Ren'Py - Invulnerable [v0.7a] [SwagFire Games]

Awesome buddy, the history is very original,

Hope to see more of your work on int
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Some say the world will end in fire,
Some say in ice.
From what I’ve tasted of desire
I hold with those who favor fire.
But if it had to perish twice,
I think I know enough of hate
To say that for destruction ice
Is also great
And would suffice.

Review v0.7a
The game is mediocre at best.
Anything about it is "okey".
The art looks worse than from the original show.
The story as "alternative universe" had the right idea, but not the right execution.
Not enough built up and sandbox exploration.
Animated scenes are short and have not very appealing.
The only thing that makes the game somehow interesting is that it's a parody to a popular show.

It has the shell of a game that could be ok. But the way it comes together is terrible.
It's a bit of everything, just not done right.

You know i actually like a few of the females from this show, but after playing this i doubt i still do. It just ruins it.

And what's with the focus on side characters if not milking? Don't tell me people play this to have a good time with aquatica girl, or chinese copy poison ivy.

I like sandboxes done well. But this game is why people hate sandboxes. Just wasting your time doing linear things in a sandbox setting.

Worst of all, skipping is broken. Only works sometimes.

I keep seeing positive ratings on this and picking it up again, thinking I must be missing something. But no, not really. As of today (0.7a) this is still amateurish, shallow, and clumsy. The writing and characterization is simplistic, the graphics are forgettable, the mechanics are barely functional, and the sex scenes have all the eroticism of a third-grader on a playground making a circle with one thumb and finger and sticking his other finger through it while he leers at you.

Maybe it will get somewhere worthwhile eventually, but for now, not worth your time.

on paper this game looks decent, but it does not really play all that well.
the character art is only average and the gameplay is just slow click nonsense, the story lacks focus and there are way to many characters for such an early stage
And it also have payed scenes and adds on your screen. I am never going near this one again

The developer introduces new characters and you don't care about them. There's few sex scenes and they are too easily animated. Everything is over repetitive.

Even if it's a parody, it's far from the Invincible story. It's truely one of the poorest dugeon game I have ever played. Don't waste your time with this.

I think this game is pretty good. I love the concept, and much of the artwork is very good - particularly Deborah, Eve and the chick that works at the burger place. I hope more time is devoted to Deborah in particular going forward.

There were a few issues I ran into like:

• the quest help page disappearing after a couple seconds of bringing it up (although that seemed to get better)
• buttons or labels that didn't disappear when they should have
• a few grammar errors, or just awkward dialog

It was fairly repetitive, but I expect that from this type of game. I think my biggest issue was that, even with the quest help screen, it was hard to tell what to do to progress the story as I got further in.
Was I ever supposed to be able to fight that warrior woman to take over the league?

This game has potential, however I still feel like the dev made some poor choices with the design of this game.

There are too many characters, and 1/2 of them are plain and uninteresting (like why did he add the tv-series version of Amber). And for some reason the updates bring little content across all characters at once instead of focusing on 1 or 2 characters per update which makes this game painful to play between updates. The dev also advertises his Patreon in game with logos inside locations which is very immersion breaking and ugly.

The art is pretty good, the writing is not great because of unserious it is but I feel like that's a running theme of this game unfortunately.

I would personally remove all characters that are not from Invincible and replace Amber with the comic version and try to focus on immersion by removing advertisement mid game.

Very good start with a lot of promise. The grammar and spelling need some work and the "gameplay" is nonexistent and purely there to make it take longer, but I could forgive all of that for the art and the premise. The thing right now that is keeping it from being 5 stars is this is a parody game where the vast majority of the content is dedicated to OC women. I can't fathom the decision to have 20% of the content be real characters and the remaining 80% be your fanmade characters. Why even be a parody at that point? Hoping to see more debbie, eve and actual invincible characters in future updates.

yes yes yess

i so much fucking ANTICIPATED this game, bro this is amazing, i fucking love it,

and this is game also so easy to play, love the animation

*please add hardcore and make the conversation longer during sex scenes, add multiple positions

JUST DON'T ABANDON THIS GAME, PLEASE

Pretty good game if you are into rape/domination/slavery. There isn't too much content yet. Writing is alright. It being concise it the best part; You don't need to read mountains of text to understand what's going on.
Also, there's an in-game guide and you can easily cheat if you don't wanna grind. I also like the art. Hopefully the game will get more updates in the future.

I really really like the art, it's done really well, and honestly that's mostly what's important in a porn game.

However, this game has a horrendous main gameplay that involves a lot of clicking and repetitive elements. It's super annoying to have to manually sleep by clicking through 30 menus, and then have to do even more clicking to finish the monotonous quests.

I disagree with most people that every game needs to be a VN, and I do here as well. But, the dev should really consider removing some of the gimmicky sandbox gameplay and have the art shine through instead

[v0.3a]

I like the parody. I like the specific direction the dev chose for the story, basically getting Mark on board with the Viltrumites. I also like the art.

What I don't like at all is the gameplay loop. It's a completely boring and linear trainer grinder loop. You essentially follow the laid out story progression without any freedom, but the entire process is a tedious grind for money, stats, going to school, attending class, and "training" girls one step at a time.

Frankly, it's extremely boring to play through. And each sexual interaction is short and without any build up or a sense of eroticism. Each step relies on the previous steps as a form of build up, but the steps are separate instances and the eroticism/anticipation doesn't carry through. The fact that each individual scene is so basic and ends after like 3 lines of dialogue doesn't help matters.

There are sections of the game where nothing is happening and you gotta grind a stupid burger flipping job. You make like 8 clicks to sleep, wake up, get to the burger place, work, and get out. Repeat 20 times to buy a costume to progress one step for a girl.

I honestly have a very hard time believing anyone can actually like this kind of game design. The point of having a map and "sandbox" environments is to give some degree of freedom to the players to tackle things their own way and/or provide an immersive world that they can explore. What's the point of following a completely on the rails grinder where there is only one place you can go that does anything at any given moment?

Version played: 0.3a

VERY early in the dev cycle, but this is pretty promising. The art is excellent and for a porn game, that is the most important thing.

The story is fine, hopefully its fleshed out a bit later in development.

The biggest issue is the game play loop. It is VERY monotonous. A lot of waking up, doing one thing, and then sleeping again.

The map could use an overhaul, the weird hill thing that's being used right now doesn't look great. I suggest using a map more like the one in Taffy Tales, but that's just my opinion.

Another issue is that theres a LOT of AI art used for backgrounds. In fact, I'm p[retty sure all backgrounds are AI art at this point. (Or art ripped from the show). Hopefully this is just a placeholder to give the artist time to work on the character based art, and theyll come back to it later.

The only other thing to mention is that theres a lot of grammar mistakes. I'm sure that'll be fixed as the game is polished over.

If the developer(s) continue to put work in, this could be very good. For now though, it's just fine.

The art is great, but the gameplay is extremely monotonous. I've never seen a trainer THAT monotonous before. The entire gameplay in this game is just "go to work -> sleep -> repeat 10 times -> see 5 lines of text and 1 picture -> repeat again". Sooooo boring...

Game have good potential.The sex scenes are similar to SHELTER and Stellar Dream so they can be good.It also have gallery so you can revisit scenes with is big plus cause there are some games with dozens of scenes but don't have goddamn simple gallery(but the interface can be updated of course).Why I'm give the 4 star?Well game I played is in version 1.00 and it have problems that I think will be fixed in next updates.The main thing I can think is static faces in dialogs.Like when Mark is upset, happy or worried he have same happy dumb face as always.The next thing I can say the city map can be better.Also I can add suggestion to author if he read to add characters progress bar with multiple endings(cause now it have oly one bar with general progress)like some of them can help you with your goal to enslave planet(not slave ending) or slave ending or simple killed ending.Hope this review helped you.

has a slight bug when you are skipping and go in and out of buildings. Overall good lore that uses inspiration on the Marks of other realities/multiverses, and still adds new and good characters, i hope they add the hq version of amber too (blonde). I read all the Hqs and i therefore completely aprove the storyline, not that it needs to follow close to the lore, but it becomes funny and somehow more rememberable, Atom Eve NEEDS to have a impregnation route, she is the best girl untill here, and i hope mark descends to the dark path too so we can make the cashier pay. The incest is going pretty well, just don't have much of that "weight" as it should have, i know the "pet" view on their side but idk, at least the alcoholic debbie is on the board.

Everything is good, but I found a problem. When I click scene changing button like 'Go to sleep' or 'Back to map' while skipping with Ctrl key. I can't explain in words, just it looks like somethings twisted. If you want to test, click scene changing button while pushing Ctrl key.

I know everyone already said this but ill say it again. The game has a lot of potential, the art is amazing and the story is heading in a great direction. I'm already heavily invested on what may come next. I'm going to hold off on subscribing until the dev launches a few more updates. It happens too often where these types of games get abandoned. The dev said that they are committed to launching an update every 1-2 months. We will see. I think they could easily garner a massive fan base if they continue on this path

I really enjoyed this game, it needs a longer story! For the visual aspect, it does use AI only for the background, the rest like the characters and CG are made by themselves. It's really good, I'm looking forward to the new updates later!