VN Ren'Py Abandoned Jessie: Mother's Sins [v0.09 Extended] [Caprice]

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Overview:
You play as a pretty young woman (Jessie), who lives with her children - daughter Christy and son Josh. In addition to the main actors in the game there are colorful characters: a friend of the younger son Paul, the boyfriend of the older daughter Michael, the long-time friend of Jessy Nicole. You’ll be making choices between two or more decisions that will negatively or positively affect the outcome of the date and the main story as well.
Thread Update: 2020-11-17
Game Update: 2020-11-15
Developer: Caprice -
Censored: No
Version: 0.09 Extended
OS: Win, Mac, Android, Linux
Language: English
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COMPRESSED* - ANDRIOD

Kiroff255 thanks for the link
*This unofficial port/version is not released by developer, download at your own risk.


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@Caprice37, please follow the format here-
And after the post follows the format, we can move it to the games section.
 

ThorMcBalbo

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my usual review for new games:

Story 6/10: not much to review on yet, cause are 5 minutes of game, starts as an incest game from mom point of view, nice choice over the usual incest harem from to point of view of the retarded kid, that are swarming right now. But since it's so short i can't give more than a 6.
Art 7/10: models are good, nothing fancy nothing special but they work, some expressions and poses looks a little stiff (like the mother and daughter conversation in the kitchen). good background even if feels a little bit bare (dunno why cause it has everything it needs, it's just a feeling)

Overall 6/10: can't give more cause it's short and the translation to english must be fixed, but the premisses are not bad and let's hope that the fetishes listed will be delived and not be cut cause of nagging players that don't want this or that.
But it's a game to look foward to nonetheless.

P.s. Isn't Josh a little bit too young? like 12 years old young?
 
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King Monkey Mon

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my usual review for new games:

Story 6/10: not much to review on yet, cause are 5 minutes of game, starts as an incest game from mom point of view, nice choice over the usual incest harem from to point of view of the retarded kid, that are swarming right now. But since it's so short i can't give more than a 6.
Art 7/10: models are good, nothing fancy nothing special but they work, some expressions and poses looks a little stiff (like the mother and daughter conversation in the kitchen). good background even if feels a little bit bare (dunno why cause it has everything it needs, it's just a felling)

Overall 6/10: can't give more cause it's short and the translation to english must be fixed, but the premisses are not bad and let's hope that the fetishes listed will be delived and not be cut cause of nagging players that don't want this or that.
But it's a game to look foward to nonetheless.

P.s. Isn't Josh a little bit too young? like 12 years old young?
im actually into shota fucks milfs games
 

89tasker

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My thoughts.

Interesting Idea. Feels like we're playing the mother in a porn game. The son "accidentally" walks in while we're dressing. The son asks to massage our feet...etc.

The models look really good. The problem is they lack emotion. The poses are okay, but the faces are blank. It's probably more realistic, but movies/tv shows/games have conditioned us to expect more expressive reactions. Like shock when the son sneaks a peak...

English is good enough to be bad. It's much better than machine translated, but bad enough to be distracting. Like reading the comments section or anything written by a millennial; Awkward sentence structures and bad grammar.

Has potential. Not enough here to be labeled good or bad, yet. (but already above awful).
 
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Another game that claims all actors are 18+ years old but when i look at the MC im just thinking how the fuck could he be 18+, clearly not older than 12, the sister looks also young but she could be 18 since a week
 
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Gomly1980

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Another game that claims all actors are 18+ years old but when i look at the MC im just thinking how the fuck could he be 18+, clearly not older than 12, the sister looks also young but she could be 18 since a week
They have to say 18 to be on Patreon, that doesn't mean the characters are 18 in the game.
 
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Awesome OP, really enjoyed it. Thanks for posting and I'm excited to see more!

As for the comments on how characters look-
A girl I dated in highschool, when we were both ~17, looked about 13. Not everyone develops giant tits or rippling muscles at 16-18. Some kids takes longer. A guy in my class when we graduated was also all of 5' tall and looked like he should still be in Jr. High. Take it for what it's worth. Having younger looking characters for some of these games is a nice change of pace and so just read the disclaimer they are 18, assume it's as I said above, and enjoy the story. Worrying about the "age" of a cartoon character just seems entirely thought crime territory. Keep the characters the same OP, works great.
 
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Another game that claims all actors are 18+ years old but when i look at the MC im just thinking how the fuck could he be 18+, clearly not older than 12, the sister looks also young but she could be 18 since a week
On TV they have 26 year old actresses playing 14 year old characters, because they have small breasts. 24 year old men playing 15 year old guys because they are short and/or feminine featured.
These are stereotypes, but also somewhat necessary in G-rated shows where you never know what that 14 year old will look like in 6 months.
In real life you don't get a set of DD's for your 18th birthday, nor does your penis suddenly become hard and 10 inches long. The average is an average, and varies slightly by country. Still, it is sexist to think flat chests and short dicks are signs of childhood.
 

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In real life you don't get a set of DD's for your 18th birthday...
There are probably hundreds of cosmetic surgeons out there who would disagree with this. ;) Giving teenagers boobs is all the fashion now (which is strange since they may not have finished puberty yet).
 

Tramall

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Good start, but there are a lot of good Starts, with a steady update or 2 I would likely consider supporting your game. Keep up the good work and listen to the feedback, but stick to your vision. Cheers
 

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game is short (its a demo or somekind)
but its pretty good for now, i like the idea of controling the mother. its different from others game and good

good start, hope it will grow :)
 

geistmas

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Seems Like a good beginning, though I don't usually like female protag games, here's to hoping I can go full lez and have the option to leave the son/other assorted men that will be in the game off the table. The demo suggests it may be an option at least.
 

Onysko

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Why do you bother posting a "review" of a 0.0.1 demo of a VN? It's to early to hand out scores and you say so yourself in your own words... :noexpression:

Anyway, I like the characters (like I said in the development thread) and the renders are great!
I hope you'll keep the characters the way they are, they don't look too young at all.

I look forward to seeing more of this! :eazyHype:
 
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