Iam not a guy for the short ones... i like slowburns, and a build up in VNs.
But i liked this opne here... its not a game just for porn. The DEVs have a story to tell about a broken merriage and what this thing can do with the people... not very complex, but short and easy to relate too.
There are some flaws, but nothing is perfect.
I only played the part with james. Its not really my cup of tea to play female protagonists... i learned that i just cant relate to them in any way, no matter how good the writing is. (i read many books too where the main protagonist is female, always had problems with that, cant really tell why)
So playing a guy who has cheated on his wife was a little bit strange... i hate cheater, very much. Would never do it to my love.
I liked the short "random" encounter with the girls and how turning them down makes it very clear how remorseful James can be, and how much he regreted to hurt his wife. Though it was kinda odd that every girl in the game wanted to have sex in a instant with james... of course i looked the scenes up, but played the game through to get back keeley.
The sex-scenes are decent, animatiosn are not that good, would have been better without i would say.
the overall renders are top, yeah there are many complains about the "hairy" part, and i have to say, i dont like that either... but besides its a question of "taste" i have to say, the pubichair looks really strange in the game. Dont know.... not well made, and strange too cause the renders overall are top notch, but the pubic hair is really strange and gross. Not a big thing, but i mention it cause most of the girls have it in this game.
I looked up the other games of tora productions, but they didnt catch me...
Maybe the two of you could do a larger game in the future, with bigger story to tell, but maybe youre not made for this, cause you dont want to write and work on the same game for many years. But i think you could actually pull off something great, cause your story-writing is really good i think.