VN - Ren'Py - Abandoned - I Am in Heaven [Ep. 1-3 v0.09] [AdultJunkie]

Firstly I only made it to Christmas in episode two before I gave up so not a full review.

The story is bad and the amnesia makes no sense at all. Some aspects are almost right (ie no alcohol but then he drinks with no problem shortly after) but there is no way he would ever have been released from hospital without a basic HIA that he could never have passed and no way his family could not notice.

The dialogue is even worse and believe it or not the internal monologue somehow manages to somehow be even more cringe worthy. This is not a translation issue but terrible writing.

Sister, mother and MC make Bipolar look like a common cold and swing from one extreme to other in endless loop.

The H content is strange, every girl seems to blow him in first day or two but then suddenly for some crazy reason or another puts the breaks on.

Timing and ordering all out of place, monthly blog payment all over place as are events. Same day dates happen days later while other events meant to take days happen same day.

95% of choices are take the dick option and if no stat on top right of screen scroll back. Better to just use walkthroughs as the choices really dont make sense but either do characters reactions for either of their split personalities either.

The women are cute but the poses are unnatural and lifeless and the animation and H angles are uninspired getting to see limited shots of the women, though if you like looking at cock then you will get a feast of it been center of scene.

Excellent Gameplay. Concept, Storyline, Renders, everything is just perfect and the way I personally love. Hat's off to the developer, Needs slight improvement to the animations but you guys can actually enjoy it without animation because of engaging storyline. Really enjoyed playing and looking forward to see more games like this in future.

Drawing: ok, abit cartoonish. the mother is gorgeous, the women are varied in designs which is good.

story: enjoyable

Sex scenes: Okay, more animation needed and could be better with erotic scenes

Is okay for the moment, little tweaks here and there and could be much better.

Episode 1&2

Great story
Beautiful woman
Beautiful mom and sister
Girlfriend is beautiful
Looking forward to next episodes
I like the idea of the mc getting money from selling photos
Render are good

Well, 5 stars
I don't regret downloading. This game is getting better and better and the girls are very good looking. Lisa's ass is just a little too big for my taste but hey, I like her too x)
I like the teasing tag, and this game is a REALLY good teasing game
I hope this dev gets a lot of support. Don't pay attention to the 1 star trolls.

Love the games, lots of potential to be better, with a few minor criticisms to character growth with the MC and Mom. Love the models, well proportioned , and enjoy the teasing between everyone and that everyone is not just naked. Just wish it was more related to relationship growth instead of just repeating stuff with how characters react to each other specifically the MC and similarly the Mom. I like teasing just wish there was a little more payoff, only slightly more.

Better off waiting until more updates are out for this game
This game is just terrible you tease you're mom and you're sister but thats all
Episode 1 and 2 seems to be only made so later updates story get more content

I liked this game, good improvements between episode 1 and 2, more characters, better renders, story getting better... I'm a bit sad that sister moved from house i hope she'll be back soon she's my favorite character in the game

I have to say I'm loving this game. The plot thickens with each new episode and while some of the English could be improved, it's not bad enough to ruin the story. The renders are quite beautiful of the models in the story flows quite well. If you enjoy a visual novel without all the crappy mini games – then this game is for you.

draws (cg): very good.

story: is ok, it works.

scenes (erotic ones): hot.

gameplay: little to none.

characters: they are ok.

cinclussion: in general, is a bit lame. but the plot is fluid and easy to follow
and we know that you are not playing this game for the script and gameplay.
also another possitive point is that there is a lot of content, wich is really good.


this game deserve your time and money.

Not bad. At first I was going to give it 1-2 stars and delete this crap for good. Because renders from the beginning of the game are just awful compared to current standards, but I forced myself to play it a bit, then a bit more, then a bit more... the renders started to get better, as well as the characters more diverse... to the Episode 2 renders became OK'ish and I submerged into the story - so definitely worth a try. Don't make the beginning of the game scare you. If I were a developer, probably I would rerender some of the first scenes at least, so that people didn't run away from the game instantly they see them.

Good game this far. It is easy to play and has a decent story. The character progression is also fairly quick. Hope for more content soon!
Graphics could be better but it is okay, the story makes up for it.

Ok, I gave this game a 5 star just to increase the rating...It deserves that(4 star is more appropriate)!
When you start from episode1 it looks ok but renders get really better. In the episode2 renders are amazing. There are some animations in episode2 but they are not that great but its fine...
Pros:
Easy story and not boring
Very hot scenes(like really hot!)
Great renders later on.
Great potential
More of a tease but in a good way
Lisa! and mom also
Cons:
Renders are not that polished
Mediocre and rare animations

Overall, its a great game and I highly recommend it. Easily in my top 10!
Can`t wait to see whats next!

My rating of this Game [Ep. 1-2 v0.02]:
Pros:
-Great Renders
-Easy Playing
-get right to the Point
-Nice long Game Play

Cons:
-Not much to do
-Boring Surroundings
-Not much to do
-you know where this will be leading to

Nice game.. No mind control, No Drugs, No "GRINDING", No "Douche-bag Son" . and the teasing is pretty hot. The story is nice too not too bad but not super good , it's average but it's nice. I play this game to fap anyway xD Just started playing it and i am not done with episode 1 yet but it's pretty good start. I like the idea of MC losing his memories. Because it is pretty realistic to have sexual fantasy for your family if you lost your memory. Not that some kind of son that he wants to fuck his mom because she's hot or something like that. I don't like games like that. I would like either the MC lost his memories or Corruption for both, and slowly getting attracted to each other ,but even so, they're in denial because it's forbidden, to make it realistic. It not like those game like "POP" okay my mom is hot , gonna find a way to fuck her, and like Incest is just a normal thing -_-'

Truth is. It's really just cheap porn. Nothing more.
- "The visuals for the characters are alright" Dialogues are poor.
Maybe this guy shouldn't work on his own, andjust help to some more proffesional game developer.
But: remove incest (first time I'm saying this) , improve writing - and this game might be good.

Nice game. Easy to understand how to play. Need to pay attention on how to build relationship with other character in the game. Got a variety path to choose,not stuck at one path only, for example how to choose to treat all npc in the game,bad or good choice is all based on Mc. Not all character must be like other game rendering. Its all up to dev itself.sorry for my english

The following review is based off my personal experience with playing this Game/Visual Novel... I try to be as brutally honest and detailed as I can, and these are my own opinions and thoughts, from one or more play throughs... The version this review is based on is v0.02...


This is just another visual novel/game revolving around the constantly over used Family Sex stuff, but in a different wrapper...

The visuals for the characters are alright, nothing spectacular... You can tell the visuals of the characters were designed to be big breasts, with big butts, and anorexic waists... The backdrops are rather plain for the moment, since every room looks rather bare...

The script is decent, as I didn't run into that many spelling/grammar errors... The plot (what little there really is) revolves around a male protagonist who has amnesia from some sort of head injury (no details given on how it occurred), and wakes up not knowing who he is or who the people are that he runs into... And yet he immediately becomes sexually attracted to all of them... He lives with his mother and sister, and it's hard to tell but there is also a woman who is labeled as "Girlfriend" but not his, which probably makes her his sisters girlfriend...

Most choices the protagonist becomes presented with, involve either playing it cool or doing something sexual... Of course, right off the bat, as usual in these Family Sex themed VN/Games, most of his sexual behavior works out fine with his mother, and she seems to be enjoying most of it, barely giving up a fight most of the time... Not as many options with his sister and nothing with the girlfriend in this current content...

The game play after the very brief start, involves moving around the home checking different rooms out... With most of the current content following a rather linear story format...

Overall, everything about this VN/Game is basically copy cat to stuff we've seen in other VN's involving lots of Family Sex oriented subject matter... Only difference is the amnesia bit... There is practically no story at all, because everything revolves around the erotic scenes and visuals... Not much creative thought or originality put into this one... The sister dresses provocatively, same with the girl friend, and of course the mother flaunts her body as well, doing photo op type poses during most scenes... Everything about this VN/Game screams B-rated porn fest... So will I retry this VN/Game? Most likely not, because it has no story of any depth, or meaning, or substance, or originality (beyond the whole amnesia as an excuse for erotic behavior bit)...