Wow, just wow,
I was sertenly captivated and swept away in this story.
The writing is pretty good, combined with the renders most of it feels spot on, I was feeling tens on the darker notes of the story and felt good at the erotism parts the latter might give a feeling of "i miss something in dept before this point", but then again its puberty we are talking about hehe.
I was surprised at how much content there was for the v0.1 release.
so to translate this a bit:
Pro's:
* Good renders (from what i understand they will be even better in the future, if they find the funds for improving hardware.)
* Strong story, most of it is nice in dept.
* The animations are good (only the last animation could be a bit nicer, though i do understand why its out of dept/faded.)
* I have a somewhat mixed feeling about the characters persona, (saintlike vs evil) but i guess if you take note of a few key notes, this will become even more pleasant in future updates (diversity).
Con's:
* The only real problem i have right now is the jump (in timeline) between some scene's, you jump from one place to another in another timeframe, wich sometimes is quite confusing, a simple fix for this would even be a black frame telling you "5 hours later you arive..." or before you go here you do that. So you dont need a render if you dont want to, but might be a little extra
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So all in all, verry good work, keep on going, i for one am lusting for more of this story.