[v0.6 Patreon]
Writing:
⠀⠀⠀Not gonna lie with how the game started I initially thought this was gonna be a parody, but no, this is a genuine harem isekai that follows literally all the tropes of the genre. My main complaints that it's too generic and extremely "safe". The protagonist is isekai'd, immediately gets cheat abilities for no good reason. One of them being able to conjure any magic he can imagine, then right after the opening proceeds to not cast anything other than generic fireball. In the fight with succubus he conjures 3 magic blades that eat all of his mana, even tho he could have cast like a hundred tornadoes for the same mana cost. Besides magic he also looks like a k-pop star, has huge cock and sexual stamina of a Greek god, he might actually be the god of sex with how all the women start acting during the intercourse. This guy also embodies the "knight in shining armour" cliche, he HAS to help every damsel in distress in a 10km radius, otherwise he just won't be fulfilled. He's too selfless and his morals are too perfect. He's simply not an interesting character to follow. The very first villain is fat, ugly, cringe and has micro-penis. Like he just emanates this "I'm but a punching bag for the protagonist so that he gets more bitches" aura. After his embarrassing speech and right before he even does anything to the girl he conveniently gets interrupted and bullied by the MC. The girl even reassures the MC that the bad guy in fact did not manage to even touch her, to avoid triggering his insecurities. All female characters are like walking fleshlights to me. The strong feelings that they develop towards protagonist after knowing him for a day or two is simply put unreasonable. I would understand a simple attraction, after all he does look like that Jungle Book guy from popular Korean CBT band or whatever, but confessing love to a guy you've just met is beyond me. Ofc they all easily form a harem and ofc none of them show even a glimpse of jealousy. Overall writing is missing serious conflict and suspense, and little drama that we have feels non-impactful. Also script needs some serious revision and editing, the amount of typos and improper grammar is just unacceptable.
Visuals/sound:
⠀⠀⠀Visually it's on the more impressive spectrum of HS2 VNs. There are a bunch of VFX and SFX used for battles and various other scenes. Backgrounds and environments are solid, choreography is well-done too.
Choices:
⠀⠀⠀Ok, first off, we've got choices, but only in the first half of the novel. Second half, which is several hours of reading straight has got literally zero choices. I guess dev wanted to push out as much content as fast as possible or maybe he just forgot that there were supposed choices at all, whatever. As for the options we have, looks like none have long term consequences. You can't reject any women but you can skip some sex scenes. This is mostly what all the choices are about: pick and choose what kind of scene to see. There are several choices that will change the narrative for the next 10-15 minutes, but then everything comes back to the same railroad line anyways. There are also at least like 5 choices, which from what I checked do literally nothing except for change few lines of dialogue.
Erotic content:
⠀⠀⠀Sex scenes appear frequently, but most are pretty much the same. Animations are very smooth but most of them are default HS2, so you've probably seen them before. Body movement was a little stilted but got better towards later updates. Those ahegao faces look pretty silly with movement this sloppy. Also why are they sliding like that, as if they were fucking on a roller-skates? There are SFX with moans, slaps, slurps and the "squishy" noise of genital friction, which is nice, but again moans are almost all the same for every character, which is a bit lame. Camera movement is more likely to give you motion sickness, than immerse you in the action. Sex dialogue is pretty generic and kinda cringe at times, it almost feels copypasted from one scene to another. 90% of the girls are virgins but it's basically just a lore info and the sex scenes barely reflect the fact at all, almost indistinguishable from other non-virgin scenes (Kaela scene is an exception). We have "Patreon exclusive" scenes btw, that are awkwardly shoehorned into the narrative, btw. Not a big fan, as it kinda throws you out of the flow, they also don't count towards MC's "Hyper Boost" ability, which is sort of a plot hole. Overall sexual content is mid af, but later scenes show some promise with improved quality and variety so we'll see.
Conclusion: if you're allergic to mediocre isekais, then skip. If you're big vanilla harem power fantasy enjoyer, then this is an alright time waster for several evenings as there is already a decent chunk of content. The overall quality does increase with updates so there is some hope for the future of this project, it would also be nice if the dev began adding more choices to the game.
Writing:
⠀⠀⠀Not gonna lie with how the game started I initially thought this was gonna be a parody, but no, this is a genuine harem isekai that follows literally all the tropes of the genre. My main complaints that it's too generic and extremely "safe". The protagonist is isekai'd, immediately gets cheat abilities for no good reason. One of them being able to conjure any magic he can imagine, then right after the opening proceeds to not cast anything other than generic fireball. In the fight with succubus he conjures 3 magic blades that eat all of his mana, even tho he could have cast like a hundred tornadoes for the same mana cost. Besides magic he also looks like a k-pop star, has huge cock and sexual stamina of a Greek god, he might actually be the god of sex with how all the women start acting during the intercourse. This guy also embodies the "knight in shining armour" cliche, he HAS to help every damsel in distress in a 10km radius, otherwise he just won't be fulfilled. He's too selfless and his morals are too perfect. He's simply not an interesting character to follow. The very first villain is fat, ugly, cringe and has micro-penis. Like he just emanates this "I'm but a punching bag for the protagonist so that he gets more bitches" aura. After his embarrassing speech and right before he even does anything to the girl he conveniently gets interrupted and bullied by the MC. The girl even reassures the MC that the bad guy in fact did not manage to even touch her, to avoid triggering his insecurities. All female characters are like walking fleshlights to me. The strong feelings that they develop towards protagonist after knowing him for a day or two is simply put unreasonable. I would understand a simple attraction, after all he does look like that Jungle Book guy from popular Korean CBT band or whatever, but confessing love to a guy you've just met is beyond me. Ofc they all easily form a harem and ofc none of them show even a glimpse of jealousy. Overall writing is missing serious conflict and suspense, and little drama that we have feels non-impactful. Also script needs some serious revision and editing, the amount of typos and improper grammar is just unacceptable.
Visuals/sound:
⠀⠀⠀Visually it's on the more impressive spectrum of HS2 VNs. There are a bunch of VFX and SFX used for battles and various other scenes. Backgrounds and environments are solid, choreography is well-done too.
Choices:
⠀⠀⠀Ok, first off, we've got choices, but only in the first half of the novel. Second half, which is several hours of reading straight has got literally zero choices. I guess dev wanted to push out as much content as fast as possible or maybe he just forgot that there were supposed choices at all, whatever. As for the options we have, looks like none have long term consequences. You can't reject any women but you can skip some sex scenes. This is mostly what all the choices are about: pick and choose what kind of scene to see. There are several choices that will change the narrative for the next 10-15 minutes, but then everything comes back to the same railroad line anyways. There are also at least like 5 choices, which from what I checked do literally nothing except for change few lines of dialogue.
Erotic content:
⠀⠀⠀Sex scenes appear frequently, but most are pretty much the same. Animations are very smooth but most of them are default HS2, so you've probably seen them before. Body movement was a little stilted but got better towards later updates. Those ahegao faces look pretty silly with movement this sloppy. Also why are they sliding like that, as if they were fucking on a roller-skates? There are SFX with moans, slaps, slurps and the "squishy" noise of genital friction, which is nice, but again moans are almost all the same for every character, which is a bit lame. Camera movement is more likely to give you motion sickness, than immerse you in the action. Sex dialogue is pretty generic and kinda cringe at times, it almost feels copypasted from one scene to another. 90% of the girls are virgins but it's basically just a lore info and the sex scenes barely reflect the fact at all, almost indistinguishable from other non-virgin scenes (Kaela scene is an exception). We have "Patreon exclusive" scenes btw, that are awkwardly shoehorned into the narrative, btw. Not a big fan, as it kinda throws you out of the flow, they also don't count towards MC's "Hyper Boost" ability, which is sort of a plot hole. Overall sexual content is mid af, but later scenes show some promise with improved quality and variety so we'll see.
Conclusion: if you're allergic to mediocre isekais, then skip. If you're big vanilla harem power fantasy enjoyer, then this is an alright time waster for several evenings as there is already a decent chunk of content. The overall quality does increase with updates so there is some hope for the future of this project, it would also be nice if the dev began adding more choices to the game.