VN Ren'Py I am making a Game and I'd Like feedback and help ^^

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Project TWO!!! is a work in progress dating sim/visual novel/trainer that focuses on different (T)oon (Wo)rlds. The story follows the main character, Bailed, from his first day of inventing the F.U.C.K! (For U Crazy Kinksters!). A gadget which helps him to visit alternate universes and manipulate them to a certain extent after finding and visiting his new Teammates, Dr. Drakken, Mandark, Huntsman, Mr. Crocker, Vlad Masters, Bling-Bling Boy and Ferocia. He finds upgrades which enable him to do more crazy shit!!! In contrast to other games, this game relies heavily on solving quests and I hope to be able to create a game where the Player has a ton of content to explore. Updates generally move the story forward but only after a poll, where you the player can decide which world I should focus on, simulating a serial novel as the story unfolds.

At the moment I have already my first poll on my Patreon for you guys so I can start the Game...In the meantime I am focusing on creating the UI...seeing as how I am new to this whole thing I beg you to help my and take part by commenting and feedbacking^^
Please Visit my Patreon and take part in the Poll ^^ It is free/open for everyone to vote!

The Worlds I want to Focus on are from:
- American Dragon
- Kim Possible
- Dexter's Lab
- Fairy Odd-Parents
- A kind of Magic (Rly underrated if you ask me!)
- Johnny Test
- Danny Phantom

Developer: Bailed
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Censored: No
Version: 0.1
OS: Windows, MAC
Language:English
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I'd say I have no preferences...like everything goes ;) just has to be dirty haha
 
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Is that supposed to be the main character in the third pic? If so I cant get behind that at all. To me its comes of as more of a hooded guy if anything, its not interesting and doesnt have personality. Hooded guys arent a bad things in video games though, they are designed to have the least amount of identity as possible so the player can more easily put themselves in their shoes. This character however is blue, so that's just blown out of the window. If your goal was to make a unique character, maybe go with something that not a blue hooded guy. If you are already going along the line of a fantasy MC why not make him something more interesting? How about a race people don't actually make main characters with such as a Worgen or Minotaur, or if you want to play it safe you could just make a normal human so people can actually insert in the game instead.

Also the Idea of getting "help" from these "teammates" makes it sound like their going to be the ones doing the fucking, not you; if so then I got to walk away now. I couldn't even begin to imagine a voyeur scene with Mr. Crocker or Bling - Bling, that's nauseating.


Yeah still no windows download btw.
 
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RedPillBlues said:
Is that supposed to be the main character in the third pic? If so I cant get behind that at all. To me its comes of as more of a hooded guy if anything, its not interesting and doesnt have personality. Hooded guys arent a bad things in video games though, they are designed to have the least amount of identity as possible so the player can more easily put themselves in their shoes. This character however is blue, so that's just blown out of the window. If your goal was to make a unique character, maybe go with something that not a blue hooded guy. If you are already going along the line of a fantasy MC why not make him something more interesting? How about a race people don't actually make main characters with such as a Worgen or Minotaur, or if you want to play it safe you could just make a normal human so people can actually insert in the game instead.

Also the Idea of getting "help" from these "teammates" makes it sound like their going to be the ones doing the fucking, not you; if so then I got to walk away now. I couldn't even begin to imagine a voyeur scene with Mr. Crocker or Bling - Bling, that's nauseating.


Yeah still no windows download btw.
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He is just the narrator not the main character ^^ and I understand what you mean :p...I thought more along the line that these other people cant get the problem solved so they employ the main character so he defeats or solves their problems haha but I'd like to add some ntr content just so to mess around a bit ^^
 
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i never played an porn game with dexter's mom on it, can't wait to see you in action with her, good luck in your project!
 
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Abed21 said:
I thought more along the line that these other people cant get the problem solved so they employ the main character so he defeats or solves their problems haha but I'd like to add some ntr content just so to mess around a bit ^^
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I can stand NTR in small doses but I don't know how you'll manage to implement it here. I'm assuming were going to be a dude who goes around to universes, helps the villians, then fucks the women (That sounds a 100 times better then what I was thinking of before). If that's the case then the MC really doesn't have a connection with the females in that world, hes more of an invader then anything. Its not really NTR, unless were talking about netori, in that case, yeah give us that shit.
 
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RedPillBlues said:
I can stand NTR in small doses but I don't know how you'll manage to implement it here. I'm assuming were going to be a dude who goes around to universes, helps the villians, then fucks the women (That sounds a 100 times better then what I was thinking of before). If that's the case then the MC really doesn't have a connection with the females in that world, hes more of an invader then anything. Its not really NTR, unless were talking about netori, in that case, yeah give us that shit.
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Haha now you get it :p

but as I hate these stereotype storys for the life of me -.- I want some plot-twists, some view from the other characters to make them have more depth at least I wanna try :p anyway it is my first game... I will just learn from making mistakes along the way ^^but Ihope ypu guys will stick trough with me ^^
 
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