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[kolomodel]

Hi, I've started making transations over a year ago, starting with a mix of unedited Chat GPT and Google MTL, now I mainly focus on manually rewriting AI translations (Chat GPT, DeepSeek V) for catching errors or smoothing things out for actual game. It's not perfect, but personally I think it works better than unedited AI.
I tend to go after older and shorter games, since a lot of more popular games are too big for me to handle or are already translated.
If you like what I'm doing and you have some money to waste I've launched

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- it'll make it easier for me to buy more niche games at DL Site to translate.
From time to time I also make pretty much unedited DeepSeek V AI translations as an introduction to the game before I try to make it better.
Completed translations:

1. SURVIVE: Me, Her and That Guy on the Lost Island (RJ116666) by Star's Dream - F95 game link - I'm not fully satisfied with that translation (especially sex scenes), so I might get back to it after I get better
2. A Country Girl and A Part Time Jobs / 田舎娘と小労働 (RJ246739) by Unidetified Flying Food - F95 game link
3. Housewives Pay You Rent With Their Bodies(RJ324880) by Tomato Baron - F95 game link (it got replaced by official AI translation, but my translation should still be there)
4. The Stone In My Room (RJ372243) by Igmanitia - F95 game link
5. An Airheaded Girl and a Little Adventure (RJ093179) by Unidentified Flying Food - F95 game link

In progress:

Waiting for votes on next projects



Upcoming translations:
(all candidates for next main translation)
Tall & Busty NTR (RJ01155240)
The Exorcist Maid's Special Technique (RJ01299030)
Virgin Time Loop: Make Her Yours Before She Gets R@ped (RJ01085538)

 

[kolomodel]

Here is an late alpha build for A Country Girl and A Part Time Jobs if you want to check it out:

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Most of the maps are edited / ChatGPTed, after I finish that I'll start proper play-tasting / read through and finer editing for better consistency.
The biggest problems are like always sex scenes since Chat GPT is a prude I have to work with other tools that produce far lower quality of translation.
The other problem is Nonona's status you see when you enter game menu - it's part of the game script so I'm far more limited in what I can do if I run out of space or something along this lines. The biggest victim is "LVL" or rather Nonona's "Development Level" - so I had to be very liberal with translation there. "Secret Memories" are also causing me some problems, but I think I'll iron these out during playtesting, for now it's very WIP and sometimes it doesn't reflect what really happend.
If you want to help - there is no point reporting bugs or translation errors at this stage, but I'll apreciate your help in late beta stage.

There seems to be various first partners for Nonona, I'll have to check what you have to do in order to get them, so far I only got

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After MC returns from his adventure there is a "Hidden staircase" somewhere in the main city map that leads to a bonus Bunny Puff Puf scenario - I can't seem to find it. There are also 10 crystal fragments you need to find and give Crystal King inside in order to unlock the event inside,

EDIT
I've managed to find the hidden staircase leading to crystal king, look in the middle of tall grass in the city park.

 

[Trapperxxk]

The road to hell is paved with good intentions. Be ready for shitty comment if you haven't seen them already. Hope you have enough patience.

 

[kolomodel]

1st edit of "A Country Girl and A Part Time Jobs" is complete and it reached what I consider beta 1 stage.
Now all that's left to do is to find time for intense play through and minor tweaking.

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From now on please report to me if you encounter any crashes, bugs (like empty text panels, text going off the screen etc.) or translation so bad your dick went soft after reading it. Just remember to point out when this happened and in case of bad translation - what you think will work better.
Other than that I've tried several styles of "SFX" translation, let me know which you liked more (or hated less). Honestly I'm not a fan of "Chuu, chupa, rorororororo" but it might be lesser evil of the two variants since it was a part of porn translation for several years and "Kiss, lick, suck, slurp, licklicklicklick" might be better without the last one if I decide to mix the two.

@Trapperxxk
I think I'll manage someone talking crap about me or my work, but I hoped for some more interaction. I am aware MTL doesn't have the best reputation, and often for good reason (over half the text being off the screen, crashes, being generally hard to read and understand), however it is possible to get acceptable translation quality with Chat GPT 4 and oversight of a human that more or less knows what should be going on on the screen at the time.

 

[fantasmic]

Other than that I've tried several styles of "SFX" translation, let me know which you liked more (or hated less). Honestly I'm not a fan of "Chuu, chupa, rorororororo" but it might be lesser evil of the two variants since it was a part of porn translation for several years and "Kiss, lick, suck, slurp, licklicklicklick" might be better without the last one if I decide to mix the two.

If you want the opinion of a random passersby: I tend to just romanize the sound effects. I feel that there's no good solution to the problem since English isn't as big on sfx as Japanese is so everything ends up sounding weird, and simply romanizing them saves me a lot of time and brain power when translating. If the dev goes light on sfx I might still translate them, but there are often ones who'll go heavy on the sfx and throw in a lot of variations to represent things like changing intensity or the different skill-level of various participants, and trying to do something like "sluuurp, slup, sl~urp, slorp" feels like a lot of unnecessary work when I already don't have enough time to translate all the games I want to.

 

[kolomodel]

If you want the opinion of a random passersby: I tend to just romanize the sound effects. I feel that there's no good solution to the problem since English isn't as big on sfx as Japanese is so everything ends up sounding weird, and simply romanizing them saves me a lot of time and brain power when translating. If the dev goes light on sfx I might still translate them, but there are often ones who'll go heavy on the sfx and throw in a lot of variations to represent things like changing intensity or the different skill-level of various participants, and trying to do something like "sluuurp, slup, sl~urp, slorp" feels like a lot of unnecessary work when I already don't have enough time to translate all the games I want to.

Thank you for your opinion, do not undervalue it - you are someone more experienced it this than me and in a proper translations too, not just touched up MTL I dabble in. This is more than I hoped for when i made the last post... Especially given lack of reactions earlier... I think I need to advertise this thread better when I make the final upload.
I went with the mix of romanized and translated this time since I already translated everything and just reversed the worst sounding parts, but going almost full romanized for the next game might be better idea. Honestly I remember VNs with moaning streaks longer than some events in A Country Girl and A Part Time Jobs and i can't imagine frying my brain trying to figure out how to make it less repetitive.

 

[archedio]

Hey, good work!

If you want a sure way to translate sfx, you can use these site:

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Anyway, I'm glad we got another translator here. Welcome

 

[Deleted member 7099096]

Ohh its nice to see, someone else is also interested in the Unidentified Flying Food games. ^^

 

[kolomodel]

Some news.
I've decided to put aside very old UFF game I prodded earlier for translating a very diffrent game.
Namely "Housewives Pay You Rent With Their Bodies" by Tomato Baron - as the name suggests it's about about getting sexy housewives to cheat on their husbands with MC. There is a lot of text so translating it is going to take a lot of time, but I'm making decent progress so far.
The good news is - this game is hot as fuck and uncensored by chinese translation group so I shouldn't have any problems being motivated. I already figured out how to extract and inject modified pictures into the game, so the heroines status screen is going to be translated as well... I can't guarantee it won't look like shit though, since my graphic skills are pretty bad.

• Intro is tested and tweaked
• Saori's apartment events are about halfway translated but not properly tested - 1st breast play (1st mandatory event) and 1st milky hand-job are tested and tweaked
• Kyoko's and Anna's apartmets are only Google MTLed so far, but big chunk of text is damaged or untranslated since Google crapped out from too much requests in a row (over 1200 panels each)
• Some of the maps are not translated at all (including recollection room)
• Status images not translated yet (currently in chinese)
• You can change the MC's name, but the font has too much space between roman alphabet letters, so it looks a bit weird - I don't know if I'll be able to fix that.

 

[kolomodel]

A kind of monthly update. Later half of December and start of January are usually tougher periods at my work, so I was mostly too exhausted to translate Housewives Pay You Rent, but I made some progress despite that.

The current progress is
intro - initial translation 100%, some edits are done, possible further edits (I'm not sure about several spots).
Kyoko (1st, aloof one) - roughly 50% initial translation, no edits done
Saori (2nd, big titty) - about 100% translated (I think I missed part of the segment gotta check that), I did some initial edits to early events, but left checking for later, more complete translation of other housewives to waste less time
Anna (3rd, tanned blonde) - pretty much nothing translated yet.
Other smaller maps - pretty much nothing translated yet
Status image editing - did initial work and some small edits with Saori status screen - as I said earlier - I'm pretty shit with graphic editing so it's a bit ugly, but readable.

... At least I hope so. It's easy to spot my "wiping" of the original text, but hey - at least it wasn't partially transparent originally - that would look little kid doodled on it after I would be done with it.
I might need to move "Years old" a bit further to the right or change the font size for the name or names of the h-events for better cinsistency, bu I think it should work.

Other than that - some of the roleplaying in this game is getting women to start using vulgar language during sex with MC, it's getting auto-translated pretty mildly in my opinion and I'm planning to turn it up a bit. Grown women stutterring over a p-p-pussy...♡ sounds pretty dumb.

Also - I'm thinking about launching a patreon somewhere January / February with 1$ tier, dunno if it'll work out but "Coffe" is at 0 tips which is a bit sad...

 

[kolomodel]

Hi, I've launched my

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, I wasn't able to set up a 1$ tip tier - the lowest I could set it up is 15PLN which is 4USD / 4 EUR (the conversion will most likely change at some point in the future, but I don't know which way) there is a -50% promo for the next 30 days for the 1st month of the subscription
The promo code is HELLO
As for the progress report: Kyoko and Saori apartments initial translation is complete, I'm currently translating Anna. I'll let you guys know when I reach "beta" (full initial translation) stage but if you want regular progress reports please become at least free tier member on my Patreon.

 

[kolomodel]

The beta version of the Housewives Pay You Rent With Their Bodies is out, you can check it here: THREAD
Everything seems to be translated, I "just" need to test and tweak it now...

 

[Narak8813]

Hey man great work with Housewives Pay You Rent With Their Bodies ,really really enjoyed the game and your translation keep up the good work.
I hope to see someday the other Tomato Baron game translated as well.

 

[kolomodel]

Hey man great work with Housewives Pay You Rent With Their Bodies ,really really enjoyed the game and your translation keep up the good work.
I hope to see someday the other Tomato Baron game translated as well.

Glad you liked it. Ayako's Scramble is already AI translated by DazedAnon GAME it's not perfect, but it actually makes sense when you read it, which wasn't guaranteed back in the day. Just make sure to download updates / fixes from Git.

 

[Narak8813]

Glad you liked it. Ayako's Scramble is already AI translated by DazedAnon GAME it's not perfect, but it actually makes sense when you read it, which wasn't guaranteed back in the day. Just make sure to download updates / fixes from Git.

Oh i see thank you for the heads,then looking foward for your next game.

 

[kolomodel]

I'm slowly getting closer to completing the translation of An Airheaded Girl and a Little Adventure - only a few maps left to translate. I'll be posting the final alpha version here (patched game, not just the patch) then trying to improve it even if a little.

On other news I've started the AI translation for Tall & Busty NTR : Until My Invincible Childhood Friends Rejoice At Being Inseminated With The Lowest Scum's Inferior Genes - just DeepSeek V3 translation + edits for fixing the tags and getting the text to fit the screen.

On other news - I got kicked from Buy Me a Coffe, so I'm being a little more cautious on Patreon. I mean it's not like I earned anything on either platform, but hopes are free.

 

[kolomodel]

Hi, there is link to the "final alpha" version of the translation, there are still a lot of errors and it needs plenty of additional love, but it seems to more or less work now.

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I'll be also posting a new translation of The Stone In My Room in games, should be up soon.

 

[kolomodel]

Hi, unedited AI trasnlations for
The Exorcist Maid's Special Technique (RJ01299030) Maid
and
Virgin Time Loop: Make Her Yours Before She Gets R@ped (RJ01085538) VTL
are finally up, I hoped that I'd finish it last week, but as usual "stuff happened". Both games will be on the potential to be translated list, so you can vote on it on my Patreon when the time will come (hopefully this year).

 

[kolomodel]

Final beta translation of An Airheaded Girl and a Little Adventure is in the attachement, extract it and replace the previous one.
Let me know if you spot any bugs.