VN - Ren'Py - Leaving DNA [Ep. 4.3a] [Impious Monk]

This is easily one of the most well-written and thoughtful VNs ever made. Every detail feels meticulously thought-out and researched, the dialog is intelligent and playful, and the story is perfectly paced, gradually unfolding with twists and turns that never feel out of place. It isn't a game focused on sex scenes and if you go into this expecting that, you'll be disappointed. There aren't a lot of choices either, but it didn't matter to me since the narrative was so intriguing. It's a game focused on story, themes, emotion, relationships, and mental health.

This is very much story first and lewd scenes taking a back seat for the majority of the VN. There is so much court room drama and case work. While the main plot is fascinating with many mysteries and secrets being up in the air. Involving MCs past and his family, it does drag on too much and any element of fun is nowhere to be seen. The main court case shown with the huge amount of discussion is quite boring and unnecessary. It takes up so much time for a gang killing just to show some metaphor meaning. This could have been done over a few minutes so easily. Not take up at least an hours worth of game time. Or at least have a better case to show it off. As it contributes nothing to the actual story.

The renders are really good. Although the first chapter is very stiff with the poses, its gets much better as the game goes on. The animations are good too but theres hardly any of them. Women are ok but nothing great. To me i didn't find any that were that unique or had good personalities. They do vary with appearances and body shape which is nice. Environments are well filled out with care gone in to fill out the Court room with people, cars are filling car parks, although half of the time that is not the case also. With empty waiting rooms, offices, etc. Needs more consistency.

If you plan on viewing this VN for sex or any sort of hot teasing and lewd scenes.... forget about it. Theres hardly any, in fact on certain playthroughs you might only get one sex scene over many hours worth of game time! The flirting options are not flirting lol, its basically just a few seconds of asking them out to dinner! There was nothing sexy about this game at all. None of the situations are hot or exciting. This is more like a depressing courtroom drama TV show, with MCs damaged psyche and all the women around him being a similar vain too.

The variables of which women you choose to try have a relationship with is restricted to one or two. Even then I still couldn't get a sex scene with any of them! My choices were always greyed out. Maybe there was an issue in the variable coding?

Writing is fine, quite detailed (probably overly so) if a bit robotic at times. Everything seems to have such a serious tone all the time. Even when they do look like having fun for a brief moment, it will quickly change to very serious topics instantly. Choices are extremely limited and some don't even make much of a difference.
Episode 4.3 seemed to add in all these cliche twists and unnecessary surprises. Almost as if the dev felt it was getting stagnant and decided to mix it up as much as he could. I dont think I'll continue with this VN. While the main story is engaging, nothing else is at all. When your relationships and lewd scenes are the worst part of your adult game, that's always a major problem!!

I can't recall being this bored while going through an adult game. Renders are high quality, but character models are fairly generic. Uninteresting characters, uninteresting setting, uninteresting plot. Very few artists can handle "dark" topics in a manner that is still entertaining, this is not one of those cases. All this "slow burn" attempts resulting in silly over the top sex scenes, which makes the whole journey unnecessarily stuck-up. Needless to say my disbelief was not suspended, and my libido was not entertained.

The game currently is more like a four star with the potential to be a solid five in the future, however I gave the game a five regardless due to the way it tackles certain themes in an extremely mature way. The relationship between MC and Malena is incredibly relatable for me, to the point where I actually started thinking about my own past experiences and choices, this was honestly a massive bias as to why I bumped it up to a five.

Renders are great, animations are top notch, models are absolutely up there with the best in the genre, especially Jamie and Malena.

I don't want to waffle on for too long so I'll just say, Malena is her.

Excellent writing, really nice and different girls. The story is interesting - I didn't even notice that sex scenes are rare. And I really like the main character - he's believable, he's not simple.
And I'm really fond of Coleen - I have a disabled daughter myself, and Coleen looks really "realistic".

PROS
- Decent render quality, animations are very smooth.
- The story is successful in keeping you interested for more. The characters are very well written although there is a frustrating issue which we will get to later.
- I love that choices matter and each character has a significant level of branching for their routes. Not everything is lazily thrown into a harem route where the girls are jumping into bed with MC for no reason other than porn game reasons. You really feel that decisions have somewhat of an impact rather than being an illusion of choice like in many other VNs.

CONS
- I feel like the dev just has this thinking that it's not good writing unless I subvert expectations at every possible moment type of belief. This belief went into overdrive with Episode 4.

• Jaime drama, I really see no reason to refuse the kiss. This is the guy you were crazy about and crushed on since the beginning, finally returning your feelings. I understand leaving to Harvard if it stayed platonic but he finally did something she has been waiting forever for. Everything the game has established so far tell us that Jaime prioritizes her feelings for the MC over her career ambitions hence why she stayed at the district attorney's office rather than doing something far greater than that. So she suddenly reverses her decision at this crucial moment? She suddenly decides a career is more important than her feelings?
• Malena drama, what I don't understand is that MC did not like his father's actions. He despised him for the violence and murders. So he actually shared Malena's opinions. Only until that post-sex scene, he suddenly changed tune and wants a relationship with his murdering father? I feel like the dev was like "ok this relationship is going too well, I need to find a reason to create some friction here and subvert expectations"

I'm kinda getting last season of GoT vibes where the authors try to subvert expectations at every opportunity to impress people but it comes at a price of being nonsensical at times. A good writer knows how to balance literary devices so its not overused and doesn't come across as cheap.

I wrote a review earlier that wondered why this game would be getting such across-the-board approbation. I must confess that I had not gotten far enough into the game to discover its value. I will now eat a bowl of crow and declare that I was wrong. It IS in fact that rarity, for me -- a five-star VN.
Some of the very best writing I've seen, wonderfully detailed and nuanced relationships, and a solid MC.
My only quibble: there is a scene early on where the MC and his non-threatening Cuba Gooding stand-in friend are shooting hoops and come across a well-dressed white woman being accosted, in preparation for a gang rape, by a gang of 8-10 Chinese 'thugs' (they are called, sequentially, Thug 1, Thug 2, etc.) And the quality of their own artistic depiction is unusually bad. Not character-wise, but just artistically BAD. And BTW, where on earth is this happening? It seemed just so cartoony and unbelievable to me. I mean, even in Rochdale, the dirty deeds were done on the sly, but this? With these 2 huge fat Chinese Boss men hanging around to 'call it off'? Come on.
And BOY, the MC sure can be pig-headedly selfish in his self-flagellating way sometimes, esp in Ch 4.
Other than that, though, it's a smash IMO. The intelligent writing, smart dialogue, a winning waif of an ADA that everyone seems to want for the MC while he remains blind, a spritually broken, wise-cracking, HOT best friend of another hot LI. And at the trial where she herself is prosecutor, the display of the 12 jury members, with all their detailed expressions, is impressive.
I am glad so very many players were so very agog . I count myself, now, among them. Bravo.

Highly engaging story, not a fuck-fest & you need to be careful which of the LIs (currently 4) that you choose. I say that because choosing one will lock you out from the others, so you need to make sure you make the right choice! Bit like RL.
But this game is all about the story & I found it engrossing & well written.
LIs are all interesting characters and, although it's subjective, I found them each to carry distinct appeal.

Recommended to anyone who wants a good AV "Novel", but not for those who want to jump into bed with the latest hot chick.
I don't give 5 stars, because for me that means perfection & no game is perfect. But the story here is strong enough to give it 4.
Highly recommended.

Episode 4 really has destroyed this game.

Incest without an incest tag absolutely is not needed and has now been confirmed by Dev they are not gonna work around that. Already wasn't a big fan of that character to begin with. Jamie path is extremely slow burn but then admit feelings and she is now leaving. Ugh.

Prior to Episode 4 I would have said 4.5 star game not the top tier but right below, now I am rethinking this game.

We're now also getting into politics maybe and oh now we're changing who the father is and colleen isn;t related (or maybe she still is?) IDK especially with ep's 6-8 all neededing to come out together.

I'll re-evaluate this later but I can't call this an Elite Tier AVN that everyone says it is. Its good but its not that great either

I wanted to thank you, Impious Monk, for talking about difficult subjects, such as incest and rape survival with such care.

Once you've read about 100+ VNs, there comes a time when you're desensitised about some subjects, and incest has been one such case for me. Thank you for setting me straight. And thank you for treating rape survival with the care it deserves: there's just too many VNs out there that use it as a tool to create a "profound backstory" and nothing else. It irks me quite a lot.

So far I've really liked the story, even if it borders to soap opera at times (please understand I mean no offense; I quite like the story, but when you add up everything happening to the MC, it sometimes feels surreal), but my focus always is on the characters, which are really fleshed out, with a non-(please insert yourself here) MC, which is refreshing to me. Plus, I know nothing about laws and trials, so I feel like I'm learning some stuff.

I'll be following this one closelyy and I advise everyone who's looking for a good character-driven VN to try this one out, it's worth your time.

Cheers!

It’s hard to put into words just how incredible this game is. From start to finish, it keeps you completely hooked. The story is deeply engaging, and I found myself fully immersed about 90% of the time. Every character feels alive, masterfully written with real depth and personality. It even has the power to make you cry, especially when meeting a certain sweetheart.

From a storytelling perspective, this is easily one of the top five visual novels I’ve ever played. I’m writing this just after the ending of Episode 3, about to dive into Episode 4, and I’m absolutely hooked.

On the technical side, the developer seems to release updates every six months to a year. However, the sheer amount of content and the quality of renders more than make up for the wait—the updates are massive.

Honestly, there are so many great things to say about this game that it’s hard to list them all. It’s simply too good to pass up. For your own sake, give it a try.

Huge respect to the developer. This has been an absolute pleasure to play.

5 stars on all front.
Story: engaging but not silly or far-fetched (so far!)
Writing: the dialogues feel natural, and I really enjoy that the characters have principles and serious conversations and that you can really feel their inner emotional and intellectual life. They're not empty vessels, they have a life of their own.
Visuals: it looks great, and I appreciate the small changes in faces showing the characters reactions.

The one thing that bugs me so far? Someone having a mezzanine with no guardrail. And they're dancing drunk up there

If you relish the "novel" bit from AVN, playing this is a no-brainer. If you don't, play it all the same, you'll enjoy it!

One of the best VN's that I have played. The renders are really good and the story is also well written.

Its nice to see that all girls have their purpose. This VN is definitely not for anyone who just wants sex. Story is the most important aspect of this VN and it has not disappointed so far.

I have noticed that the update time is a bit slow but the dev makes up for it through the renders and playtime. There is no lag or anything like there is no scene just as a filler.

Would definitely recommend this game to anyone who wants a good story

I’ve played a lot of games from this site, but I can’t remember any other that hooks you THAT MUCH, damn... It might lack choices for some people, or the animations might not be the best, but the writing is what makes this AVN shine in all its glory. It’s all about the absolutely amazing, well-written, and captivating story, which gave me movie-like vibes so many times. As for other aspects, the graphics range from stunning to above average, the characters are likable and feel believable, and the music is okay, more or less (in my opinion, this is the only area that could be improved). Can't wait to see what will happen next, strongly recommended to play.

For those who like a game focused on history, you will definitely like this one because it is very good both in terms of the mysteries it has and the drama, the love interests are few but they are well worked and each one has their own story and their dramas, but they also have charisma. The protagonist is the type who is disbelieving in life, but not the boring type, but the type that you root for him to be happy and lastly, there is still the drama with his sister, which so far has been the one that has made me the saddest, I felt sorry for her. So this is an excellent game for those who like a good story and a good drama.

Masterpiece. An incredible story that's captivating from start to finish. Twists and turns throughout that engage you unlike anything else I've played before. Amazing writing, characters, development.

Decided to pick this up the day of the release on Steam, and I'm very glad that I did. And now that we're halfway through the 8 episodes, it's only fair I give it the five stars it deserves.
Very strong writing, both plot and characters (Colleen interactions have me in tears every time I play them), good looking renders, excellent music. Doesn't throw lewds at you at every corner, and doesn't treat the player like a horny idiot, both of which are appreciated.
Epsiode 4 ending will definitely ruffle some feathers. As for the love interests, Malena is still the best and most interesting girl here, with most questions still unanswered. After all, she's the one on the main menu screen for a reason.All I can selfishly ask for is more of her!
One of those times you wish you had a time machine, so you could skip ahead to the next episode release. Goes without saying, but if you happen to be reading this review, I strongly recommend checking this out if you haven't already.

Leaving DNA is one of best AVN that I ever played. The story very Engaging and Compelling it's one of those AVN that you will play for the story not for sex scene. The Emotional impact it does for me are realistic and compelling every character has deep and realistic feel to them. And Visual are Excellent maybe the best of All AVN that i played the scene are beautiful and refined i will totally recommending this all AVN Players..... A MUST PLAY AVN.

STORY 10/10
VISUALS 10/10
MC LOOKS 100/10 One of Best Looking MC
Li 10/10

Without a doubt the finest AVN on this site. While it is true that the sex scenes are sporadic and the animations are average, the overall presentation feels REAL: the story, the dialogue, the relationships, the emotions, everything is just so well-crafted.

From the first scene to the end of episode 3 I was gripped by everything, from deep empathy with the victims, really immersed myself into the life of the MC and the mystery is better done than most TV/Movies.

Honestly, it is a clear 6/5, best on site.

Overall excellent AVN so far. A little lacking in sex scenes, but when the story and characters are compelling, it heavily makes up for it. I also appreciate how much the plot moves along with each episode, the first was a good introduction to the world and characters, the second expanded on it and introduced real stakes, and the third has kicked things up a notch and gotten things really moving. The characters are all very fun to interact with and see their stories, I am enjoying Jamies the most, but I can understand why the others might be favorites as well. Overall, I want more, and can't wait for more updates. 9.8/10