VN Ren'Py Innocent Perversion (HS2, Incest) [Development Thread]

[Vitriks]

1. The goal, at least initially, is to work up the courage to ask the girl he likes out. But things go south on that front so his goals end up changing by the start of episode 2.
2. Yeah, you're missing the dialogue and subtext of what's going on in those so they're not going to make sense in a vacuum. Also, I don't know what classic expressions are. Unless you mean happy/mad/sad/etc, but in this instance, those aren't the right emotions that should be displayed in those specific renders either.
3. This visual novel should feel pretty grounded, so it's very limited on porn logic. It's not quite a slow burn either; I'm not looking to inject some bigger storyline to pad out the time. It's purely a visual novel aimed at exploring their familial relationships as it gets more and more incestuous. Everyone has their own desires and problems, some involving the protagonist, others don't, but he finds a way (or gets found) to be the solution to their problems and a lot of those are sexual in nature. As for interesting events packed with emotions, I think you'll be surprised at how deep this VN ends up being. I don't have a lot of time to get into the intricacies of it all, especially because it'll spoil everything, so unfortunately I'll just say wait and see when it comes to this point.
4. I'm well aware of storytelling 101. I would say this is definitely not a VN for NTR fans, except if you're into netori. The whole premise of the story is that blood is thicker than water and having some handsome dude with a big cock walk in and steal all the girls in the family completely undermines the loyalty that family should have for one another.

Finally, unfortunately, I'm not able to change him at this point . I had to change him a few times with help to make sure he's passable and if this means he looks a little bit crackhead, I'll take it. I'm about 500 renders deep so I'm going to refrain from making any changes to any of the main characters. I might change a little for future episodes, but who knows. Also, I'll show off some more renders of him and see if he's still crackhead, but I'm not going to change him either way.

1. If you are not aiming for the story, then you need to pack your game with a lot of foreplay and slow corruption animated scenes. Also don't forget about teasing Without slow corruption it will be boring and straightforward.
2. Expressions are something that can be improved later on.
3. Characters in your game are horny and want intimacy without any reasonable excuses. That's typical porn logic.
4. If you keep MC week it would be a turn off for vanilla lovers, and NTR fans won't enjoy this character because there is no NTR.

1. I love good story, but good story game tend to has few and spare sex scenes. And take Solvalley School for example, does that game even has a main story plot, no, it's a ridiculous journey to have sex with one girl after the next, does it good ? Depend on you but does it successful ? Absolutely. I had read the post on his subscribestar, he said he don't want any thing like mafia, or supernatural, world saving stuff, and "Buying PC or earn for a car" won't make it better imo. Also the whole Sinful Summer plot is just a family gradually turn more pervert and bang each other, so those plot actually work
4. The dev already said no ntr, so I don't understand gray area mean ???

Like I said, we have a really successful game like Confined with Goddesses. There is no story, but it's slow burn corruption with lots of good animation. And a lot of people still complain about writing and story.

 

[Gilber_bestram@176]

After reading of what you has written (that's a lot of them, and I can see you has a very clear picture of what you do), I think you are really serious about making a game, at least putting on the first release. So good luck to you. I really look forward to the first update