VN Ren'Py Abandoned Little Man [v0.5] [Mr.Rabbit]

[anschwww]

like:
the art, reminds me to snow daze
ren'py
story / Characters

dislike:
the rest it's more a "napping simulation"
navigation could be improved (or at least bigger arrows)
more alternatives for time skipping (TV,...) - i'm pretty sure, there will be more in the future, but for now the naps are annoying
and generally more possibilities to do stuff in the world.

 

[firetemplar415]

I agree wholeheartedly with this post.
I also want to add that there are many grammatical errors throughout the intro to his new home with MILFY new mom.

 

[misterSS]

fuck yes more shota

 

[PeggyBlackett]

moo

 

[WaerM]

is there nothing to do besides napping?
How does school work ?
doesn't proress time and I can't seem to talk to Molly :/

 

[Mr.Rabbit]

I was being obtuse for shits and giggles. I'm glad I wasn't the only one laughing for a change

I played the game for 20 minutes, but it ended up being about 6 minutes of hitting the take a nap button, 6 minutes of searching every room, 6 minutes of trying to talk to people who either had nothing to say to me or couldn't be bothered, and 2 minutes of appreciating the art including a handjob animation. I'd kinda like the 18 minutes I spent fruitlessly searching back...

@Mr.Rabbit - I really enjoyed the intro and the artwork. I do think there needs to be some guiding factors to avoid walking and searching all over the place only to find disappointment. Maybe color an arrow, and outline a map location if and only if there is a new conversation or event to happen there. Also, I'm assuming the demo ends after I get a "bedtime story", since then "Mom's" affection drops to zero and nothing seems to change after several days of interaction... The teacher seems to have zero content, as well. Please let the player know that they've reached the end of the content for a specific character. I (and your future patrons) will thank you super hard for that.

Thanks for the feedback, all this is already being taken into account for the next build.

like:
the art, reminds me to snow daze
ren'py
story / Characters

dislike:
the rest it's more a "napping simulation"
navigation could be improved (or at least bigger arrows)
more alternatives for time skipping (TV,...) - i'm pretty sure, there will be more in the future, but for now the naps are annoying
and generally more possibilities to do stuff in the world.

Yes, there will be other things to pass the time, a way to make money, and missions in which it will be necessary to use this money ... Some leisure objects ... no more napping, unless you want to haha

I agree wholeheartedly with this post.
I also want to add that there are many grammatical errors throughout the intro to his new home with MILFY new mom.

Yes, it's not my native language, I have to find someone to help me with this...

fuck yes more shota

It's never too much.

is there nothing to do besides napping?
How does school work ?
doesn't proress time and I can't seem to talk to Molly :/

Yes, Molly has no content in this build, for now.

 

[kkraftpunk]

Awesome game guys i like what i see already

 

[Rhinon]

Can't wait to see more

 

[sagela]

More ss is always welcomed o/

 

[tanningchatum]

IS THAT "SLIPPIN" JIMMY MCGILL AS YOUR LAWYER? That's it, instant 5 star game.

 

[Raerngaming]

It really need to have you do more things after all you nap most of the time, talk just a little at the house and once she gets you off the relationship meter drops back down, In school you have nothing to say to Molly just class and that about it.

 

[StroheimGargle]

I like the music

 

[BadEnding1]

esse jogo promete!!

 

[Arius Zauber]

What are the planned fetishes for this game, like footjob or sleeping for example ?

 

[MegamanMegas]

Glowing Golden Approval from Jotaro Kujo.

 

[Mr.Rabbit]

Awesome game guys i like what i see already

Thanks

Can't wait to see more

Me too... stay tuned for the next update.

More ss is always welcomed o/

Always

IS THAT "SLIPPIN" JIMMY MCGILL AS YOUR LAWYER? That's it, instant 5 star game.

Hell Yeah!!!

It really need to have you do more things after all you nap most of the time, talk just a little at the house and once she gets you off the relationship meter drops back down, In school you have nothing to say to Molly just class and that about it.

Thanks for playing, we are improving all of this, stay tuned for the next update

What are the planned fetishes for this game, like footjob or sleeping for example ?

Not now ... maybe in the future.

Glowing Golden Approval from Jotaro Kujo.

 

[sdibolcrif]

Please tell me the kid has more expressions than the one in all the screenshots... that thin smile and soulless eyes are the stuff of nightmares

 

[Mr.Rabbit]

Please tell me the kid has more expressions than the one in all the screenshots... that thin smile and soulless eyes are the stuff of nightmares

Yes, he has, in the dialogues he has a variation of seven expressions, the scene was a problem that went unnoticed. :test:

 

[areason12]

Cool concept.

 

[Tk42799]

Looking forward to see this developing further...