The best part of this VN is that it is finished. And I would even doubt to call it finished, since the ending is rather abrupt.
The art is pretty poor. The facial expressions are basic, the hairstyles are the ones you've seen in a thousand DAZ games (probably the top free hairstyles) the bodies are pretty basic sexy bodies (slim with big tits). The only thing that is good about them is that they're not too uncanny. Only in one case the breasts just looked like misshapen lumps.
The writing has issues. I didn't mind the spelling mistakes or grammar errors. The problem is the flow. At one point your mother is angry with you when she
, then she's depressed
, then she gets horny and
. And this happens in 10 lines. She goes from
. Characters are shouting at each other for one line, then chill out and talk normally. Maybe this is a leftover from how different routes intersect.
The romantic buildup is also weak. Yes, they don't all immediately jump your bones, but it didn't really feel like they're slowly falling for eachother either. They talk a few times, then decide to fuck.
In the end I felt that the author didn't want to be stuck with his first creation for a long time. He wanted a clean slate so he could carry over all he learned, without being stuck with outdated models or characters. That is fine, and he did at least give an ending, but his next project seems to have died after it's first demo release.
The art is pretty poor. The facial expressions are basic, the hairstyles are the ones you've seen in a thousand DAZ games (probably the top free hairstyles) the bodies are pretty basic sexy bodies (slim with big tits). The only thing that is good about them is that they're not too uncanny. Only in one case the breasts just looked like misshapen lumps.
The writing has issues. I didn't mind the spelling mistakes or grammar errors. The problem is the flow. At one point your mother is angry with you when she
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The romantic buildup is also weak. Yes, they don't all immediately jump your bones, but it didn't really feel like they're slowly falling for eachother either. They talk a few times, then decide to fuck.
In the end I felt that the author didn't want to be stuck with his first creation for a long time. He wanted a clean slate so he could carry over all he learned, without being stuck with outdated models or characters. That is fine, and he did at least give an ending, but his next project seems to have died after it's first demo release.