[S>Writer] I'm a beginner writer!

[Primem]

Hello,
i'm an beginner writer, i have written demo script i have a wonderful script in my mind for futher, english is not my native but i feel whoever will read my demo version will understand perfectly, here ia my patreon page link if you think i can come to your work messege me over there in comments, i'll get reach towords you very soon thank you.

You must be registered to see the links

 

[ZomBotHD]

Just a friendy heads up, I think the tag you want to use is S>writer, as your offering to provide a service. R>writer is "R"ecruiting a writer.

Good luck.

 

[Count Morado]

Hello,
i'm an beginner writer, i have written demo script i have a wonderful script in my mind for futher, english is not my native but i feel whoever will read my demo version will understand perfectly, here ia my patreon page link if you think i can come to your work messege me over there in comments, i'll get reach towords you very soon thank you.

You must be registered to see the links

What language would you write scripts in if someone brought you on their staff? That's the language you should write in your pitches, treatments, and speculation scripts. There should be few mistakes. Spelling, grammar, structure, punctuation, perspective, and other aspects should be close to perfection. This is the first impression you make on a potential employer. It is not just a job interview, it is a first date.

If English is not your first language, write in your first language. If you write well, translation applications like DEEPL have a better chance of translating your writing clearly.

Spoiler: DEEPL English to Indonesian

You don't have permission to view the spoiler content. Log in or register now.

Spoiler: DEEPL Indonesian to German

You don't have permission to view the spoiler content. Log in or register now.

Spoiler: DEEPL German to Spanish

You don't have permission to view the spoiler content. Log in or register now.

Spoiler: DEEPL Spanish back to English

You don't have permission to view the spoiler content. Log in or register now.

Spoiler: GOOGLE English to English, via Indonesian, German, and Spanish

You don't have permission to view the spoiler content. Log in or register now.

As you can see above, after translating through several languages, the final English result from DEEPL is almost dead-on. The Google result has a few more mistakes. (bold shows differences between the two applications in translations -- red = less acceptable translation than the rest of the document)

I am unaware if the other languages are as correct, however it does satisfy me when the resulting English version is close the my original writing.

 

[Primem]

What language would you write scripts in if someone brought you on their staff? That's the language you should write in your pitches, treatments, and speculation scripts. There should be few mistakes. Spelling, grammar, structure, punctuation, perspective, and other aspects should be close to perfection. This is the first impression you make on a potential employer. It is not just a job interview, it is a first date.

If English is not your first language, write in your first language. If you write well, translation applications like DEEPL have a better chance of translating your writing clearly.

Spoiler: DEEPL English to Indonesian

You don't have permission to view the spoiler content. Log in or register now.

Spoiler: DEEPL Indonesian to German

You don't have permission to view the spoiler content. Log in or register now.

Spoiler: DEEPL German to Spanish

You don't have permission to view the spoiler content. Log in or register now.

Spoiler: DEEPL Spanish back to English

You don't have permission to view the spoiler content. Log in or register now.

Spoiler: GOOGLE English to English, via Indonesian, German, and Spanish

You don't have permission to view the spoiler content. Log in or register now.

As you can see above, after translating through several languages, the final English result from DEEPL is almost dead-on. The Google result has a few more mistakes. (bold shows differences between the two applications in translations -- red = less acceptable translation than the rest of the document)

I am unaware if the other languages are as correct, however it does satisfy me when the resulting English version is close the my original writing.

So that means if i will write with my first language are you gonna collaborate with me? Just asking, i will translate with your Recommendat software let's see what result we're gonna see it, but before that i wanted to ask did you read my script, if yes is it good?

 

[Count Morado]

So that means if i will write with my first language are you gonna collaborate with me? Just asking, i will translate with your Recommendat software let's see what result we're gonna see it, but before that i wanted to ask did you read my script, if yes is it good?

Your story is one that could work in a VN, yes. However, because your sample is in poor shape - spelling, grammar, punctuation, etc - the answer is that your script needs works. That is one reason why I suggest you rewrite everything in your first language and make sure you proofread, revise, and refine until you have a script that is as free of errors as possible. Make a PDF of that version to share. Before uploading it, run your script through a good translation application, review it for any issues that you can fix, and then make a PDF of that version to share. Post both versions for prospective collaborators to compare and evaluate.

Also, know the platform's Terms of Service where you share your script. Patreon is against incest (whether by blood or by inference) and your main character referring to two men as "uncle" in the story could get you removed from the site if you intend to have them be sexual partners of the main character. I know in some cultures "uncle" is used as a term of endearment for non-relative men who are close to a family, but Patreon usually does not choose to view it the same way. Patreon will remove content and a creator if the focus of their endeavors is under the age of eighteen. Your main character states near they end that they have not reached that age.

Best of luck.