I appreciate the depth of thought demonstrated in the writing. It tries a little harder than simply evoking familiar tropes and archetypes (which aren't by any means bad; honestly a lot of games on this site could be better if their creators understood how to do this more effectively). The protagonist and the people around him have rarely rivaled depth and complexity to their backstories and the relationships they've already developed with themselves, their objectives, and the people around them. I'm not going to suggest it's perfect but it shows far more effort and sincere interest on the behalf of the writer than I am used to seeing in modern AVNs.
My main criticism would be that it often meanders into some conversations that, while perhaps more realistic in their durations, can feel a bit tedious for a reader who has already ascertained the salient points.
As an autist I can relate to some amount of ignorance/selective intelligence on behalf of the MC, and I understand that it's one of the easiest ways to ensure that a story builds and maintains suspense, but I still find characters who are wildly inconsistent in demonstrating their strengths decreasingly sympathetic especially when their denial/improbable daftness becomes tediously repetitious.
I found the Friday evening exchange with colleagues regarding one of this site's key, disproportionately heavily represented, fetishes (whereby tenants are drawn into sexual relationships with their landlords and/or landladies and fellow tenants) very amusing and interesting since I absolutely agree with the points being raised about how profoundly unethical, inappropriate, and even unnatural the concept is and I imagine that exposing some of the less commonly cited reasons why such relationships are not just taboo but typically unlawful may prove an unpopular move in communities with similar makeup to the one in this forum. Nonetheless, as revolting as I find the topic I appreciated the boldness and novelty of discussing it in this format. Although it seems all but guaranteed that, depending on player choices, an intensely implausible instance of inadvertent, ignorant, incest may be imminent, or at least the suspicion of such an eventual situation is being very deliberately cultivated.
The admittedly thus far scarce scenes are quite well done, if that's what you're here for, the creator forewarns they may feel 'vanilla' but I am one who acknowledges that vanilla is the most popularly produced flavour of ice cream in the world because it's among the absolute best; it's everywhere because it's that good.
I look forward to seeing more of this game and, in a one of the better futures, more games like it.