VN - Ren'Py - Abandoned - In Goddesses Service [Ep.1-R1] [Bluechip Entertainment]

It's probably more a 3. I really shouldn't give it a 4. I should write reviews for everyone.
LoL I'm not though. The extra star is for me. I like women with big tits. Desi women can have big tits that are great. They're still rare in adult games which so often share models.
I don't think they're great here, I only think they're good (some of those tits are silly perky for desi women with breasts that large, little sag and hang wouldn't hurt the realism). I don't think the game is good, I think it's average. BUT...
It's doing something that's not unique but certainly rare and damn it, a game deserves an extra star when it's doing something few others among dozens and dozens of games are!!!
I wish this dev only the best of luck and as it adds more content and development time I hope it just keeps getting better.

Indian models are fantastic. everything about the game is good. It will probably be one of the best games if writing and animations are improved. I really like anjali in the game. bhabhi is also so fucking hot. I wonder how many characters will we be able romance as we progress into the story.

The first Indian MC in a game. Nice to see something new here. The plot is interesting, I little bit more choices would be nice. The pictures are beautiful, not too perfect, but still very sexy. I am looking forward to play more updates of this game. I give it for now 5 of 5 stars.

Its looking pretty good so far from where I stand. Great models, solid renders, and a fun dynamic between the characters drive the smut. All winners for me. Excited to see where this will be headed once it has a more reasonable amount of content

Let me keep this simple/ This game is like a dynamite just waiting to be lighted..It has everything required to go real big.
For starters , a change in characters models ( indian origin) is always welcome. Feels refreshing after playing the same characters again & again in most other games.
Secondly, I have to say..The Dev is really skilled with the renders. They are top notch and well done
The prologue, as of now does't have any animations. but based on the Dev's skill of renders and posing, I'd assume he'd be fairly good.
The overall story plot is good..( the sister in law's visit to MC room at night and the subsequent action caught me by surprise )

Now for the not so good part
First and foremost .. The writing is incomplete, and words eaten out of the sentences. missing comma's, fullstop's etc. The general dialogue is okay but the overall english suffers probably because its not his first language. I suggest the dev should get the writing analysed with someone who's really fluent in english.
Secondly, the dialogues are amatuer-ish. Kinda feels like written by a horny teenager and taken out straight from porn videos. not the way adults have convo's.
Thirdly, the characters ( mostly the sister in law) looks fake. When I read the description, I thought the characters would have a different personality.. Kinda conservative, shy etc, more in terms with the Indian culture, which is not the case. You could change the skin color to fair and give her a western name and that'd be another one of those generic VN's.

A game with huge potential but flawed in the writing department. 4 stars because of the uniqueness, renders and future potential.

Game is working towards a really good story,
Simple and straightforward, - it could use animations in the future, and only problem which may be there, is just phrasing of words. Images renders are good and of high quality.

Loved it !!! Please stay true to this game and you will receive in Ample !! XD

Looks like a great game. You can increase a little thickness in women, both up and down and it may attract more people. But overall, a great start !

As a dev myself I'd like to pre-face this review with what I think is important to say that I'm just giving my honest opinions and that I wish every Dev well because I know from first hand experience how hard it is to develop a game and if nothing else, devs deserve praise for the effort they put into their games. Also, I believe honest reviews HELP the game or future games get better. That being said, here's my review.

The game is, okay. I guess? The story is pretty simplistic so far. It's not very original other than the novelty of having the characters be Indian. As it's just a prologue there is no depth to the story and characters seem one dimensional. There's no choices either, but I suppose it will come. No animations to be found either. The grammar and spelling is horrific, it would do well to have a proper editor give it a read and correct the bad English. At times it is just really really cringe worthy and turns you off from getting into the story. I would have given this 1 star if it was not for the quality of the renders. They are top notch and I like the novelty of the Indian characters which add something unique to it and they look good. But overall, if it can bring depth to the characters, add some animations and have an interesting enough story (And by god fix the English) This game would probably be in the top tier games list. I hope it will be! Good luck to the devs!

Looks like the developer is Indian or is someone with good understanding of Indian Culture. While the noun uses and pronoun uses are fine, the script has so many grammar errors and typos. The visuals are good though and if the dev makes some improvements and doesn't abandon the project in next couple of months, this site may have a good Indian Adult Game in its hands.

Not much content yet, worth watching for upcoming updates.

Although it is a prologue, this game has really good renders, MC is hung, storyline is somehow same as the similar genre but the fact that how it can lead is suprising, thus I support the content creator, easily 5 stars, keep the good work coming!