horny wizard

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It maybe not that good(no offense)

But it certainly have a fuck load of souls in it
yeah, I'm trying to improve when I make backgrounds and more sfw stuff.
anyways, while I'm here, anything you think I should be doing better ? (critism is kinda hard for me to come by cause I don't get much traction in general apart from internet friends)
 
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nnt1996

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yeah, I'm trying to improve when I make backgrounds and more sfw stuff.
anyways, while I'm here, anything you think I should be doing better ? (critism is kinda hard for me to come by cause I don't get much traction in general apart from internet friends)
Well…the shadings and lightings need some works i believe
 
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raph216

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yeah, I'm trying to improve when I make backgrounds and more sfw stuff.
anyways, while I'm here, anything you think I should be doing better ? (critism is kinda hard for me to come by cause I don't get much traction in general apart from internet friends)
In the kicking pose part, I think the shin part of the leg seems to thick ? Maybe it's more realistic, but I think having the thigh and the shin having the same thickness isn't very aesthetic, but that's purely personal I guess, and probably not a flaw per see. on the right part though, the only thing that really bother me is the neck and shoulders.
 

EmDotRand

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welp, def probs not my best work, but at least I actually made something.
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I'll try not to go full drawfag with my critique. The calf muscles don't connect directly to the thighs, but rather a bit below the knees. In other words the knees which are mostly bone and tendons should be somewhat thin in a straight leg. As for the hair I won't go as hard because her hair is janky in game too, but what were you going for with the center of her hairline? Something like this (excuse my cursed western sketch):
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welp, def probs not my best work, but at least I actually made something.
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Art's an incredibly long and tough journey, and there's been some great advice from others in the thread already about things like anatomy and shading.

But already, your artwork is full of that essential personality, charm and character which is completely absent in the worthless, pathetic AI drivel that someone has been wasting space in this thread with.

You went to the effort of developing an actual skill and created something unique with it, and that's always fucking brilliant.
 

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Armor break,
Jsk said all of the basic skill almost done,
She has juicy thighs and she start growing on me.
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Oh my, I really have been gone for a while. Didn't realize we're onto the next game and that JSK's siesta was over. She reminds me of sailor Mercury.

Its Sailor Saturn
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I kind of see it? Maybe it's due to seeing Saturn almost never compared to the other scouts when I watched the anime as a kid along with the blue Mikoto has compared to Saturn's purple.
 
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ganesha2407

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bwebrwkerw is it possible you edit/mod on some of the game for the heroine have fat vagina(i don't know what you call them but it's thick enough that it's made camel toe in their panties)
I just remember some old flash jsk work the heroine have this kind of vagina (i think the vampire has that,and capturing princess one)
 
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