VN - Ren'Py - Living with Vicky [v0.6] [StannyStanny]

Every dev is a person. I don’t wanna crush that person. But can’t give this more than 1 Star… at BEST. I’ll point form it because there’s too much.

-Engrish. For shits and giggles, I used the URM mod to correct spelling mistakes. I got 6+ pages.
-MC: Too thin / loser to be a believable male-dom. Too creepy to be loving. Pick a lane.
-Day/dreams that ruin the reveal if/when it happens for real ex: Sis.
-Loss of Focus. Mom. Then Mom + Sis. Now intro a bunch of new LI… it’s called Living with VICKY.
-Graphics. Yes. Vicky looks like a Milf with a model I haven’t seen. But some expressions are horrid.
-Animations. I’m ok with no animations. But loops of 2-3 pictures done 4+ times… stop!
-MC that can’t do a task without flaking. Ex: Editing pictures. That just makes me hate the MC.

This dev is definitely NOT the only one doing the above stuff… but I actually like the potential of this game (!)

It’s all fixable though. Get a proofreader. Narrow it up to Vicky +/- sister. Ditch the fake animations. Live with stills or wait till you can do “real” animations. Lose resolution if you have to but make the faces attractive. STOP with the “I have to do this… but I won’t… hurr… hurr…” MCs.

Finally, please, pretty please, with sugar on top: if you make changes… make them going forward. Please do not rework old material. You lose momentum and/or creativity.

Despite the above, I really want to see a new and improved Living with Vicky and I hope the dev achieves it…

If I could, I'd give it a 4.5. Only because the render quality isn't the best out there and scenes aren't animated either.

I think there are a lot of really great games that are more "complete" story-wise, with more complex characters and more interactivity . But it's nice to have a decent, linear experience with simple story every once in a while. And this one does that pretty well imo.

This game's pacing is already completely ruined, short of rewriting the entire thing. There's very little element of corruption, because it's possible to have the MC say some pretty damn suggestive things to his own MOTHER right there in the beginning of the game and she just acts like it's hot. In little to no time, you're putting sunscreen on her and basically sticking your fingers in her ass. There's very little content so far and it immediately goes to a sexual place, with the mom giving very little consideration to the implications of her son acting like this toward her. At least, I don't think she's thinking much of it— it's kind of hard to tell when the English is complete trash and I can only halfway understand what anyone is saying or thinking.

The worst part, I'd say, is that skipping any progressive corruption and immediately moving toward perversion isn't really even a choice. You can try to be sweet to her instead of aggressively flirty, but it doesn't make much difference in what happens here. The multiple dialogue selections are, first of all, only an illusion of choice, and second, extremely unclear on exactly what path they'll set you down should you choose them. It's just wildly poorly-written.

This game has also gotten a surprising amount of praise for its graphics, but I must be missing something on that front. I'm not an expert in high-quality renders, but I play enough of these games to know outstanding graphics when I see them, and mostly all I see here are unnatural, blocky characters with weird, thin-looking hair that looks like it was messily glued onto their scalps and who always seem to be making the wrong facial expression for the situation. I won't say it looks TERRIBLE, but it's not much of a standout and honestly it reminds me more than it should of the Ren'Py porn games that shaped the genre back in like 2017/2018.

The story is quite banal but hey we make do with it . For the characters , Vicky is pretty much okay but as for the MC " WTF" is he stupid or what ? Personally i feel tis way as in many others games !!! So stupid and very ugly a real dick head , he really looks so much like nothing that you can't believe in the game or get into the skin of the character! A game with potential but disappointing , really a shame !!!
Donc pour moi ça sera 2 étoiles et elles sont pour Vicky !

Real milf,no huge melons. I really enjoy the game. If patreon had a payment method I could use, I would definitely support it. I'm very looking forward to the next update. 很棒的游戏， 加油！/That's great! Keep it up!

The overview says - " Will you use this new change to bond with your mother or be a complete pervert. "
But you are never given a choice!!! MC is always a pervert, keeps perving on the mom, forcing her to do stuff. Wants the mom to be his girlfriend, but then starts fantasizing about the sister. Doesnt the help the fact that the MC looks like a psychopath in many renders.
So to the Dev if you are reading reviews, give players a choice to not be a pervert and treat Vicky like a lady, not just to satisfy some pervy fantasies.

needs better proof reading and work on the pacing. I mean the mc wants to jump Vicky within in the first 5 minutes and ask to see his sister in undies in the first 10 minutes, no build up or relationship building. unfortunately i had to stop playing because of this.

Don't think this is written very well, it has very few choices and ALL of them have 0 impact so far(why even have them).

Overall the "game" is just a run of the mill incest VN, because you can't call this a game as nothing has actual impact.

Everything in this VN has been done by devs that write better or animate/render better or devs that give actual choices with impact.

I don't see any redeeming qualities in this VN it does not separate or outshine any other games in this genre in any of the aspects.

So far one of my favorite visual novels ever so far. "Landlady" is so fricking hot and her reactions are somewhat realistic of a lonely housewife isolated with the "tenant", who is giving her all the attention her husband didn't.
The dude is a real horny bastard and very forward with her. Love the focus so far on just the two of them, no 10 other characters I don't give a shit about, and I'm very much looking forward to the "room mate" joining them in the future. The game is straight to the point, no endless pointless dialogue, just the necessary amount to drive the plot forward. Just how I like it.

Cons: Their relationship is moving a bit too fast and I feel the build up to them finally have sex will be over soon. Can pace it out a bit more.

This one actually looks very promising. I am the type of guy that likes unrealistically large boobs, games with actual animations and good audio. All of which are not in this game but I would still put this game solidly above majority of the games on this site. It goes to show how impactful it is if your game has good pacing. Keep up the amazing work so far.

[ Review for version - 0.4 Early Access ]

TL;DR:
MC and Vicky have moved in together after Vicky's divorce. Hormones and horniness take over.

The Good:
Vicky is cute, and I like how she tugs between wanting to get intimate and feeling guilty about it. The Incest is also a nice bonus!

The Average:
It's very much a kinetic VN with the only choice being whether you want to see a little bit extra nudity between bouts of story and sex.

The Bad:
The MC does look a bit goblin, but I don't hate his design. It will put people off though, since most people want these stories to be in first person.


Thorough Review: Once the story has gone further I can do deeper dive into my review, but now there is still much to uncover.

Wishlist:
> More sex
> Pregnancy
> More on Vicky flipping her switch and taking control from the MC
> If you do bring the sister character in be careful to not make it too much harem. I want the focus to be Vicky and the MC.
> Same story if you bring in other women side characters: keep the focus on Vicky and MC.
> It would be nice if the ex-husband got a cameo as well, if only so he can witness and realise he's missed out on Vicky's new sexual development.

loving the AVN the renders are unique as you haven't seen them anywhere else yet and the story is pretty good as well and so is the eroticism is not half bad either and the pace at which the Developer decided to go with the MC and Vicky i like it it as well . keep it up i am looking forward to more

super game renders regular updates nice story hop he continue like that i am patreon now see if it keeps good i stay patreon an hop ther will be a bit more public exhib etc but exelent untill now version 0.4

This game is one of the masterpiece in mom and son Incest I think this story can beat A wife and mother in seduction i will love if there is some NTR mom stuff blackmailing mom or sharing mom with friends or other people or leaking the vicky private picture something or Vicky is protecting her son by compromising with bully something like that and i will love see it's Android portal

OK this looks good...but it's terrible.
The plot is nonsense
The renders in the samples are cherry picked while the actual ones in the rest of the game are terrible , filled with poke-throughs and clothes going over characters
The character faces look wierd ...
it's just a waste of time
the 2*s are even not a bad score

Where to begin...

My first point of contention would be the VN label. So far, as of the end of Chapter 2, there are two choice screens presented and no matter what you choose the game is not significantly influenced by the player's input. The remainder of the 'choice' screens are not really choices as there is only one option available. Why bother? Things may change in the future, but for now this game, for all intents and purposes, is a KN. Label it as such and be done with it.

Secondly, numerous misspellings and grammatical mistakes. Not the worst example, but enough to be distracting.

Thirdly, full of the standard tropes with no knew ground broken.

Fourth, two frame loops are not animations. It's ok to not have animations, but these bounce-backs are distracting and I would recommend not using them.

Fifth, unless there is a monumental change of direction in future releases, there will be forced sex. Another reason to label it as a KN.

If you like this type of story and don't care about agency and/or choice, strap yourselves in and go along for the ride. Otherwise, I would recommend spending your time with something that has more depth.

It's quite refreshing to see a game focusing so far on one love interest, and I quite hope it stays that way. Because that's what can make this game truly stand out from my humble point of view.

Other like: a decent looking "landlady", hits my preference in that she is quite realistic in both her shape and face expressions, and does not have those huge overwhelming surreal boobs like many other DAZ-made MILFs tend to do.

Dislikes\areas for potential improvement:
1) MC a bit too douche and tends to think too much with his cock
2) "Landlady" having too little or uncertain agency.

- I wanna look up your skirt, lemme do it
- I can't do that, it's wrong
- But I have this urges and you are so hot
- Well okay, you make me feel young again

- I wanna make out with you, let's do it
- This is wring for us, we should not do that
- But I know you like it
*ignores her and makes out with her anyway*
*she somehow yields and accepts it*

So it's not about how quick the progression towards sex is, but rather it's about the actions and reactions that look, to my taste, a bit too primitive

Very good, the story progresses too fast to get bored, I wouldn't be surprised if there is sex in the next update
In addition, the MILF is not that slim either, but she has her curves and her very remarkable things.
Although there are only 2 characters, the relationship progresses very quickly for my taste

i was honestly not expecting much, but the writing is really great.
the sexual tension is build up rather quickly, which can be a good thing if the writing is proper, which it is.
I also like how there is no wall of text, while the story does not progress like in other games.
The text messages between the characters is nothing new, but is well executed, and esp. the last ones are very hot.

Wow, this was definitely a great start! I will for sure be watching for more updates! The sexual tension is just the right amount without going too fast or too slow. The texting at the end was super hot. Excellent work!