Ren'Py - Innocence or Money [S2 E3] [MarcialART]

Extremely bad writing.

It starts out by informing us in a lengthy and dragged out way that the MC's parents are dead, she was raised by her uncle, she has a lover, a sister, lives in a small town and dreams of moving to the city.
This could have been done in several lines while she's in a bus going to the city (or later as a small flashback) but the author takes several long minutes to give us this info dump that is not even relevant for the game at that point.

All of the text and dialogue is so unnatural and robotic (in a bad way) that one should work really hard to make it this bad. I still forced myself to play for several hours reading every line but unfortunately it didn't get any better. I started skipping after that but found out that the poorly done animations can't even be skipped.

Then there are unnecessary clicks like taking a shower and going to your bedroom every day to sleep (days are super short so you have to click on the stairs/your room/bed/"sleep till tomorrow" steps pretty often.

I only give this 2 stars instead of 1 because it at least revolves around a fetish that I like (cheating female) though that too is done extremely poorly because of the out of place and dragged out or robotic dialogues and super childish so called "inner thoughts".

Not recommended for anyone unless one is into cheating tag, has exhausted all other games and wants to play whatever is left for science purposes.

Decent renders and Ok writing. However... well....

First off, its grindy as fuck. Find the job order that gets you the most money (typically working the Cafe from morning till evening, until the third option is unlocked for Fred, then do that), and repeat until bored. Unless you get a quest to do something different. Assuming you have the money. And its the right time of day.

Don't buy the gym membership. For one thing, at the start, you need to save up for a phone, because you can't progress the gym events until you do, so if you dump $600 on the membership you'll have to grind even longer to get there. For 2, it would take 40 visits to break even and, as there is no reason to go to the gym when not required for a quest, there's no reason to ever go to the gym that many times.

Which leads us to our next issue.


Game is basically: Check your quest log, if you can currently go do the thing it tells you to do, do it. Otherwise, go make some money.

That's it. That's the game. :|

Also, later on the creator gets addicted to using unskippable rotate animation shots for no reason.

And there isn't even much sex in the game. I appreciate a slow boil, but it takes 2 hours of play, skipping most of the dialogue, to reach the current end of content (Version 0.0.6) and the most the MC has done is give a couple blowjobs.

Just... not really a stand out in any regard (other than an attractive MC). Not horrible, but not really good either.

I really like the model, she is just like my type, quite slim, with nice big tits, not overly exageratted!
And even if I don't really like sandboxes/rpgs this game has a quest system that works, it's not much of a grind and the mechanics are quite easy.
Animations would range in the 3~4 star rating, but it is improving over the updates, there are alot of POV's which can add a bit of depth.
Regarding the story it's quite entertaining, although I don't care much about the sister plot, my focus is entirely on Jennifer

Great game! The female character is really pretty and it checked almost most of the boxes! Keep giving updates quickly! Although its a bit grindy buy thats not a huge dealbreaker. Good concept and great renders to follow throughout the game.

Finally some good porn game with female protagonist. Graphics are very good, story is more than good. You have romantic relationship with boyfriend, old dirty pervs that are blackmailing beautiful girls, horny milfs, some lesbian routes... Hope that this game will be developed in future.

Oh my, what a cute little gem.

Decent corruption gameplay, good looking models and fun story to play through.

Should dial down on animation durations (introductions, spinning around character to show them off etc.). There's no reason for character model to be displayed in unskippable 30s long animation sequence.

This game was fantastic one of the best games I have ever played. I was very sad when it ended. They pace it great she turns into a whore very slowly but not too slowly. Its believable. The scenes are great with good writing, animations, and sound effects. The characters are attractive especially the main char and her sister (need more with her lol).

Just all in all a great game highly recommended. Cant wait for more

Nice premise, Art is very good. Takes it's time which can be frustrating at times. There's some grinding required for money but I've seen worse.
Would advise to give this a chance. Hopefully more updates will come frequently...

quite possibly one of the best games on here and its only just began.
Models are great, story is good, corruption elements on point. Can't wait to see the rest.
Would highly recommend this game to anyone and will be keeping up with development

This has to be one of my new fav female prog games.
Nice animations and god angles on them and the story is good it's not only about the female prog also her sister and many other chars.

Its a really, really good game lots of fun and good lewd scenes, so it's an easy 5 star rating from me

Quite a decent game but while there is quite a lot of content, there is not much progress or action, still a decent game with only one major issue: panning scenes are unskippable, long, boring and they make you skip whatever comes after them if you try to skip them or text right before them.
I would rate it 4/5 because the main theme is right up my alley, but this game is a year in development and there is only a single oral sex scene with the MC and 2 and a half sex scenes with side characters so far (half because you can see only half of the scene).

Overall 3/5: -1 star for not much action, -0.5 star for panning scenes and -0.5 star for the amount of porn.

Edit: played it again at v0.0.8, the stupidly long intro before every single scene (sex scene or gym scene) is such a kick in the nuts that I wouldn't recommend anyone touch this garbage.

Oh my. Jennifer. I really like this game. The sandbox is a little much but - since we're corrupting Jennifer - I can appreciate the grind. There's good content unlocked at different steps of the game. The latest update (0.04) was very good, imho. Renders are great and the animation is very good. Jennifer is... awesome! I love the teasing and the corruption by the landlord's son. This is not a codeword for incest,either, but now that I think about it... is it ripe for an ipatch?

I have been a Patreon in the recent past and probably will again. I hope that MarcialART makes updates more regularly or at least on some sort of schedule. Please keep up the great work!

TLDR:
Good: JENNIFER, some grind, great renders, very good animation, good teasing, progressive corruption.
Bad: bordering too much grind, irregular updates.

This is one of those games that might not have the best renders or art, but that makes it up with fantastic story and gameplay. Even though there is a tiny bit of grind, UI makes it simple and quick and the story progresses quickly.

Most of all, the buildup to corruption is really well done here and I am definitely looking forward for further releases from this game.

***Review for v.0.0.4***

Personally I'm very into any kind of female protagonist game. If it also involves corruption paths, character building and evolution and kinky stuff, then it hits my sweet spot.

IoM - at least so far - is a very brilliant "gem" among all FMC games in this forum. Not only there are lots of impactful options, decision reasonability and very well-built inner thoughts according to the corruption level, but also the game is an eye-candy with fantastic animations PLUS relevant sounds and moaning.

The gameplay is straightforward and the choices actually make sense.

Also (VERY IMPORTANT) the corruption pace is EXACTLY as it should be: not a character transforming into a cock-frenzy bitch that goes wild after 1-2 gropings, nor a blue balling experience that goes on for years (YOU KNOW THE GAME I REFER TO )

If you like female corruption and you want your game to be in a very high level in terms of graphics and animations, then you definitely should play it.

I'm taking into consideration to support the dev in Patreon. The only drawback is that his updates are not on a regular basis.

Great game with nice story plot. Also not grindy at all as each place has mini events that take place making it very immersive. Also imma need more Jessica content like ASAP. However, overall the flow and the events not only revolving around Jennifer is a major plus as I get to see other girls also experience "fun".

My experience.

This is a game where you (female) break out and seek a job in the big city.
You have no idea about life and the real world.
And so, you get a job...

So it starts.

The game presents itself in a nice way. Normally i do not like sandbox really, but this level of sandbox is acceptable to me.
Its quite easy to navigate through you daily life with a mouse click.

The game wants you to make decision about being moral or naughty.
All jobs have some form of naught level and though, you, are more or less oblivious of it, you perform your duty.

My personal favorite job was the coffee.
Its degrading on a slow level. You also have moral choice to make in this job which will affect your progress and income.

Characters are nice. No one looks too ugly, though i think they could. So its a happy life.
Animations are nice.
The overall vibe of the game good.
I consider it to be one of the games i really like.
The story is of course not done.

What i would like to see, is the protagonist to have some resistance. But it seem to strive for corrupting the player for a joyful experience where she will like what she does.
She does have doubts but she also wants a slice of the pie of success.

Its a nice game overall and i actually like to fire it up sometimes.

There is also a choice to switch protagonists for awhile. You may want to try that if you want to see some sex scenes.

Still my favorite job has to be the coffee shop. I hope this will expanded.
There is also a choice about her family it seems, though at this stage its too early to say where that could go.

Try it out and make your own judgment.

Review for v0.8
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My opinion is simple for the v8 update - this is a pretty INCONSISTENT game in terms of CORRUPTION PROGRESSION.

The developer could have delivered a sex scene with a willing Jennifer, but she could have begged to be fucked but begged for a condom. Now we get groping, kissing, groping, kissing ... and then suddenly BOOM a fucking creampie where the female is begging for it. To fast and unrealistic. If your audience dislikes condoms, do a body shot where Jennifer is begging not to be cummed inside, then progress to her not carring anymore.

This would be kind of fine, but what is more disappointing is that I think that this inability for gradual corruption is why the developer needs to add subplots and more characters. He does not know how to gradually increase tension and corruption with the main character, so he has to provide filler with other characters and resort to "her mind goes blank" bullshit when it's time for something big to happen.

At least there are elements of NTR in the game, which gives it some spice.

Review as of V0.3
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Love the game for the beautiful girl and reasonable pace - not too fast, not too slow. Clothing and figure of the MC are very much to my liking (the more heals and short skirts/dresses the better). Definitely a must try.

Really great art.
Skipped some text, especially during gym scenes.
Love the story so far.
Really like the receptionist at the hotel.
Would be good to see more outfit corruption at the cafe.
No noticeable bugs.

This game has a slow build-up to increase anticipation, great character models, and animations. What's not to enjoy? Obviously, it is early in the development phase but I am certainly curious to see how they continue to build out the characters and story.

The game its about a female that has a convervative boyfriend and leaves her hometown to pursue her ambitious dreams. She is plot conveniently naive and soon horny.
It has a very exposion-y introduction where the wirter explains the setting and the things to come.
Its a sandbox type, with some draggy navigation. Its not the mdoern kind with easy shortcuts, but its not the worst either cause you can still go from your room to the map.

The GOOD:
Decent ish scenes
Kind of hot FemaleMC
Averag-y graphics, and lopped animations

The BAD
Grindy, considering the amount of actual menaingful events.
Stupid and passive female MC whose only decisions are to allow or not allow, but never to do or not to do no matter how horny she is. Completely reactive and lacking agency.

Perv NPCs with perv thoughts, so its a 150% tropy the same thing over and over again, you played this already 100 times.
A whole 15 or so events in the gym with nothing going on besides some side characters doing stuff, that allows you to unlock massaging work earning way less than before but once again, with nothing going on for like another 5 days until the end of update.

Another set of events at the hotel with nothing going on besides draggy unskippable character introduction clips and more pervy ncps doing sex release and having pervy thoughts.

Every npc has like 20% of his dialogue worth of pervy thoughts and many of them follow a repeated formula.

Veredict:
Needs some time to populate the gamewith events, tune the navigation and focus on the Main character's events instead of filler meaningless events.
Hope for a better future...