One of the few stories on this site that doesn't make me wanna Ctrl to fast forward. Definitely got me intrigued. Love that the MC is very proactive and isn't just letting the story happen to them. Had very good opportunities to shine light on some characters I was ready to just write off. So heh! Credit to the writer for making properly flawed characters (like Julie and Adam).
Honestly the only detractor is that there isn't a lot of camera angle changes during conversations. Camera keeps bopping back and forth with the same shot over and over. Yeah, it'd call for more renders, but it would make the interactions leagues better with a little more variation and make it even more engaging (I did notice the improvement in chapter 5, so keep it up). In film school they call it the 180 rule (there's tons of tutorials and video essays about if you wanna look it up).
Looking forward to more.
Honestly the only detractor is that there isn't a lot of camera angle changes during conversations. Camera keeps bopping back and forth with the same shot over and over. Yeah, it'd call for more renders, but it would make the interactions leagues better with a little more variation and make it even more engaging (I did notice the improvement in chapter 5, so keep it up). In film school they call it the 180 rule (there's tons of tutorials and video essays about if you wanna look it up).
Looking forward to more.