VN - Ren'Py - Abandoned - Jessie: Mother's Sins [v0.09 Extended] [Caprice]

Super short game with no meaningful choices.
The idea is good, models are OK quality, but the story and player choices do not matter at all. Plot is around a mother who gets blackmailed and it was heading to right direction with the corruption elements, but progression is way too fast and there is no proper build-up.
As the game is abandoned, rating it poorly as there is not a lot of content or scenes to explore.

There is a lot of potential in the concept of turning a mom into a slut. Sadly this game squanders all of that potential.

First off, I'm not a huge fan of games where everyone acts like horny frat boys. There is literally no depth to any character in this game. Sex is the only thing any of them are ever thinking about at any given moment.

Secondly, there are no meaningful choices. There is a bit of dialogue in the beginning where you have to select every option to continue the story. Why even have dialogue options if you're just going to make us sit through every line of it anyway? And as for the MC, every choice given to the player is literally A) Act the way a normal person would or B) Act like a complete cumdumpster.

Lastly, it defeats the concept of corrupting the MC when she already acts like a porn star in the beginning of the game. She keeps saying that she's a prude but has zero hesitation to take her clothes off in front of her son's best friend whom she met moments ago (and this isn't even a moment of 'the player chose this' - it's a mandatory part of the game that you get no choice in). Her kids keep saying that she dresses too conservatively and like an old lady even though I'm looking at her with my own eyes in that scene and she's wearing a skimpy midriff-baring tanktop with massive amounts of cleavage showing.

There are definitely worse games here, but with the amount of potential this one had, I am very disappointed.

Amazing highly underrated. The definitive mom turning into a slut game absolutely phenomenal cant speak more highly of this game true masterpiece cute daughter son great age mom slowly turning into slut. Highly erotic

If you like it enough maybe, mabe you can say that the game shows signs of trying to be decent.

If, like me, spend most of the game trying to understand, with the given rules, why things happen, you will not get to the stated conclusion.

The choices are annoying cause they are there for things that are irrelevant, but things that matter dont give you a choice and thats what helps moving the absurdity of the plot forward. I would send the fuck away that Paul in the first place.

Renders are decent but girls are not the most beautiful, for sure, more like transformed gremlins.

It is developing very slowly, but gets some of the kinks right - she is a young (35-ish) mother, single with two children and she has sexual life. Her children are influenced by knowing about it and all, it is pretty new and fresh.

But developing is so slowI doubt it will ever get far before being abandoned.

Story 2.5/5: not much to review on yet, cause are 5 minutes of game, starts as an incest game from mom point of view, nice choice over the usual incest harem from to point of view of the retarded kid, that are swarming right now. But since it's so short i can't give more than a 2.5.

Art 3/5: models are good, nothing fancy nothing special but they work, some expressions and poses looks a little stiff (like the mother and daughter conversation in the kitchen). good background even if feels a little bit bare (d

Overall 3/5t.
But it's a game to look foward to nonetheless.

Great renders and beautiful visuals do not a good VN make. I will avoid game criticism because this is a VN, however, even within the VN parameters, the choices seem to have only minor, cosmetic effects on the story.

Which puts all the focus on the story which is absolutely horrendous. This seems like a female character from the point of view of an adolescent male. This is less a corruption story and more a tale of outright abuse. Blackmail and Rape should be tagged. The author seems to think that female to female relationships consist entirely of encouraging each other to be more slutty. Considering that it is more than half the relationships in the game, it gets tired fast.

Now if you are into making your mommy a slut, this may be the game for you, but if you are really looking for a female POV VN, this is probably going to disappoint. The sad thing is, I believe the entire game, as is, could be saved with a text rewrite. But then again, it is a VN, so...

This game is absolutely horrid. If I'm going to be the MC then I should be able to decide who I want to seduce, corrupt, etc. This game was not tagged as submission, but it sure AF is when you don't let me choose to tell Paul to FO on his blackmail, not allowing me to punish my child for bad behavior, taking off my panties so willingly with my son. He has to earn that kind of stuff for heck sake or other ridiculous things that happen.

Mommy is really sexy here, and deserves it!

A typical Mommy-gives-her-son-some-lovin', but branching the game options between the son and daughter is what makes this game unique.

Both mom and daughter female characters are really sexy, and their wardrobe is excellent and usually nicely posed. The only drawback I can think of is Mommy often stares in the void, and there isn't enough eye expression/posing.

Too slow for sex scenes. 3 years and still at this point? Get rid of the incest tag as it is NOT presently in game. A good promise but fails to follow through. Also needs to get some updates, as it's been long. Note - no updates in 5 months.

I like this game so far. Jessie is very a beautiful woman, the story is interesting also, not too slow, not too fast. The graphic is really excellent. I hope the developer will work in this mage one or two years as I am very intrested for what to become Jessie.

v0.07

You should probably be reading the reviews and analyzing some of them. The reason this game draws attention is the renders that are very good, but unfortunately the gameplay is not very good enough. But the strangest thing about it is that we play with a female protagonist who is the mother of two children and it is then that little by little the disinterest in playing this porn game begins slightly, but we should not judge the book by its cover, however, the story of the game is not so good enough. I would really like to play or rather, I would like the game to be a male protagonist, you know, the female renderings are magnificent, very good by the way, and it is a huge waste that the game has a story and plot like that. A mother, with love problems and who suddenly ends up submitting to her son's colleague and ends up being blackmailed by him. Until then everything is fine, but it is the player who controls the MC, so the plot and gameplay ends up getting boring. That was one of the main reasons I didn't like the game, look, you probably found Jessie and Christy very interesting and sexy, isn't it? So, what will a Christy sex scene be like? just a lesbian scene with the MC (mom) or a sex scene with your boyfriend? The game will then become NTR, won't it? Because it is serious, the renderings are very good, the game has the potential to be a great game if it were with a male protagonist, I am not belittling the work of the author, but I am just passing on a vision of what would be better. I hope the developer thinks about it, I know games with a female protagonist are good, but think how much better it would be if it were a male protagonist being able to fuck Jessie and Christy and also other girls?

Despite the fact that the models of its characters are very attractive, this game is very boring, it has very little action and its updates are hardly a contribution ... well, I sincerely expected more not recommended and I would call them a waste of data.

This another disappointment for me. This dev (not sure if he works alone or a small team) has talent in rendering, but writing skills/game design is unimaginative. It reads more like a kinetic novel, though choices are thrown in from time to time to make it seem we, as readers, have some control on the outcome of the story. However, those choices have no real importance in the story. It is a false sense of control. The blackmail story-line is so rushed and weak that I have trouble buying it. Even in the monologue leading up to the mother accepting the blackmail, she mentions he has no proof. Then why give into the blackmail? The justification is terribly weak. Maybe the dev needs to stick to graphic artist skills (I've only seen a handful of stories/games with better renders) and get some else help develop the story.

This started out so good, really good buildup and Jessie was slowly starting to indulge herself.

Then dev comes back a century later and just decides to take a crap of all that build up, and turn it into a shitty blackmail trope. Completely unnecessary since Jessie was about to slut it up anyways with a bit more encouragement from the people around.

And since that is the only way forward, this game is just not worthwhile at all. I honestly can't believe that the dev would ruin his own game. Did he forget how it started? So unnecessary...

Version: v0.06 Extended

Review:
It's a game unlike any I've seen, but the difference is in the MC, which is a female protagonist and mother of two children (boy and girl). The game is a VN with a story that will depend on your point of view whether you liked it or not, to tell you the truth I didn't think the story very attractive, because even though it is a porn game, the plot seems to be quite meaningless and there is nothing you want to be surprised.
History:
Well, the author would have to be a genius to make the story really good and engaging, because as I said, you play with a mom who has two kids, a boy and a girl, and I really don't know how this is going to go. Because normally players like to interact with the characters, and having a daughter being a mommy, how would that look? I mean, it would be simpler for the MC to be a male and not a female character, but it’s not as we expected, but that also doesn’t take away the criteria and I’m not saying that this is good or that the game is bad, it’s just an opinion and point of view.
Graphics & Sex Content:
The renderings are great, mainly Jessie and Christy. As for sexual content, there is still very little yet, and about the sex scenes too, there is very little scenes in the game and exhibitionism (which I always like to see) but nothing that will surprise you. Well, the game still doesn't have enough sexual content.

So, why I did gave 1 stars?
To tell you the truth I think it’s unfair to give a star, but I will give my reason for doing so. I know the game is still in development and the girls' renderings are great, but the story of that game and the way you go about it doesn't help much. That's because we play with a female protagonist, but of course, that's not the reason, there are good games with female MC, but the problem is that there is no point of interest in the story, you play with a woman who is the mother of a couple of children, and what will that take? And then comes an NPC who appears to be 15 years old and seduces the protagonist into driving her crazy and being blackmailed, in this, we have a relationship with the child, which will result in both having sex. What about the daughter? I really liked the daughter's model, and it would be great to be able to fuck her. But anything can be possible, because I am still judging very early, but the author of the story needs to stop writing nonsense or silly things and start building something less amateurish, because any player who will play this will have a lot of disinterest. The girls' renderings are good, but I see that it would be much easier to build an incest story than to make a more tangled one, but anyway, not only did I give a star rating because of that, but it is also a VN game like any other, I don't mean it to be bad, but I mean it is quite common. So, one or two stars is more than enough, I hope the game improves in the future, because I cannot say that it still has potential, but the story can be improved.

I liked the game and didn't mind waiting for the updates but developers should start to be a little more thoughtful, especially when they have a female protagonist. Blackmail is one of the worst plot devices in this kind of games. If the dev wanted Jessie to have sex with her son's friend he could write it that way, he starts describing us how sexually frustrated she is and then, instead of building this up, he goes for the easy bj. Instant delete is the only way to treat these situations...
One star for the nice model of Jessie, everything else is a waste of time...

I fucking love that. From the start. From ver 0.1. But now it's classic shit, where you play a whore, you cant choose your way, you can only fuck all and there is no incest at all? When fucking a friend called incest? So it's only 2. Nice start, horrible finish. Even worst then mother.

in general I prefer embodies the female characters in the games say mainstream, but I have a little trouble .... his would have been excellent if you play the kid (major ...) ,his friend or anyone else with balls.

The game looks great. The main figure Jessy is a very charming mother - very hot milf. Sex scene with Paul is excellent. Nothing can not be reproached to a graphic, animation also without error. Keep it up