It's not a bad story. I'd even say it's quite good so long as you choose the obvious options. I admit that I will pick up a spoiler or walkthrough for most VN's for the sake of finding the one or more optimum end results.
The low rating however is for the fact that the choices given are simply for dialogue, and are pretty futile. I already know the "correct" choice with minimal effort, and even attempting to steer any sort of path has no real immediate effect. There is even an early moment when an NPC is warning you to not lead the girl on, and without any choice at all you begin massaging and then snuggling with her. Any more level response only serves to make the MC look like a douchbag as Mary first looks at you with disappointment, and then the two of you immediately start snogging.
I get it... the title is "Life With Mary". We all know what the end result is supposed to be, but the options given may as well simply be limited to one; the "correct" response. It would be better to give the player the option to be the aggressor or the defender - if the player tries to cool it down, you can still have Mary batter away at his defences so long as her relationship points are high enough, and still continue the story. Instead, I find a lot of moments where I would play cool and then start sucking Mary's face.
Aside from the lack of real control, the story isn't bad, and the characters aren't bad. The immersion only fails when you try to swim against the current and so long as you avoid that you should like this game... It's just a little tough to call it a game when there seems to be little real control.
The low rating however is for the fact that the choices given are simply for dialogue, and are pretty futile. I already know the "correct" choice with minimal effort, and even attempting to steer any sort of path has no real immediate effect. There is even an early moment when an NPC is warning you to not lead the girl on, and without any choice at all you begin massaging and then snuggling with her. Any more level response only serves to make the MC look like a douchbag as Mary first looks at you with disappointment, and then the two of you immediately start snogging.
I get it... the title is "Life With Mary". We all know what the end result is supposed to be, but the options given may as well simply be limited to one; the "correct" response. It would be better to give the player the option to be the aggressor or the defender - if the player tries to cool it down, you can still have Mary batter away at his defences so long as her relationship points are high enough, and still continue the story. Instead, I find a lot of moments where I would play cool and then start sucking Mary's face.
Aside from the lack of real control, the story isn't bad, and the characters aren't bad. The immersion only fails when you try to swim against the current and so long as you avoid that you should like this game... It's just a little tough to call it a game when there seems to be little real control.