VN Ren'Py Abandoned Jays Pov [v0.02a] [Dsa99101]

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Should I put a preview of the girls to come next at the end of each update ?

  • Yes

    Votes: 282 68.1%
  • No

    Votes: 11 2.7%
  • I don't care I'm here to fap

    Votes: 55 13.3%
  • Your Choice

    Votes: 66 15.9%

  • Total voters
    414
  • Poll closed .

Ds99101

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May 7, 2020
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Overview:
You play as Jay in a Visual Novel where you make your way in the porn industry. It is based on the content of Jay Pov.​

Thread Updated: 2020-11-24
Release Date: 2020-11-24
Developer: Dsa99101
Censored: No
Version: 0.02a
OS: Windows, Linux, Mac
Language: English
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decopauge123

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Apr 27, 2020
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Conbsidering it's your first game, and it's an 0.01, it's OK. I saw some grammar and spelling errors, but this game as far batter then many of the "1st game from non-English speaker" games I've seen here. The plot is simple, but makes sense. It will be interesting to see how it develops. One thing, you need to have more contrast between the options background and text (really hard to read without mousing over each one).
 
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Ds99101

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May 7, 2020
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Conbsidering it's your first game, and it's an 0.01, it's OK. I saw some grammar and spelling errors, but this game as far batter then many of the "1st game from non-English speaker" games I've seen here. The plot is simple, but makes sense. It will be interesting to see how it develops. One thing, you need to have more contrast between the options background and text (really hard to read without mousing over each one).
Thanks I will work on that and try to improve it on the next update and Yeah I didn't want to try something to complicated to start with coding and renpy.
 

Ds99101

Newbie
May 7, 2020
26
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My goal is to have the next update ready for the end of the poll and than the next day upload it here.
If you have any suggestion (for the poll, gameplay,etc..) please leave a comment.
I will try to make a poll almost each update to give you the chance to select the direction of the game and content (mostly girls).
 

Ds99101

Newbie
May 7, 2020
26
24
thanks for your work , it would be very nice if u cpnsider using video or gif instead of jpeg .;)
Thanks, for this game I will keep the jpeg because it's easier for me. I taught about using video but since it's my first project I wanted to keep my focus on the basics.
 
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