A waste of time.
The game suffered from its very inception, made worse by the attempted translation of it.
Discussion of the translation effort comes first, for is which you will experience this visual novel.
It fails on two levels: literary and technical.
Whilst I do not mean it as an insult, the level and finesse of translation presented here is on par with Google Translate. From a decade ago.
The telling of how little oversight the utilisation of the translation software saw is evident by the word choices made, for they are so idiosyncratic and disorganised that a speaker of a language would not be able to create in such manner for the very neurons of their brain would demand some logic be present to it.
Punctuation is rather shy, occasionally reminding the reader of its existence via the iconic triple exclamation mark (!!!) and the occasional question mark (which placement is questionable one too often). Fortunately, the comma and other such advanced literary techniques are much reserved.
It succeeds only in conveying more than the original Japanese text does, a feat which is admittedly is not very high.
On a technical level, there exists a plethora of issues, most egregious of which is the doubling of words and sentences. The sloppy translation already requires the furrowing of eyebrows, repetition serves only to disturb lines of thought and forces the reader to refocus on just what the fuck is being attempted to be conveyed.
The bleed of text from one textbox to the next is equally tiring, with sentences beginning and ending at awkward places which further complicates the understanding of writing being present. This issue could easily be avoided with minimal effort being applied to formatting, but alas it was not done so.
As for the actual game itself: it's boring.
The story requires no choices for one (which is not a negative by itself), however it lacks anything of interest.
The characters are basic and uninteresting, difficult to be even labelled as stereotypes for how simple they are.
Admittedly I cannot remember much anything of the story beyond sections of entertainingly bad quality, which should be telling of just what is being on display here.
I suspect many will seek to experience the visual novel for its yuri/lesbian content, which is admittedly there, but it fails to evolve into much of anything.
Art is equally unmoving, with perspectives in particular suffering under the artist's efforts of utilisation. There are a few scenes, for many of which you will be staring at an utterly obliterated anus. Doubt it will bring much arousal to even those who are into that sort of thing.
Alas, the ending comes sudden and out of nowhere, and plummets to its death with great velocity. The swirling of matter before dropping down in the blow of a toilet as it gets flushed is an unironic comparison to be had for the summary of the whole story.
I cannot recommend this visual novel to anyone, for it lacks anything substance to interest let alone arouse, with the translation applied over it further degrading the experience.
The game suffered from its very inception, made worse by the attempted translation of it.
Discussion of the translation effort comes first, for is which you will experience this visual novel.
It fails on two levels: literary and technical.
Whilst I do not mean it as an insult, the level and finesse of translation presented here is on par with Google Translate. From a decade ago.
The telling of how little oversight the utilisation of the translation software saw is evident by the word choices made, for they are so idiosyncratic and disorganised that a speaker of a language would not be able to create in such manner for the very neurons of their brain would demand some logic be present to it.
Punctuation is rather shy, occasionally reminding the reader of its existence via the iconic triple exclamation mark (!!!) and the occasional question mark (which placement is questionable one too often). Fortunately, the comma and other such advanced literary techniques are much reserved.
It succeeds only in conveying more than the original Japanese text does, a feat which is admittedly is not very high.
On a technical level, there exists a plethora of issues, most egregious of which is the doubling of words and sentences. The sloppy translation already requires the furrowing of eyebrows, repetition serves only to disturb lines of thought and forces the reader to refocus on just what the fuck is being attempted to be conveyed.
The bleed of text from one textbox to the next is equally tiring, with sentences beginning and ending at awkward places which further complicates the understanding of writing being present. This issue could easily be avoided with minimal effort being applied to formatting, but alas it was not done so.
As for the actual game itself: it's boring.
The story requires no choices for one (which is not a negative by itself), however it lacks anything of interest.
The characters are basic and uninteresting, difficult to be even labelled as stereotypes for how simple they are.
Admittedly I cannot remember much anything of the story beyond sections of entertainingly bad quality, which should be telling of just what is being on display here.
I suspect many will seek to experience the visual novel for its yuri/lesbian content, which is admittedly there, but it fails to evolve into much of anything.
Art is equally unmoving, with perspectives in particular suffering under the artist's efforts of utilisation. There are a few scenes, for many of which you will be staring at an utterly obliterated anus. Doubt it will bring much arousal to even those who are into that sort of thing.
Alas, the ending comes sudden and out of nowhere, and plummets to its death with great velocity. The swirling of matter before dropping down in the blow of a toilet as it gets flushed is an unironic comparison to be had for the summary of the whole story.
I cannot recommend this visual novel to anyone, for it lacks anything substance to interest let alone arouse, with the translation applied over it further degrading the experience.