I just went trough the game and would like to leave a bit of my mind:
This game has a good core for what it can be. I would call it a proof of concept instead of a 0.1 though. It's only a linear click-trough with a single porn scene.
Both the content and the writing are pillars to build a great game on. A bit of spit & polish can do wonders for the game though. The game will be better when the English improves. Proofreading and grammar/spell checking tools will improve the game.
I am interested in seeing where the story goes and who fill the screen next. There is very little stuff yet but the way it's set up is good.
I question if the approach of making a story on a professional site can/will lead to legal issues. I mention this so DSA can be safe instead of sorry.
If this was called a proof of concept, I'd give it a 4/5, one less star for the 0.1. DSA, work hard and you will get there!
This game has a good core for what it can be. I would call it a proof of concept instead of a 0.1 though. It's only a linear click-trough with a single porn scene.
Both the content and the writing are pillars to build a great game on. A bit of spit & polish can do wonders for the game though. The game will be better when the English improves. Proofreading and grammar/spell checking tools will improve the game.
I am interested in seeing where the story goes and who fill the screen next. There is very little stuff yet but the way it's set up is good.
I question if the approach of making a story on a professional site can/will lead to legal issues. I mention this so DSA can be safe instead of sorry.
If this was called a proof of concept, I'd give it a 4/5, one less star for the 0.1. DSA, work hard and you will get there!
