Everything seems to be all right. I do think that these comics will find an audience.
But I also think that the quality of the translation is almost more important, as a lot of people don't like MTL (machine translation).
If you want to be sure, you should find a native English speaker to proofread your translated texts.
And it would be more appealing to westerners if the material wasn't censored, but that's not nearly as important.