VN - Ren'Py - Abandoned - Journey [Ch. 1] [Deadbrokeinc]

  1. 1.00 star(s)

    blackthorne444

    [v1.3a Review]

    Story is all over the place, many plot points are thrown around and never touched. Dialogue is stiff, unnatural, and outright painful in some places. Many statements are repeated several times, and some older statements are outright ignored.
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    Not even mentioning all the typos that should have been caught, and basic grammar errors.

    The characters are, thus far, bland. The models are terrifying (just broken in proportion, and unsettling in the faces) and sets are base assets with parts removed or added at random, with no consistency that I can determine.

    Many of the shots are retina burning bright and lingered on a for far longer than is necessary, or healthy to look at.

    Try lowering the brightness and looking at more rendering tutorials