the art and concept are decent -- the writing isn't bad -- but some key features still desperately need to be addressed. you need a skip or a fast mode. this game is SO dialogue-heavy with no way out. there's no saving from within a conversation and it can take an unbearably long time to finish a conversation sometimes. skip features also allow an easier route back if a save gets corrupted or there are issues moving from one update to the next. if I have to start from the beginning on a future update and I don't have a skip feature, I'm going to consider this game a lost cause and leave it.
along a similar vein -- the story/dialogue to lewd content ratio is off. sometimes a slow burn is good, but I think the dev should consider staggering characters, so that you get some content with one girl relatively quickly, and it keeps you interested while you work on the next, and the next. You have a LONG path to get to any real content.
this game shows some promise, but given how many comments are on here, how long it's been in dev, and it hasn't made some key adjustments, I don't hold out a lot of hope for it. would be glad for the dev to prove my cynicism unfounded.