Good Points
+ Even tho it's cliche, the Isekai series with MC leveling up, seeing his status screen, being kind of OP, etc, still fun to play. And that ''Damn it... I just killed a shitting Orc.'' thing was quite funny, along with some other references.
+ The series has kinda good sense of humor, especially misunderstood scenes are quite fun like the one where everyone thought Vivi & MC having sex for 6-7 days non-stop, meanwhile they creating fans lol. Funnily enough after girls saw what happened they decided Vel to use her skill to make him horny so they at least do some stuff, since Vivi is too shy, and MC is too cautious, but Vivi is in love with him, and ready for him to take her, after their sex she was soo happy she rolled in the bed for some time
And how everyone finds MC terrifying because how he can charm even the highest ups like Vega, etc, or because of how great his sex stamina is, etc, is a fun gag going on
+ It's turned out Giant Vaelkeris (Skeleton one) BOSS from hidden dungeon was actually a member of first hero party.
+ Turns out princess Vivianne, and Vega are cousins, what a small world... And she asked Vivi to join MC's party so she can find traitors in meantime, since one of her guards was traitor there could be more, Vega disguised her via magic, and she joined their team, turns out she is nerd healer who counts enemies, his teammates attack powers, etc, and she was mad shocked how MC's party never even count their enemy numbers, etc
+ Characters mostly has cute emotions, writings, etc, like Drunk Kaela, how she says she wants to be with MC forever, asking him not to send her back, etc, it was truly ''aww'' moment, and after they kinda get together how she couldn't accept it, and MC kept teasing her was quite fun to watch as well
Or the Virgin Succubus who lost her virginity to the MC, and keep searching to find him, and make him her sex slave husband for life lol
She was persistent enough they had to start fighting, so MC won't become her sex slave, and make her his own women, and fuck her instead, she was saying ''sorry please forgive me darling!'' to MC, but he didn't care and punished her with taking her anal virginity as well LMAO, and then she passed out, and MC waited until she wake up, and she was surprised despite being a demon why he didn't killed her, or left her there to her death in the forest filled with monsters saying she is a demon, anyone would do that, then MC asked her to come with him, and she wouldn't mind to date with her, she told she don't want romantic stuff like that, but told she wanna come with him, as his sex slave, saying she can't leave without his cock, and started calling him master, despite everything MC told she told she want special relationship with him, relationship she belongs to him, since he don't wanna be belong to her, for forming the slave contract she taken her first kiss as well, and when they were back girls were angry, and they demanded to become his sex slave as well lol. Then we have Lina, summoned hero from MC's world, she was in the party of other hero dude called Rean, but he is complete *sshole, and seems like she kicked him on his crotch since he was keep flirting, and trying to do pervy things wither, they parted ways, and she was drinking since then, and crying since she can't leave the small town she is in, can't do anything, etc, MC wanted her to join his party, but turns out she is actually scared from monsters, and useless, which why Rean had audacity to ask her to become his girlfriend to at least be useful for something, understanding her situation MC asked her join his party again, and told they will help her to get used to it.
+ Art style is good, girls/woman looks hot/cute/sexy, and MC's design looks kind of unique as well.
+ We have animations for some small stuff and things like magic attacks, their existence is cool, but they need improvements for sure, especially animation physics.
+ Sex scenes has lots of animations for different positions, and angles, even tho they need bit improvements, they are kind of decent.
+ With v0.6 we learned more about to story, and they were not terribly-written like most of the story, so it's a improvement I guess.
+ Update 0.7 was pretty good. Things progressed well, the mansion Vega gave to the MC is good touch, now he has a place always he wanted for his future wives, and we started to get some girls to relocate there as well like Melfa, MC hired her to be cook there, and it's way better than leaving her at that small town after things they experienced for sure. And MC progressed with Vivi & Vega, Vel, and take them as a his women as well.
Bad Points
- There are some really annoying cliches, and characters, like male hero being cliche pestering, egoist, ''I'm the rightful one!'' type, going after MC's women, etc. And like this is not enough developer even let MC & Hero duel, and make the MC lose... I mean seriously? Why? To make players die from cringe while watching it? BRUH...
- Aside from cliches there are tons of unlogical stuff happening as well, one second on screen you can see MC beating very high level BOSS, then another second you see him getting kidnapped like idiot, lost his powers, and ended up in pathetic situation where he could have easily killed, how can someone be this dumb?! Or how players are waited to like dumb MC like this? Seriously is writers ever gonna stop ridiculing the MC, and showing him OP same time?! And what's up with potion literally making MC just a normal guy with no powers at all, how OP stuff like this supposed to make sense, and why it's even working on MC in first place?! Then the curse cast on his dick will make his dick disappear if he can't endure for a hour?! Who writing/creating these scenes?!
- Orc King (Modgarr) who fought against Blanch with first heroes, and how he, and MC is alike was quite funny, and same time his story, and how he died was kind of sad, and how his death as a Demon Lord by the hands of the one of heroes (Baren) caused the inter-race tensions, and war between kingdom, an demons, both Orc King (Modgarr), and Dwarf in the heroes party (Brogh) died only because of Millaen Gaberion (royal family Gaberion's first member), she cheated Baren with Brogh because he is rich, then killed him with framing Modgarr, she later founded Gaberion Albaren Kingdom with her child from hero Baren (he, and other hero, and party members left after the sh*t she pulled tho) And summoning of heroes is another problem because they shouldn't have summoned before the gates of Blanch start to open (not gonna happen for 500 years) and same time summoning heroes creates cracks in barrier protecting the world, and Blanch can pass from those cracks, therefore summoning heroes literally speed up the whole Blanch invasion like 500 years, since it's actually cyle happening at every fifteen hundred years heroes won't be able to learn divinity powers from goddess as well, which is only power after the Dark Aura can hurt the Blanch, so heroes existence is almost pointless, and only power can help against Blanch is on the hands of the our MC, Dark Aura, and Demons can use Dark Aura. What's worse is summoners seems big idiots (which turns out to be King Gaberion himself, not surprising, what's surprising is Vega knowing Blanch, opposing the summon, but no one listening her tho) to give heroes main quest of ''Eleminate the Demon Lords'' meanwhile that's stupid AF since Blanch is coming, and they are probably going to need Demons, and Demon Lords powers to fight against them. Even worse than this MC don't even have blessing, or sub/side quests Goddess should give him as a hero to developt his skills/powers more.
- Even tho he is OP they still making MC Porter, a job where no promotion exist, so he will be stuck with E-Rank is quite annoying, and nonsense, thanks to this his party can't take any good quest and stuck with easy ones, in these type of isekai stories worse ones are the ones MC is getting forced to stay E-Rank or level 1, DEV going this way is very bad decision. Not to talk about this is literally reason Vega caught on him,
developer should have thought better about these stuff for sure.
- How MC died just explained with a couple of sentences with a black screen, more detailed explanation with some images to show what happened like truck-kun hitting MC, etc, would look better and more professional.
- Writing is a bit weak it seems, the talks happening between people feel a bit rushed, and it is almost like a person who has written dialogues just wanted them to quickly end, a little bit more detailed dialogues could be a good improvement.
- Monster designs can use some improvements, they look a bit low quality and too cartoonish when you compare them with the more realistic art style of humans.
- Facial expressions can use some improvements, especially girls in sex scenes look a bit robotic, they don't have any animation for their eyes, face, and head it seems, so it looks like their body is moving, alive, but their head frozen in place, and that creates kind of robotic look.
- All sex scenes has weird screen shake effect, it makes no sense at all, and looks pretty bad as well.
- I'm not complaining, the sex scenes are good, and not gonna say slow-burn style is better, but the sex happens too fast and feels too rushed, maybe should happen after a little bit more dialogue? I can understand the mushroom sex scene since it was an accident, but Melfa's sex scene especially feels rushed.
- English is a bit rough, maybe better proofreading or a translator could be a good improvement.
- Choices matter, but bad kind of, choosing to engage with one character can block a sex scene with another character, meanwhile it shouldn't because MC has quite high stamina and time, like after the sex he had with Fiona he could have sex with Relya as well, but instead it's getting skipped, and that's quite nonsense.
- Some content was paywalled and that's pretty bad decision. If DEV wants people to invest in his project he should start fixing the problems of the game and create a better game instead of locking away the content.
- Characters looks bad when they open their mouth, DEV needs to figure out how to properly do that for sure. and Kaela's face can use some changes as well.
- At update v0.6 a old Knight died because MC can't cure poison, what if one of his women gets poisoned then? Is he gonna let them die since he is soo damn weak? In same update we learned more about Lirael's family, and how they killed by Alberan family/king with false accusations done by Breg Viegra (he killed, and raped people just he can accuse Lirael's father with stealing his necklace, and placing the crime scene) to take down Lirafel, and they were not even satisfied with killing them, they even wanted to kill Lirael, and her little sister, Elf Queen refused, and as result she sold as a slave, seems like almost the whole royal family is corrupted, since the beginning it's formed.
- It has some weird stuff like Rollback feature not always working.
- Hero Lina joined MC's party, which is good thing, but because of her position story/writers created bullsh*t excuse to in public she has to be shown as a leader of the party, and that's just lame.
For The End
Honestly this is one of great examples of how a project with good potential could be ruined by poor execution, writing especially biggest reason why this game is this poor despite the having fundamental stuff like interesting art style, hot looking characters, great renders, and animations. Seems like they decided to write story better, at least v0.6, and 0.7 were going for a good direction, which is way I raised my review to 3 stars from 2 stars, hope they follow this, tbh it would be better if they remake some old scenes, but that's like waiting too much I guess.
