over the place.

Also the corruption goes from 0-60, main character is turned into a submissive pet, then just kind of forgotten, porn logic makes taking any situation seriously very hard and the consequences of characters action negligible.

But it's more work than I've ever done on a game so who am I to judge.
Also Mom and Sister NTR just doesn't hit as hard for me, so more points lost.

This is better than some of the other content by this Dev.

So, why do I continue downloading it.

The good:
The sex is hot as are the Honey select models.
The sissification of the MC is kinda interesting to watch and is narratively better than the rest of the story . . . tho please take that praise with a grain of salt. This is by no means in the same category as other typical sissification stories. But, the feminized MC looks just as hot as Jamie in Moe Games story (which is a significantly better story btw) and how he gets under the heal of the "sister" is predictable, but funny.

The bad:
For a game that relies heavily on the images, many are blurry, or poorly constructed, so it's very inconsistent. The main interracial character goes from being light skinned to very black, too.
The overall narrative still sucks. Story is not this Devs strong suit.

The game is also a Kinetic Novel. None of the 3 choices are real. If you choose the wrong one, it's game over, and it's not always clear what the right one is, but its easy to back out.

Neutral:
The game is also odd in that the main NTR content is not aimed at the MC, but his panty waist of a father.

If you download the game, I still suggest just looking at the images and ignoring the written narrative (I did a lot of rushing through pointless dialogue) as I did the Hiroki NTR content, but at least the narrative here is not so insultingly bad.

Consider this a 2.5 star rating. It's ok, but at least worth a download and you can get to the end of the game quickly. I'd give it a more full-throated 3 star rating if there weren't problems with some of the images.