The following review is based off my personal experience with playing this Game/Visual Novel... I try to be as brutally honest and detailed as I can, and these are my own opinions and thoughts, from one or more play throughs... The version this review is based on is v0.2b...
Originally Reviewed on 12/21/2017
I tried this introduction a couple times to see some of the choice paths, and it's alright so far... It's a little more focused on the sex scenes than I'ld prefer in an erotic visual novel, as I prefer more balance between the script and erotic scenes, but it's really early into it's development, so they could just be teasers rather then the main focus? Dunno...
The visuals of the characters are alright, although the younger sister and her friend's faces look almost like they are related... The protagonist has the better visuals so far of all the characters... Most of the backdrops look unique, although a few look like possible copies used in other erotic VN/games I've seen by other authors... Overall the visuals are slightly grainy, especially in darker scenes, which means they are probably compressed versions... Most erotic scenes look good, although the office one looks a bit rushed with the positions changing so rapidly it almost feels a bit unbelievable...
The script is not bad, I didn't see too many flaws other then maybe a tiny bit of grammar errors... The story involves another over used theme of Family Sex... And the plot itself is pretty basic for the moment, following a female protagonist (It's always nice to see stories from the female perspective rather then always having male protagonists) as she lives her life with her younger sister and brother, as well as performing her job as a model for a modeling agency (another female job that sometimes is a bit overused in erotic VN/Games)... The protagonist also, by design although portrayed as by chance, run's into a lot of situations that play on sexual scenes, aka voyeurism... You do get to make some choices for other characters, which is a bit more creative then alot of other erotic VN/Games... For the time being it seems as though the story is just teasing the reader/player with so many erotic scenes this early into the story, and I hope that it will not be the main focus, story wise, otherwise it will run the risk of just becoming another porn VN/Game, with little in the way of substance and depth to the story... Don't know for the moment, although it's seems to be leaning slightly that direction... I'm hopeful this is, just, erotic content teasing, and not the norm, but only time will tell...
There does appear to be a relationship type system in this one, although it's not as obvious... There are definitely different outcomes or story routes, that lead to different scenes, based on the choices you make for the protagonist and other characters...
Overall, it's an ok visual novel so far... I do wish more VN's would be a bit more creative and not always go with the family sex stuff... It's a bit disheartening to see so many VN's coping out, and going down that route... This VN is very early in it's development, so I may give it a re-visit later down the line...
Originally Reviewed on 12/21/2017
I tried this introduction a couple times to see some of the choice paths, and it's alright so far... It's a little more focused on the sex scenes than I'ld prefer in an erotic visual novel, as I prefer more balance between the script and erotic scenes, but it's really early into it's development, so they could just be teasers rather then the main focus? Dunno...
The visuals of the characters are alright, although the younger sister and her friend's faces look almost like they are related... The protagonist has the better visuals so far of all the characters... Most of the backdrops look unique, although a few look like possible copies used in other erotic VN/games I've seen by other authors... Overall the visuals are slightly grainy, especially in darker scenes, which means they are probably compressed versions... Most erotic scenes look good, although the office one looks a bit rushed with the positions changing so rapidly it almost feels a bit unbelievable...
The script is not bad, I didn't see too many flaws other then maybe a tiny bit of grammar errors... The story involves another over used theme of Family Sex... And the plot itself is pretty basic for the moment, following a female protagonist (It's always nice to see stories from the female perspective rather then always having male protagonists) as she lives her life with her younger sister and brother, as well as performing her job as a model for a modeling agency (another female job that sometimes is a bit overused in erotic VN/Games)... The protagonist also, by design although portrayed as by chance, run's into a lot of situations that play on sexual scenes, aka voyeurism... You do get to make some choices for other characters, which is a bit more creative then alot of other erotic VN/Games... For the time being it seems as though the story is just teasing the reader/player with so many erotic scenes this early into the story, and I hope that it will not be the main focus, story wise, otherwise it will run the risk of just becoming another porn VN/Game, with little in the way of substance and depth to the story... Don't know for the moment, although it's seems to be leaning slightly that direction... I'm hopeful this is, just, erotic content teasing, and not the norm, but only time will tell...
There does appear to be a relationship type system in this one, although it's not as obvious... There are definitely different outcomes or story routes, that lead to different scenes, based on the choices you make for the protagonist and other characters...
Overall, it's an ok visual novel so far... I do wish more VN's would be a bit more creative and not always go with the family sex stuff... It's a bit disheartening to see so many VN's coping out, and going down that route... This VN is very early in it's development, so I may give it a re-visit later down the line...