V0.33 Review
Playtime: 1 Hour
TLDR - Should play. This version feels lacking but I see a lot of potential.
I rate this a 3.5/5. It has some good elements but the content is a bit disappointing and the gameplay is lackluster. This should not be confused for the amount as for this version, it seems pretty good.
Art
I think the artist has so much potential but the game gates it. Scenes should have 3 animations IMO for this style of gameplay. "Warmup" animation --> Main Animation --> Cum.
The animation is a completely different style and good. It makes the rest of the game look subpar but that just speaks to the artist. The game's art outside of scenes is not the greatest but that's fine and I think for the best. It's still NOT ugly.
Scene
Seeing that there's only one looping animation is a bit tilting. I'd hope in the future the artist introduces scene variety. In addition, the Hinata content was very lackluster. One repeated scene to improve lust is not engaging. I would prefer AI generated shots of random activities between the two than just a single repeated scene I have to spam through.
Writing
English isn't their language but ignoring the grammar mistakes, it's good. Characters feel themselves.
NTR
I didn't see NTR in this version.
Combat
Pretty dull and not well designed. Game combat is difficult to get and using RPGM makes it even worse. While not the focus, I suggest the dev to look at their favorite systems/what makes things enagaging to them when fighting. Should they opt for turn-based? Should they opt for behaviour tree AIs? Etc.
I think for the current system, perhaps introducing a parry/frame dodge mechanic would work. Introduce basic status effects like stuns, bleeds, or roots.
Music/SFX
Add some. Handjobs, gushiness, etc. Make the game atmospheric.
Playtime: 1 Hour
TLDR - Should play. This version feels lacking but I see a lot of potential.
I rate this a 3.5/5. It has some good elements but the content is a bit disappointing and the gameplay is lackluster. This should not be confused for the amount as for this version, it seems pretty good.
Art
I think the artist has so much potential but the game gates it. Scenes should have 3 animations IMO for this style of gameplay. "Warmup" animation --> Main Animation --> Cum.
The animation is a completely different style and good. It makes the rest of the game look subpar but that just speaks to the artist. The game's art outside of scenes is not the greatest but that's fine and I think for the best. It's still NOT ugly.
Scene
Seeing that there's only one looping animation is a bit tilting. I'd hope in the future the artist introduces scene variety. In addition, the Hinata content was very lackluster. One repeated scene to improve lust is not engaging. I would prefer AI generated shots of random activities between the two than just a single repeated scene I have to spam through.
Writing
English isn't their language but ignoring the grammar mistakes, it's good. Characters feel themselves.
NTR
I didn't see NTR in this version.
Combat
Pretty dull and not well designed. Game combat is difficult to get and using RPGM makes it even worse. While not the focus, I suggest the dev to look at their favorite systems/what makes things enagaging to them when fighting. Should they opt for turn-based? Should they opt for behaviour tree AIs? Etc.
I think for the current system, perhaps introducing a parry/frame dodge mechanic would work. Introduce basic status effects like stuns, bleeds, or roots.
Music/SFX
Add some. Handjobs, gushiness, etc. Make the game atmospheric.