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ashikabi_98
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My opinion/thoughts on Chapter 2
I think the direction is right, I loved it as much as Chapter 1. The only thing I didn't like (this is my personal opinion) about MC is that he realizes that he enjoyed thrill of it too quick, he questions himself to less and reach that conclusion of being aroused by it too quick, tho kudos for playing the part where the excuse to deny that he enjoys it that it's because her girlfriend is in a sexy attire. During the chat between MC and the black friend that fucked the blue haired girl (Sorry for not remembering his name) I was hoping MC would say things like "I would love to see her like that with me" rather than nothing cause it seems like we are hinting that he is a cuck to the black friend. Maybe that's intended? For a part of the friends involvement in later scenes? I think that's it related to Chapter 2. I enjoyed it overall.
I know Chapter 3 is done and out and there's nothing that can change that so here's just like "I wish this happened, etc"
- The way Nath was speaking and expressing she cares so much about the MC and loves him a lot, I hope she also is in a confusion of enjoying being watched, being complimented in the comments. I hope her character stays the way and it's a slow break for her in every single point of this "corruption". Would impact the breaking/corrupt process even more, seeing Nath have always cared about MC's feelings even after the shoot she did, she was willing to stop for MC cause she was worried about MC. I bet she would be the type that say MC is enough if MC asked if he was ever enough on bed, and seeing her slowly break for other man and keep on preaching to herself only her BF can make her feel special just to succumb to pleasure, especially the black friend, that would be a gut punch of that jealousy, pain & arousal the MC is feeling.
Very excited for Chapter 3 release, great job on Chapter 2. And you are right, it was shorter but you mentioning it being short helps a lot, so keep doing that if the chapter is shorter than usual.
I think the direction is right, I loved it as much as Chapter 1. The only thing I didn't like (this is my personal opinion) about MC is that he realizes that he enjoyed thrill of it too quick, he questions himself to less and reach that conclusion of being aroused by it too quick, tho kudos for playing the part where the excuse to deny that he enjoys it that it's because her girlfriend is in a sexy attire. During the chat between MC and the black friend that fucked the blue haired girl (Sorry for not remembering his name) I was hoping MC would say things like "I would love to see her like that with me" rather than nothing cause it seems like we are hinting that he is a cuck to the black friend. Maybe that's intended? For a part of the friends involvement in later scenes? I think that's it related to Chapter 2. I enjoyed it overall.
I know Chapter 3 is done and out and there's nothing that can change that so here's just like "I wish this happened, etc"
- The way Nath was speaking and expressing she cares so much about the MC and loves him a lot, I hope she also is in a confusion of enjoying being watched, being complimented in the comments. I hope her character stays the way and it's a slow break for her in every single point of this "corruption". Would impact the breaking/corrupt process even more, seeing Nath have always cared about MC's feelings even after the shoot she did, she was willing to stop for MC cause she was worried about MC. I bet she would be the type that say MC is enough if MC asked if he was ever enough on bed, and seeing her slowly break for other man and keep on preaching to herself only her BF can make her feel special just to succumb to pleasure, especially the black friend, that would be a gut punch of that jealousy, pain & arousal the MC is feeling.
Very excited for Chapter 3 release, great job on Chapter 2. And you are right, it was shorter but you mentioning it being short helps a lot, so keep doing that if the chapter is shorter than usual.
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