VN - Ren'Py - Immoral Stories Rebecca [v1.7 Final] [GGG33]

So far so good! Looking forward to it! Intresting writing with super good looking characters. Great genre and great tags too, I love it, especially with some blackmail setting and landlord fantasies. Keep up the good work!

Lovely renders, and interesting writing. At least there's a bit of gameplay, though it's unclear so far if anything has lasting implications.

Hope there'll be speedy completion, I look forward to the story developing further.

That disclaimer did not prepare me at all for how disgusting some of the male characters would be which are unfortunately unavoidable because the game plays out as a visual novel. A lot of the choices are relatively pointless because it's just a matter of if Rebecca is getting raped hard or if she's reluctantly being corrupted. Some of the guys look worse than goblins, which I honestly think I would have preferred. This is a pass for me.

The only thing this VN needs to be a 5 is animation and some music. The renders are terrific, the girls fantastic and story - pure smut and corruption. Writing is very good and builds the tension and scenes. Be advised, some may find the subject matter disturbing. At its core it is a story of sexual predators manipulating girls. Pure fantasy but may not be for all. Overall, a refreshingly naughty story that doesn't bill itself as anything else - oh, with realistic female body types. If only the Dev could add better animation and some music, but hey beggars can't be choosers.

One of my favorite new corruption games. There is no useless grinding is to the point.

There's enough character backstory to enjoy but the scenes get to the point. I can't wait until the next update.

Damm good, love this kind of corruption story telling and moral degeneration cant wait see see what you have planned for the future updates , Great visuals ,Interesting and different kind of story, Like this kind of corruption and forced outfit changes!

Amazing story and art. This game masterfully combines immersive storytelling with intense, sensual gameplay. Stunning visuals and captivating scenarios create a truly unforgettable experience. A must-play for fans of the genre!

It's very hard to play this game psychologically
The feeling of insecurity and inability to change something is outrageous

Pros:
+ MC's model is great. She is extremely cute girl with an unnaturaly bright blue eyes

Cons:
- illusion of choise. It's like you have choises: "Yes" and "No, but pretend like Yes"
- rape, rape everywhere. It's psychologically hard to play if you can't say no to any rapist, even to the bum on the street
- very limited range of potential LIs and they are all similar (treacherous old mans)

I can recommend this VN only in case if you are OK with minuses I listed above

A very good corruption game that doesn't shy away from the darker kinks. The quality of the models and the overall production is very high, but I regret the slow transition between images and the nuimber of useless images. It slows down the game and noone wants that. Also, don't expect any serious choice.

great game, but choices would be kinda nice, like same result eventually though, and maybe some pregnancy content or like sluttiness. overall though the game is intriguing well made with good spelling...sorta rare it has decent kinks and the mp is cute and not exaggerated so good work.

If you like slow-burn corruption stories then this is for you, the dialogue and rendering are both great and the story is written well enough to not get in the way of the action. Just to note that it's currently quite a linear game, so if you want lots of paths to explore you're so far out of luck.

This is actually a 3.5 rating, meaning that I feel the game is slightly above average. It certainly has the potential to go higher as it has many good qualities, but it's drawbacks currently outweigh that potential.

The models are fantastic. I also appreciate the semi-believable blackmail and the no-nonsense, get-in-there-and-get-fucked-girl approach the story takes, but there are drawbacks to those that really need improvement.

I can go along with the shop keeper's angle, but the landlord's leverage is not as strong as it's presented and requires a huge buy in to believe that Rebecca and her mother would not go running to the cops as he attempts to strengthen his grip on them while grooming Dee.

The quick and consistant jumps into action are a nice change from those stories that like to set up too elaborate a backstory and too intricate a web of lies and deceit for the trap. That said, this story would certainly benefit from a skosh more set up to allow the reader to build some familarity and empathy for the female trio before they're thrown to the wolves. Perhaps another scene as a happy family and another scene with each of the bad guys, depicting them as someone the gals trust, or at least feel a smidge of trust toward before that trust is broken.

I have three major problems with how the story is told. The first is the dialogue itself. It needs a better translation from whatever the original language was. There are too many nonsensical statements that yank me out of the story and require me to do my own translation or interpretation to try to discern what was actually meant.

Second, there are far too many scenes of the players thinking or making miniscule changes of facial expression in between the dialogue. The use of Rebecca's eyes is great at times as it shows her emotions, but I'll address that more in the follwing point. For now, I can figure out what each person's mood is by following the dialogue. Rendering time could be cut dramatically if the Dev stopped trying to have his actors emote through miniscule facial expressions. Also, for that matter, there are far to many unique angles rendered that require me to try to figure out exactly what body part is beng shown here and what odd angle is it being shown from. Take these out, they detract from the story rather than add to it, which I know is the intent.

Thirdly, there are uncountable scenes of the narrator describing the player's reactions or emotions that 100% DO NOT match the scene that is being shown. There seems to be no effort at coordination between the narrative and the visuals. Rebecca is often described as being overwhelmed or smiling, and the scene shows her face with a blank expression, as if she's laying in bed, daydreaming about potato farming or something. Use her lusty/doubtful/ nervous eyes here at the veryleast rather than putting up that blank, blue-eyed stare into space with a flat facial expression. It's so hard to immerse into those moments when she seems to be zoning out.

All in all, I like the artwork but the story telling really needs to be polished to the point that it can keep up with the parts that are actually beautiful.

I add the following and keep the rating the same:

This is one of those reviews where I really like the story and want to give it higher marks, but can’t because of some notable drawbacks that really limit my ability to buy into what’s taking place. I would be more than happy to raise my rating if the Dev were to address these issues, but I don’t hold out hope for that at this point in the game.

Here’s my thoughts, Good, Bad, and Indifferent. We’ll take them in reverse order.

Indifferent:

The storyline is a bit farfetched, but, as with any story, if one buys in early to the stretch of a few simple propositions, the flow makes sense.

There’s been some fuss about the “porn logic” used in the story and how some of the scenes unfold in an unrealistic fashion. My response to that is simply that every story, especially those with a visual aspect to them, asks you to suspend your understanding of reality is some fashion or another. The question is, how much and how soon can you do that? Star Wars, Marvel, Mrs. Doubtfire, Jurassic Park, all ask the viewer to “come along for the ride.” I’m willing to get in the car on this one.

Bad:

That said, there are some aspects of the story that make it difficult to stay engaged, even when I really want to. The most challenging of these is Rebecca’s Botox face that lacks any expression close to the emotions the narrative say she’s experiencing. It’s clear that the Dev loves her eyes and puts a lot of time and effort into trying to make them expressive, but in doing so, often completely forgets that her face and body will also be reacting to pleasure, pain, and unbridled lust.

I understand that she’s dealing with indecision in many of the scenes, but indecision involves an emotional struggle that would show itself on one’s visage much more so than the blank, unchanging stare that seems frozen on her face through so much of the story. She needs to emote and contort so the reader can follow along and feel the drama with her. Right now many of the scenes depict a very beautiful, curvaceous, board being hammered on by old horny men.

Also, I understand that the Dev has the prerogative to tell the story the way he wants but, the believability goes down the tubes when the synchronicity of submissive nature of this family of females being simultaneously discovered by two horny old bastards who are into only anal and oral depravities is a bit beyond the pale. The fact that neither of them has even grazed their cocks over the pussies of any of the 4 gals being used here is disappointing to say the least.

In fact, this ties in with the Botox face issue in that, it reveals the Dev’s inability to conceive of and depict true female arousal. It’s almost as if there is no concept of a woman’s desire for clitoral stimulation. It’s mentioned in passing, but it’s only “in passing,” and never as the center of focus one knows that it becomes in the process of female arousal. I’ve seen this happen in other VNs where the Dev is a male thinking only of getting the guy off.

Good:

For the most part, the models and characters are incredible. The story draws you in visually and holds you captive. While there are limitations, (described above) the beauty of the females, contrast with the repulsiveness of the males in a way that stir the emotions and draw the reader into the dilemma and the debauchery that is afoot.

Once a person “buys in” to the plot and is willing to follow along, the story takes some beautifully disgraceful and scurrilous turns. This is a good dirty story that could benefit from the Dev putting a little more effort into depicting the contradictory emotions and sensations he’s pushing on and into his victims.

This game has everything i am looking into a corruption game. I am enjoying how the main char's whole family is going down the corruption path and i can't wait for the future updates and how the story evolves.

This review is based off Episode 7 and the tardy state of this game.

TLDR; it's not worth supporting this dev who is clearly in it for milking the game and shallow updates and terribly lazy work ethics.

Keeping the developer aside for a moment, let's talk about the game first. ISR doesn't offer anything out of the ordinary... It's a KVN with zero meaningful choices and an illusion of control over her actions. No matter what choices you pick in game, the other party will always do what they were going to do anyway. Picking defiant choices has no effect over submissive ones, the end result is always the same image with minor variation to make it look like you had an effect with that choice.

The most brazen example is the encounter with the Homeless man. You can choose to apologize or run away, but guess what happens? both events lead to Rebecca blowing the homeless man with the exact same images with some variation in texts. This pattern is repeated in literally every single choice you make.

The plot moves at a rapid pace and there is no deep storytelling to look for here. The game starts with Rebecca who is supposed to be a young and innocent Schoolgirl and yet her appearance looks like she's in her 20s. Despite having a protected childhood, her first instinct is to steal a dress from a store which leads to all the events that come. I mean sure, it's a porn game that needs a plot, but such shallow and cookie cutter story is prevalent throughout the game so shut off your brain while you play this one.

All I can say is, Fatherless behavior.

Lastly, about the developer, the dev used to be hardworking and released updates every 2-3 months back in 2020-21. He had a small but loyal following on Patreon and initially released Russian-only versions of the game. However, after transitioning to SubscribeStar and finding an international audience and gullible supporters that pay him every month, sadly he has gotten greedy and lazy... as is with most adult devs.

Adult games industry lacks accountability. The dev kept delaying every single month since September 2023 and he still wasn't able to complete one single event in February 2024, let alone all three of them. He has plenty of excuses on the ready and Episode 7 is the clearest example of a lazy and sloppy update. It is the shortest, uneventful, and hardly a bunch of images that can be called an entire "episode".

Another example is the dev opening a poll for 10 days only to collect "data" whether his supporters want an incomplete episode 7 now or a fuller version in the future. Five entire months had passed since episode 6 and yet he wasted another ten entire days of not working on the game and waiting for the results of the poll. If this doesn't showcase his terrible work ethics, I don't know what will.

Weeell.. this is very beautiful and hot!
In models, scenes, clothes, shoes, locations.
no pig breasts or asses
This author has taste!
We can only hope that all this difficult-to-create beauty will not slow down the dynamics of updates,
or will not be abandoned like a previous project

Oh damn, didn't expect this game to be so good - but it is! It doesn't have as much 'choice' as some others, but that also means its non-grindy. And there is just enough choice that you're not sitting there reading a story with pictures. Mind you, most of the choices are more like 'choose the flavor of the next scene', but the flavors are different enough that its fun choosing.

The art is hot (not A-tier post-production, but does the job). Text gets deliciously vulgar. Some scenes get quite dark. I have a pet peeve about games where something terrible happens to a character and they go 'oh no! noooo- oh wait, somehow against all sense and biology... I like it! love it! I'm addicted now!'. This game doesn't do that (much, its reasonable when it happens). Bad stuff is bad and feels bad. Sex is nice and dirty, without being gonzo.

Plot wise I'll say its straightforward. Nice girl, people start blackmailing her into lewd stuff. The twist is that her mom is poor so she discovers the mom is also doing lewd stuff, and that both are (at least along one of the branches) pretty unhappy with what's happening. There you go. Now ignore that and just play it, its worth it and quick.

For once I don't want to create a very long review. The reason is that, well, I didn't play this game for real, I simply skipped through it.

The reason I did so is not because I wasn't interested, but I quickly had my doubts on whether this was a flashy novel or if it had choices. Turns out the game had like 7 choices in total through the entire game.

The things I did see were very pretty, and if what you want is to read a nice story and look at the visuals without any real interaction, then this game will definitely suit your needs.

Not so much if you want choices and a branching story.

Meaningful choices allows you to impact the story and character development, and that is what I find interesting and keeps me engaged. This game did not provide that, and therefore it was a poor experience for me.

This game is one of the hottest I've played. Perfect for corruption lovers, the corruption is believable and accurate. The sex scenes are long and unique. The whole story make sense and you feel like in a different realm. These feelings are a sign we came across a great game. Cant wait for next update!!!

very nice. lots of potential. very pretty MC, decent renders. i like the premise. forced and blackmailed sex of multiple women. interracial element. (big black thug trope)

sexual harassment and corruption

Immoral Stories Rebecca [v1.5.0 Ep. 05] Rating: 2.5*

Pros:
Decent Renders
Decent MC Model
Story/premise
good writing

Neutral:
Some lines could be written better like the scene where the MC is on the phone with her Mom, and she calls her mother.
No sound


Cons:
Choices don´t matter/No consequences
No animations
Sex Scenes are too short and boring
pacing is way too fast
World feels small

Conclusion:
I like this game, but it´s sad to think what could’ve been, if this wasn´t just a VN and had animations in it.
The Story and the writing is pretty good, although the pacing is a bit too fast for my liking, especially at the beginning of the game.
A slower introduction to her corruption and all the pervs could’ve been much better.
Choices don´t matter and it would have added so much more to the game if these choices had consequences.
The MC and her sister look pretty decent, while the other look kinda meh, but that´s not necessarily important if the focus keeps being on the MC.
There are a few scenes like the one with the homeless guy that add nothing to the game.
It´s a blackmail/corruption/rape game so it might not be a game for everyone and it´s funny that reviewers bitch about that, when they are clear as day to see in the tags.
So, the game looks promising, but it wasted a lot of potential for being too basic and having problems here and there like not building a coherent story, short scenes and not having animations, which is a shame, so I can´t give this game more than 3*.

Ideas:
The story pretty much writes itself at this point.
She could be blackmailed by virtually everyone and i´m not sure if there was a tease already of what is to come, like the Teacher looking at Beccas panties.
Maybe blackmail her to go pantyless or become a school whore.
Modeling for an agency could be not far away from shooting softcore/hardcore porn and, or getting whored out by the pervs.
More scenes in public like in the bus where she could be molested.
It would also be interesting if you could change her looks the more this game progresses.
Have her work side jobs to earn money.
There´s a lot that could be done in the future and fetishes that could be added, but it´s important to keep the pacing just right.

Update: Version 1.7.0 Ep.07
I have changed my Rating of 3* to 2* and the reasons for that are pretty simple.
I played the last version (1.60 Ep.06) around September of last year and Episode 7 released close to 7 months later, and wow, what a disappointment.
The Episode is very short and the story continues to not make much sense.
Games like these are the reason why I wouldn't spend a single penny supporting Devs, which is a shame, because there are Devs out there who wouldn't sink that low as this Dev to milk their Community for half a year and underdeliver significantly.
Don't waste your time and money with this game.