VN - Ren'Py - Just for You - Kinetic Novel [v9.0] [Mando Logica]

Review based on v9.0
Game is abandoned (1 year since update)

How Long To Beat: 4 hours (depending on reading speed)

A flawed game with an enjoyable story.

This is a kinetic visual novel. No choices, just clicking.

+The character models are good, sometimes great.
+There are a lot of sex scenes
- Most but not all sex scenes are static. There are a few moments of animation
- The grammer for the English version is terrible.
- There's too much dialogue.

This game isn't a stand-out experience, but the premise and the execution was enough to get me to see this through.

Margaret owns a coffee shop with her son, Richard, who is a part-time chemist. They have a fully developed romantic incestuous relationship. They employ Richard's antagonistic childhood friend, Mia, who Margaret treats like a daughter.

Richard rescues a woman named Olivia from being assaulted. Days later, the building Margaret rents for her coffee shop is sold to a new owner, who turns out to be Olivia, who is a rich bitch business woman. Olivia is aware of Margaret and Richard's incestuous relationship . She gives them an ultimatum: lose the coffee shop or help her begin an incestuous relationship with her estranged son, Oliver.

A deal is made. Margaret, Richard, and Mia temporarily move into Olivia's mansion. Oliver resists their plan wholeheartedly, as his hatred towards his mother is insurmountable.

Olivia and Oliver are targeted with a full-on seduction and manipulation. Sexcapades ensue.

Being a kinetic novel, the story is very plot-focused. The sense of pacing and escalation is pretty good. That said, sex scenes take up much of the playtime. These characters are horny and insatiable. There is sex scene after sex scene. This game is a middle finger to the concept of slow burn.

Incest fans may be disappointed that the main Mother Son relationship is fully developed before the game begins. There is never an explanation for how their relationship began. However, Olivia and Oliver's antagonistic relationship is the focus for quite a bit of the game.

This is far from perfect, but if you want a Mother Son incest game with a ton of sex scenes rapidly delivered, this is mostly worth it.

The story doesn't come to a wholly satisfying conclusion, but the main arc that is center premise for a majority of the game does get closure.

Recommended

This game is simply terrible. If you're going for a kinetic novel, I take it is because you have a good story to tell and you don't want it to branch out into unwanted zones and devote all your work to one line. This is not the case here, the story is trully awful, characters make no sense, and things happen because everyone simply wants to fuck the MC like there is no tomorrow for no real reason. Of course, there is no gameplay in any way, not only no choices but nothing in general, just move through the story until uninstalling.

Render quality is decent, but not incredible, and there are no animations as far as I got in the game. Sound is very bad, with only one very bland song that gets quite tiresome quickly. At least I spotted no bugs, which is nice.

So, all in all, a hard skip.

Not for me at all.

Nice models etc but otherwise It's your straight up fuck-fest with bad English and absurd plot and logic.
I know a lot of people like that style but if you're like me and need build-up and a good level of believability then I'm saving you the download because you won't find that here.

Different,

But in a good way, with the last release it leaves still lots to wonder about and really hope that there would be more to come.

Well thought out plot lines and back story in between is really well done. As well as the stunning renders

Well Done ML can't wait for more.

Feels like it's just not title for me. While visuals are good, I don't like when all female characters around MC are dominant and constantly bossing him around, and he seems to like it. At some point there were straight remarks of mom 'training' him. I hate how passive he is and also I find it very weird that he's doing things totally out of his character, like charging for a guy with a gun suddenly, and overpowering him through drugging him. I don't like him talking he always used some kind of tranquilizing drugs and is trying to normalize it as self defense measure. It is super creepy. I also don't like that with whole load of sex this game has, and it is many, many scenes, MC didn't get to do even a single creampie.

This should have more tags: 'female dominance' tag, as basically whole game feels that way, he always listens to mom, she's forcing him to fuck another women, and another women force themselves on him, rinse and repeat. Also 'rape', as in few situations it's very hard to call with another word way of some characters literally forcing themselves to have sex with him. Oh, and he says all the time he only needs the mother, and yet after just few FORCED sex scenes with Mia (durin which he asked her to stop and didn't want anything), he suddenly starts talking he likes/cares/loves her too? Totall bullshit.

And what I don't like even more tahn listed above flaws, is the strange way of characters talking. Not sure how to properly explain it, it's weird mix of some very unnecessary formal language and the way (I presume) robots would hold conversations. Like.. I'd say normal way of talking would be "you love to have sex with two beatuful woman", and line was something like "you love to have sex with two beautiful females". There are constant issues like this, and thanks to it most ofthe dialogues feels very rigid and forced. Not sure if this is because author isn't native speaker, or because writing comics conversations is just that much different from making game dialogues, but the fact is, that it does make entire game feel awkward.

its good gameand fucking nice masterpiece of incest fucking game
can you please add more anal and please keep going dont abandon the game can you add swinging as well and your graphics are great as well

V6.0 reviewed.

This is a surprisingly challenging review to write because when a project like this is a kinetic novel, I tend to set the bar higher on the story requirement than I would when branching can create all sorts of challenges for the writer.

The art and clean production values are high points here. I know the DAZ clipping gestapo will start their autistic screeching with that statement, but the effort lies in the gap between truly upper tier DAZ artists in the genre and the dumpster tier that pervades so many of the updated-every-month projects in circulation.

Yeah, there are a few examples of bad Photoshopping (grocery bag, I'm talking to you) and clipping, but the art does manage to be generally immersive and appeal to the "V" component of "AVN." Facial expression and posing are the primary areas in need of improvement.

The dev has a few interesting characters with enough mystery about their motivations to be intriguing, but only superficially. Mia is the standout as the wanna-be sister seeking a new family who may not be all there. Especially in the early part of the plot development, she acquits herself entertainingly as domineering Margaret's wingwoman.

The main character (if there is one in a kinetic novel) is somehow less interesting than the antagonist, who isn't really revealed as such until toward the end of the existing content. While this is tagged as multiple protagonist, it's really Margaret's show, with everyone else along for the ride.

The women are generally convincingly hot MILFs, even if their makeup remains flawless first thing in the morning or in showers.

As far as eroticism goes, the game somehow manages to generally elude fappability because the lewd scenes feel schizophrenic. You'll be in the middle of one party having lesbian sex, and then mid-scene, flash over to different characters in an entirely different discussion. While the art is executed well here, the scenes don't really progress heat-wise in a logical way, or worse, they often get interrupted pre-orgasm and the mood is shattered.

This can have the net effect of making the sex feel like a slideshow of often non-sequitor transitions into other acts/poses where nobody ends up satisfied.

That critique aside, I do want to commend the dev on some excellent foreplay art. Too many games are guilty of crashing the plane straight into Pound Town, ignoring the fact that sexual kissing, nipple sucking, and teasing before the act can really elevate the actual sex later. We see lots of tongue-and-fingerplay here, and it's a better effort for it.

Clearly, English is either not the dev's primary language, or he's not very good at it. While there are certainly plenty of projects out there with worse Engrish, and the spellchecking QC is done competently (enough) here, the phrases themselves clearly feel like they were written in another language first and Google-translated. It's not egregious, it's just that the art and overall quality demanded better.

The story itself is pretty outlandish, but goes right to the edge of my ability to suspend disbelief before erring on the side of providing more porn. The girls are DTF anywhere, anytime with zero effort. People in different families discuss incest as if they're trading tips on tax deductions, and a guy with a long suppressed handgun chooses to grapple with a mugger rather than engage him at a distance. Neat.

That said, this latest episode leaves the player hanging with a few hints at the larger plot (as well as the better-than-average art) will likely have me take another look at it.

If the story gets more interesting, and the lewd scenes improve as the dev's craft does, I may even toss a coin to this witcher...

Update: I got as far as when the MC, mom, and MIa go to the woman's house and they confront the woman's son in the bedroom about liking chocolates dipped in juices. And then I quit playing for a very long time. I don't think that I can finish this game. It started off interesting but got boring quick. I don't care for Mia. I like the mom, but it's no fun with Mia and everyone else there. I can't really focus on the fantasy when so much is happening. It feels more like a reality show game than it does a familial relationship game.

The high rating is because I like the mother and son. I like how the mom looks. I like their relationship. I used the Universal Renpy Mod to rename the mom's name Margaret to something else and the son's name Richard to something else and that made the game more enjoyable. The writing and grammar isn't the greatest, the pacing may seem a bit fast or weird or silly and comical, but still a decent game. Mia, a friend of theirs, is a bit annoying. I don't like how she looks or her personality. But I can overlook all these things and give it a 4 star rating. If I gave it a 3 star rating, people might think that it's a worthless game and may never try it. So I only deducted one star because it could definitely be improved and become even better. Just if you play this game, consider searching online for "F95 universal renpy mod" and install it. It's a single file that you drop in the /game subfolder along with all the .rpy, .rpyc, and .rpya files. And then when you are in game, you press Alt + M to pull up the mod menu to change names and stuff.

I don't know if it's okay for the author to publish the same content comic and game in different partitions , just talking about the quality of the work does deserve a five star .
This one by the author is more like fan work , because the figures in the works almost all appear in well-known works .
The author's work itself creates a different story of women who are open to sexual and male characters with different NTR identities , the overall look is comfortable , and the picture is really good .

To be honest, some of these reviews are ridiculous.

A kinetic novel is a novel with pictures, some moving, with animations at times, with music and sound.
In many ways, you could say it is a novel with some upgrades.
How then can you give a novel that has a bad story and horrible writing a high review?,
Even a perfect one?
Because that is what five stars mean, a game which is great and doesn't have any major flaws that would detract from the best rating possible.

And this KN has a story that borders on the completely meaningless and ridiculous.
Others have mentioned that the plot is basically build like some shota-hentai mangas.
Incestuous couple being blackmailed by another woman to help her start an incestuous relationship with her son.

That's all, but yes, this could still be good, because if done well, such a story could be perfectly serviceable, it is after all a porn KN.
The problem is, that while the renders and basically everything visually works fine, the novel part doesn't.
It's just not good, and it's pretty easy to see that either there was no willingness or no ability to do better.

If you really want nothing more than hot pictures and animations, this will be great for you, but if that was all I wanted, why would I want to read a kinetic novel in the first place? I could just watch porn or the endless animations you can find everywhere online. No, I play games like this (or read, if you prefer that), because I want hot images with good writing and if possibly a good story as well.
You might have guessed that I am not a big fan of the Nukige kind of VN, while reading this review, but if YOU are, this should be just right for you.

Someone here didn't like the plot, well read Shakespeare then and not a Kinetic porn novel.

Yes , the plot is full of holes, but as long as the lewd scenes are this good I don't care. It has good looking LIs, a MC that at least try to be brave (even if his mom push him around) and there some really fun part in this, so it's really worth it's 5* that I give.

As someone else said here, which I totally agree with, this a Kinetic novel that acts just like a Kinetic novel should. So be happy and fap!

That was my thoughts, you don't need to agree, but if you don't agree then you're wrong.

The plot is a bunch of nonsense. Try not to think and you might be able to derive some enjoyment from this.


I can't help but laugh reflecting at how stupid the plot is. As a result, I just couldn't get into this at all. The rest of the writing and dialogue is equally as terrible. Every single character and relationship is poorly developed. Not a whole lot makes sense. None of the characters are likable or relatable. Just a completely soulless experience devoid of any logic or knowledge of how relationships work.

The only positives I can think of are the visuals. But even then it's nothing special.

This might be good for a quick mindless fap, but nothing else.

I really want to like this, but as a kinetic novel the entire point of it is story. It's really hard to get into a story when I'm being constantly pulled out of immersion by robotic writing and strange phrasing. No offense to the creator, and people who don't speak English natively might love this, but as a native speaker, its jarring.

Still though, lots of love for making a kinetic novel, I'd like to see more of these around here. It's a solid experience, so 3/5.

Good graphics. "It's alright..." story. 5 stars. WHY FIVE?

Because here is a dev that makes a Kinetic Novel, knows it's a Kinetic Novel, markets it like a Kinetic Novel and wants Kinetic Novel fans.

Too many devs cave to the "I can just watch porn! Make the game a Visual Novel with branching choices! Make a sandbox!"... and to try and make more money, THOSE devs make:

-A "Visual Novel" with meaningless choices and railroad story i.e. a Kinetic Novel.
-A "Sandbox" where all but one of the locations does NOTHING i.e. a Kinetic Novel.

Have I said "Kinetic Novel" too many times? Yes. Yes I have.
So, just a 5 star "THANK YOU" for a dev that delivers... what they made... a porn story with pictures.

4 stars for a first game its really nice too bad i already read the comics
the music is super the art is amazing as always with mando logica
4 or 5 pics need some reworking
btw i love the poses for females in the game


I look forward to playing this game

Interesting story, interesting characters. Really want to see more.

The relationships between the 3 main characters are ... surprising, but very interesting to hopefully see develop further. The mystery of the pills is intriguing but hopefully not sad, sad news.

Will be waiting for more.

So far so good. Not giving 5 only because there are no animations (at least so far). If I could, I would round it up to 4.5, but it is what it is.
Other than that, good renders and even though the entire novel seems to have already been released, I will wait for it to be released in Ren'Py form.
So for now, I'm analyzing based on the first chapters.