Ren'Py - Life as an Innocent Waitress [v0.1.0] [Frisson Studios]

This title manages to stand out thanks to its enthralling theme about the protagonist's corruption, an approach that is developed in an enveloping and well-worked way. without falling into moments of slowness, which keeps the player hooked from beginning to end.



Despite being its first release, it surprises for its length, offering an extensive and well-structured experience.



While the cleaning system is a striking mechanic, it could benefit from greater clarity in certain areas, such as in the father's room, where it is difficult to notice some details. Even so, this does not tarnish the whole, as the game shows great potential and leaves the feeling that its future will be very promising.

Great game so far with hot scenes and a decent set up for corruption based gameplay, a lot of stuff is in work right now, but for an early release there is actually a decent amount of content so far. I'm definitely looking forward to how this game is going to pan out.

The only things that I would say really need improvement would be making the overall gameplay loop more streamlined and a little less repetitive (like more improvements and quicker bar portions and cleaning minigames though it is not that big of a deal and if it doesnt change it wont be a problem either).

Another thing I want to point out is the setting is supposed to be a future where women have less rights and not treated as well, but it honestly just feels like a poor family trying to find jobs and make money and everyone pretty much treats the girl nice (for example the bar keeper is super nice to her and even the patrons to even though they grope her). What I'm getting at here is the game probably needs the characters to be more misogynistic in comments or something to match the setting to be portrayed better as right now it just feels like they are just horny and average pervets rather than men part of a society that looks down on women in the game. It's not that big of a deal tbh though I think it would help the setting more to show how the world is really out to get her like the description claims.

Please make the dust clouds in the cleaning mini game a little easier to see. It's madness to have white-ish semi-transparent clouds against backdrops of primarily white walls.

Other than that, this is great.

Pretty interesting corruption. Could use a bit more writing but the female and male thought POV is interesting and the minigame is great! Angelica herself is a good character and it's good how it tries to set up with the other roommates, especially Willy. Kev and Bev however turned out to be quite surprising. Gregory however just feels a bit flat, but it's 0.1 so I won't really count that as a negative yet, more has to be seen. The patrons are all typical flirty guys which I love for this kind of game so I'm hoping some of them get some fleshing out with events outside of the bar.