I am so incredibly stoked to see this game continue. I hardly know where to begin..
Okay, first off...the art. The character models are absolutely fantastic. A broad array of body types and unique features really drive home the illusion of these being 'real' characters. Right down to skin blemishes, freckles, moles, proportions...everything about the models feels so real and genuine. It is a welcome aspect to say the least. And it golds through to the lewd scenes, as well. They are remarkably well rendered and animated, with the same verisimilitude when it comes to physicality. Most are also tremendously sexy.
The writing is serviceable for an obvious translation. There are some stilted moments, but much of the wry humor comes through perfectly. The story is easy to follow and the dialogue typically feels realistic and earnest, with an aspect of welcome comedic appeal.
The story itself works perfectly. The characters are very compelling and interesting and, while the 'Magic Penis' trope is very easy to overdo in an Adult Visual Novel, I actually find that it works quite elegantly here. It isn't my favorite concept, but the splendid craftsmanship in this game as a whole has warmed me to it.
I also want to give a strong shout out to the fantastic soundtrack for the game. A robust variety of music (with a lot of R&B and Soul influence) helps guide the pacing and serves to accentuate the proceedings without distracting the player from them. Actually one of my favorite uses of music in a game in this entire genre, to be honest.
Non-musical sound is great, too. Especially in the lewd scenes. The voice FX feel fairly natural and not overly contrived and annoying. The moans are actually somewhat sexy, which I have found to be a rarity in this field.
All in all, this is probably my personal favorite game to watch right now. I really truly hope it gets a lot of support and can proceed without failure.
Closing personal note with obvious reviewer bias:
The developer has already included a feature for one character that allows the player a range of customization options for pubic hair styling. I hope that this is extended to all female characters during development, because it is an extremely valuable feature. The Pubes versus No Pubes debate has raged in this community since I started reading text-based adult games back in the late 80s. But a developer willing and able to take the time to offer the choice to the player without any of the options feeling 'tacked on' or rushed is an extremely elegant fix. I personally cannot/do not play games that do not include at least one model with a full hairy bush. Preferably more than one. Which means that very very few games in this field fit my tastes. It is gratifying to find one that does, while also serving to quell the debate by allowing opposing viewpoints to choose how they want the characters groomed in their own story.