HUGE debut. Really one of the most fleshed-out, robust v.1's I've ever seen on the site. As a rule I don't try v.1's of a game but I'm glad I broke that rule this time.
PROs
Corruption mechanic
Lots of venues to explore (home/train/work/online) would love to see school too!
Lots of cute voyeuristic touches. Panty peeks, etc. I LOVE little touches like that.
CONs
Personally, not a fan of the Honey Select aesthetic. IMHO it looks more apropos to Silent Hill than to a fun sex game..
Some events get very tedious and grindy without any apparent reward (house cleaning, sitting with the customers)
SUGGESTIONS
Add backstops or "Under Construction" when the player fully explores a branch or mechanic.
Hard to see patrons in their seats (birds eye view) so just a little graphic contrast would help.
Add one more female to the game, just to season her corruption. A rival waitress that sabotages her, the landlord's curious daughter or jealous wife that loves to prank and tease our MC.
The online story and the waitressing story intersecting. Maybe she eventually gets the ability to livestream her shift, so sub will try to bribe her to bend over in front of customers, work with no panties on, sit on customers' laps, etc.
The comparison to Corruptions Town (which I also love) is warranted, so look for ways to differentiate your game.
More outifts, of course! Gotta spend all this money on something!
PROs
Corruption mechanic
Lots of venues to explore (home/train/work/online) would love to see school too!
Lots of cute voyeuristic touches. Panty peeks, etc. I LOVE little touches like that.
CONs
Personally, not a fan of the Honey Select aesthetic. IMHO it looks more apropos to Silent Hill than to a fun sex game..
Some events get very tedious and grindy without any apparent reward (house cleaning, sitting with the customers)
SUGGESTIONS
Add backstops or "Under Construction" when the player fully explores a branch or mechanic.
Hard to see patrons in their seats (birds eye view) so just a little graphic contrast would help.
Add one more female to the game, just to season her corruption. A rival waitress that sabotages her, the landlord's curious daughter or jealous wife that loves to prank and tease our MC.
The online story and the waitressing story intersecting. Maybe she eventually gets the ability to livestream her shift, so sub will try to bribe her to bend over in front of customers, work with no panties on, sit on customers' laps, etc.
The comparison to Corruptions Town (which I also love) is warranted, so look for ways to differentiate your game.
More outifts, of course! Gotta spend all this money on something!