VN - Ren'Py - Completed - Liza's Story [v0.07] [DeesCo]

The most visually displeasing thing is the eyes! Other than that MC is quite well designed. There is A LOT of content and scenes to be seen, which also start rather quickly.

Story and plot is lacking, most of the scenes start of in most ridiculous scenarios and development leading to them, but the renders and variety of scenes definitely makes the game average and exploring all the content worthwhile.

Developer improved rendering skills given sneak peaks in the forum thread and there is much better tools these days, remake of this game would definitely land in Good/Excellent category.

OK, so I know this game is old, but it was new to me. Description showed some elements that looked like fun, so I gave it a try.

Let's start with the positives.

• I know I am probably in the minority on this, but I actually think the main character is very attractive. Slim and well proportioned (impossibly small waist aside), she has none of the ridiculously over-exaggerated features that plague most women in games like these.

• Liza's face carries an innocence that you just don't see very often, which in and of itself is intriguing. And she's also a little bit of a bitch, which makes the prospect of her being slowly corrupted so intriguing.

• She quickly meets a cast of nefarious characters that are more than willing to speed along this innocent young woman's descent.

So the main character, her appearance, and the setup are great. Which is why the way things unfold is so incredibly disappointing.

Liza doesn't get corrupted slowly or gradually. She doesn't wind her way along a path of seemingly inconsequential decisions that eventually lead to a bad outcome. And she doesn't get the chance to develop meaningful chemistry or tension with anyone; thus there is never any anticipation for (or satisfaction from) her eventual encounters with her corruptors.

Instead, she's raped, coerced, or otherwise abused by multiple men every day, and that begins from the moment the game starts. It generally takes no more than a few minutes for each of these men to go from first meeting her to cumming on her.

And yet somehow this naive young woman never seems to resist, get upset about what's happened, or seek help from anyone.

I know everyone has different preferences, but it's hard for me to see much eroticism in a story that unfolds like this. Maybe if you're in middle school, and every girl you know is just mean for no reason, then I suppose I could understand why the story of a young attractive woman being abused like this is satisfying.

But if are in middle school, then you shouldn't be on here. And if you survived middle school and became a functioning adult, then I really struggle to understand why this would be appealing.

Of course, since most corruption games seems to make this mistake (though not all as egregiously as this one), then maybe I'm the one who's crazy.

Interesting game.

I think it is very over the top. But this makes it good for having a good time.
Though personally, i like females to have some brain, in this case she does not. So even the most obvious and unbelievable blackmail is a success.
The game is older and i am writing a review years later. Though it may not looks super pretty, its a fine game.
Not super long either but of course you can replay the game.

Characters looks alright. She is really pretty and comes over as a bitch with no brains.
So its your call.
If your looking for fapping, its a go.
Story, not so much.

Absolutely the best ntr story with a female lead ...
pros:
1) Straight to the point without tedious slow burning
2) Great storyline focused only on Liza with no unnecessary characters (usually created just to add useless and boring side stories)
3) Renderings and motions are in old fashioned "vintage game" style, but it fits the story very well

4) Liza is gorgeous and may seem like a stupid girl in the early days but this allows for a great humor feeling which is perfect for an erotic game

at the end a compelling story written to provide 1-2 hours of pure fun that transports the player to the world of Liza a carefree beautiful girl who can't resist when someone touches every part of her sensitive body.

Cons: None (if you love girls that craving for sex)

I hope this story will continue to create more episodes of the beautiful Liza's Life.

I really like your game. I had a great time, I love this sexy and naive heroine. A very enjoyable game. Thank you very much for this game, that I was born and I can play it. I recommend everyone to try

(end of chapter 1 rating)

Damn would this KN be truly perfect if the dev had a powerful computer and could make better renders.

PROS

-Perfect body, and though the face may come off as strange at first, you really start loving the sluttyness and stupidity it expresses.

-Awesome wardrobe. This dev knows his slutwear, thank the High Heavens that some devs at least know how to properly dress their porn characters.

-Crazy NTR/cuck/hotwife storyline. I could only have hoped for much more shota as well, but rules, rules...

-I like the racist/spoiled bitch personality she has, makes you want to see her properly punished even more.

-Not too much text, just enough to accompany your arousal while you fap along to the renders.

CONS

-As already said, really poor and grainy render quality. But not anyone can afford good equipment (me included).

-The high heels are often not properly posed, I really hate that as a heel fetishist, especially with such a hot slutwear wardrobe.

-The facial posing is too primitive, there is too often the same expression of shock on her face.

-The lighting is sometimes off. Overexposed and underexposed scenes.

I thought this KN was abandoned, especially considering the lack of support. But fingers crossed to see a chapter 2 that takes this surreal porn world crazyness even further...much further! If the dev could buy a better computer, I'm sure he would get more patrons.

Renders are quite allright, strange animations which are too short. What's abolutely terrible is the text/dialogue/monologue concept... 3 lines with different colours... Dude, just stick to normal dialogue and internal monologue (so only 2 types), do not display them in one line and it'll be allright

Really good. Wish there was more of these novel type of games, even if you go though them fast they are .. uhm.. good for their purpose. Wish more developers had the balls to not impliment a overcomplicated 'game' to gatelock the content.

okay get things straight:

Pros:
- setting (faaar too few girls have ugly/old guys and pretty young chicks in it and female mc's)
- girls looks ok (but thats about it)
- many old and strange guys
- straight to action


Cons:
- bad renders
- corny filter
- bad animations
- gilrs face is a bit strange and has faaaar too few curves = too slim
- far too much nonsense and boring story
and again bad quality and boring girl.


sad.

Liza has a great body. I disagree with many here. Her face is pretty, sort of Russian or East European features. Why are all the men small and have small dicks? She needs a big guy with huge dick to make her cry out loud, when she gets taken advantage of and fucked. Needs more guys getting to grope her.I am also looking forward to seeing her being manipulated into participating into a surprise gangbang.

Beautiful first attempt of the developer. The renders might be a little better, but I think they are appealing. It is a cinetic novel so no decision options, which I personally very welcome. I like the story because it's kept flat because nothing is worse than having to read 794 pages before coming to the next renders and who's watching porn for his dialogues?

Renders are not good. The facial shape and expressions especially bad. Body proportions all over place.

The MC and all characters are ridiculous and unbelievable, as usual a terribly designed characters created to fit into a weak and shallow story. The usual fallback in to many corruption games for poor writers, if you can't come up with a working senario just turn the character into a nymphomaniac bimbo. It is just poor writing skills.

Translation shocking and often just does not make sense.

The plot and story are an insult to readers intelligence.

Not a single redeeming feature in this VN which did not even need to design any gaming elements.

Thankfully more and more well written corruption games are getting made so the days of this shallow, bland flavorless fare are limited.

Really awful writing. Far below the average bad corruption story. The main character is a totally unrelatable idiot and the author gives more time and respect to the other characters who are just one dimensional, brainless, perverted, old, balding men who just grope and rape the main character. You constantly hear their thoughts that sound like they were written by a 13 y/o. Lines like, "I can't wait to fuck her pussy!" or , "I'll have this stupid bitch sucking my cock in no time! Hehehe!"

The only redeeming quality is Liza is hot and wears hot outfits and often has sex in those hot outfits. This isn't a game. It is purely a kinetic novel so it won't keep you waiting for action and there is a lot of action. If you can stomach how poor the writing is and how disgusting the men and characters are you may get some enjoyment out of the mediocre CG scenes.

Edit v0.05 :

A lot of content for every release, it's not your regular 0.0something.
Every release "works" perfectly, if you know what i mean, somewhat silly but exiting situations, that's exactly what i expect in a H-game.

Original review :

Interesting game, if you're into the cheating girlfriend thing.

Dialogue and story are quite basic, to be honest but somewhat, it works for me and the MC is just right.

So, it's a 4 stars in my book, +1 for the haters ;-)

The dev went too fast on this one. He could have got away with it if the CGs and animation were better but they are average. FMC has a super body. Fappable? Yes definitely. Replay?No. You'll need an update to get your fix. But I enjoyed it so I'd encourage the dev to work on the CGs.

Terrible game, no choise to make, no possibilite embress Lisa's persality. actions? I don see anything like these. I Thins the game is only impositive. Lisa don do anitink to slap them, call police, or act to cool bitch for avid theseperverts whe only do rape her. I Don't think this is good idea, becouse i don't have possibility to play the game onl reed it wthout make a choise: Slap him, blackemiling him, thell them fuck off. My vote i s 1 star.

I think this game really deserves a beter rating, so for me it gets a 5 star rating. Even if it was only for the MC, because she really is unique, you won't find her in any other game ! She is good looking, ok maybe not the best, but the Dev improved her already in the course of his development. The story maybe isn't very complicated, even a bit silly, but at least it's 'lewd', it gives me very nice feelings when playing, you will smile from time to time, and get excited.
So I wanne use a criterium another user invented, and that's "fapability". This game has a 5 star fapability rating !
And oh yeah, all the stupid comments on the 'ugly old bastards' in this game : why would I wanne see a handsome-atlete-like-male-caracter-with-huge-dick bang her ? What's so exciting about that ? Those are the typical cliche men in porn movies, so tired of that. I rather like to see the lesser atractive over age dude or the young virgin male get to bang the very nice looking female, much more fapable (again ).
Also the comment on the fact that it's not really a "game" game : Dev made it clear that this is a Kinetic Novel, and so it's a damn very good one !!!
Anyway this review was for the ver. 0.03, and I'm looking forward to see how this story evolves, keep it up Dev !

a boring, unoriginal, kinetic visual novel.

The Good:
--MC is beautifully rendered

The Bad:
-a by the numbers ntr on this site
---ugly/old/fat men trick dumb as a box of hammers MC to cheat on fiance
---Apparently, horny old men/boys don't exist in small towns/villages
-No actual gameplay yet, just a lot of clicking

All men in small towns are apparently simpletons unable to figure out how to trick the dumb MC. You need a horny, old Einstein to figure out how to manipulate the oversexed hottie. Only Einstein from the city could figure that out. And yes he looks like Einstein. The rest of the ugly old men will eventually get a crack at the hottie model too. I got bored after she had sex with Einstein 1 day into living in her new place.

Basically, you've seen this before and done better by dozens of other Devs that use the dumb as a box of hammers hottie that gets tricked/blackmailed into cheating on her spouse/boyfriend/fiance with ugly/old/fat men.

To call this a corruption game is a stretch. She already dresses provocatively and is willing to shed her dress in nothing flat.

Where's the game?
Not one choice to make. It's quite boring. Maybe if she actually made choices...
This should be in the comics section not in the games section.
I don't know what else to say other than don't bother if you actually like to make choices.

The only good point for the game is that it works, but it was, because otherwise it's nothing more than a left mouse button simulator, graphics is pretty bad for now. It would have been better as a comic, sorry am disappointed, had somehow expected more.