Good Points
+ Even tho it's cliche, the Isekai series with MC leveling up, seeing his status screen, being kind of OP, etc, still fun to play. And that ''Damn it... I just killed a shitting Orc.'' thing was quite funny, along with some other references.
+ It's turned out Giant Vaelkeris (Skeleton one) BOSS from hidden dungeon was actually a member of first hero party.
+ Turns out princess Vivianne, and Vera are cousins, what a small world... And she asked Vivi to join MC's party so she can find traitors in meantime, since one of her guards was traitor there could be more.
+ Characters mostly has cute emotions, writings, etc, like Drunk Kaela, how she says she wants to be with MC forever, asking him not to send her back, etc, it was truly ''aww'' moment.
+ Art style is good, girls/woman looks hot/cute/sexy, and MC's design looks kind of unique as well.
+ We have animations for some small stuff and things like magic attacks, their existence is cool, but they need improvements for sure, especially animation physics.
+ Sex scenes has lots of animations for different positions, and angles, even tho they need bit improvements, they are kind of decent.
+ With v0.6 we learned more about to story, and they were not terribly-written like most of the story, so it's a improvement I guess.
Bad Points
- There are some really annoying cliches, and characters, like male hero being cliche pestering, egoist, ''I'm the rightful one!'' type, going after MC's women, etc. And like this is not enough developer even let MC & Hero duel, and make the MC lose... I mean seriously? Why? To make players die from cringe while watching it? BRUH...
- Aside from cliches there are tons of unlogical stuff happening as well, one second on screen you can see MC beating very high level BOSS, then another second you see him getting kidnapped like idiot, lost his powers, and ended up in pathetic situation where he could have easily killed, how can someone be this dumb?! Or how players are waited to like dumb MC like this? Seriously is writers ever gonna stop ridiculing the MC, and showing him OP same time?! And what's up with potion literally making MC just a normal guy with no powers at all, how OP stuff like this supposed to make sense, and why it's even working on MC in first place?! Then the curse cast on his dick will make his dick disappear if he can't endure for a hour?! Who writing/creating these scenes?!
- Orc King (Modgarr) who fought against Blanch with first heroes, and how he, and MC is alike was quite funny, and same time his story, and how he died was kind of sad, and how his death as a Demon Lord by the hands of the one of heroes (Baren) caused the inter-race tensions, and war between kingdom, an demons, both Orc King (Modgarr), and Dwarf in the heroes party (Brogh) died only because of Millaen Gaberion (royal family Gaberion's first member), she cheated Baren with Brogh because he is rich, then killed him with framing Modgarr, she later founded Gaberion Albaren Kingdom with her child from hero Baren (he, and other hero, and party members left after the sh*t she pulled tho) And summoning of heroes is another problem because they shouldn't have summoned before the gates of Blanch start to open (not gonna happen for 500 years) and same time summoning heroes creates cracks in barrier protecting the world, and Blanch can pass from those cracks, therefore summoning heroes literally speed up the whole Blanch invasion like 500 years, since it's actually cyle happening at every fifteen hundred years heroes won't be able to learn divinity powers from goddess as well, which is only power after the Dark Aura can hurt the Blanch, so heroes existence is almost pointless, and only power can help against Blanch is on the hands of the our MC, Dark Aura, and Demons can use Dark Aura. What's worse is summoners seems big idiots (which turns out to be King Gaberion himself, not surprising, what's surprising is Vega knowing Blanch, opposing the summon, but no one listening her tho) to give heroes main quest of ''Eleminate the Demon Lords'' meanwhile that's stupid AF since Blanch is coming, and they are probably going to need Demons, and Demon Lords powers to fight against them. Even worse than this MC don't even have blessing, or sub/side quests Goddess should give him as a hero to developt his skills/powers more.
- Even tho he is OP they still making MC Porter, a job where no promotion exist, so he will be stuck with E-Rank is quite annoying, and nonsense, thanks to this his party can't take any good quest and stuck with easy ones, in these type of isekai stories worse ones are the ones MC is getting forced to stay E-Rank or level 1, DEV going this way is very bad decision. Not to talk about this is literally reason Vega caught on him,
developer should have thought better about these stuff for sure.
- How MC died just explained with a couple of sentences with a black screen, more detailed explanation with some images to show what happened like truck-kun hitting MC, etc, would look better and more professional.
- Writing is a bit weak it seems, the talks happening between people feel a bit rushed, and it is almost like a person who has written dialogues just wanted them to quickly end, a little bit more detailed dialogues could be a good improvement.
- Monster designs can use some improvements, they look a bit low quality and too cartoonish when you compare them with the more realistic art style of humans.
- Facial expressions can use some improvements, especially girls in sex scenes look a bit robotic, they don't have any animation for their eyes, face, and head it seems, so it looks like their body is moving, alive, but their head frozen in place, and that creates kind of robotic look.
- All sex scenes has weird screen shake effect, it makes no sense at all, and looks pretty bad as well.
- I'm not complaining, the sex scenes are good, and not gonna say slow-burn style is better, but the sex happens too fast and feels too rushed, maybe should happen after a little bit more dialogue? I can understand the mushroom sex scene since it was an accident, but Melfa's sex scene especially feels rushed.
- English is a bit rough, maybe better proofreading or a translator could be a good improvement.
- Choices matter, but bad kind of, choosing to engage with one character can block a sex scene with another character, meanwhile it shouldn't because MC has quite high stamina and time, like after the sex he had with Fiona he could have sex with Relya as well, but instead it's getting skipped, and that's quite nonsense.
- Some content was paywalled and that's pretty bad decision. If DEV wants people to invest in his project he should start fixing the problems of the game and create a better game instead of locking away the content.
- Characters looks bad when they open their mouth, DEV needs to figure out how to properly do that for sure. and Kaela's face can use some changes as well.
- At update v0.6 a old Knight died because MC can't cure poison, what if one of his women gets poisoned then? Is he gonna let them die since he is soo damn weak? In same update we learned more about Lirael's family, and how they killed by Alberan family/king with false accusations done by Breg Viegra (he killed, and raped people just he can accuse Lirael's father with stealing his necklace, and placing the crime scene) to take down Lirafel, and they were not even satisfied with killing them, they even wanted to kill Lirael, and her little sister, Elf Queen refused, and as result she sold as a slave, seems like almost the whole royal family is corrupted, since the beginning it's formed.
For The End
Honestly this is one of great examples of how a project with good potential could be ruined by poor execution, writing especially biggest reason why this game is this poor despite the having fundamental stuff like interesting art style, hot looking characters, great renders, and animations. Seems like they decided to write story better, at least v0.6 shows that, hope they can follow that.
