VN Ren'Py Completed Liza's Story [v0.07] [DeesCo]

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Overview:
Let me introduce you my first visual novel - Liza's story. Now I'm working on the demo version that I plan to publish and make available for free downloading. The content that you will see in this game will be: Corruption, Cheating, Blackmail, Public Sex, Threesome etc. No zombies, aliens or other not realistic stuff.
Liza is a young, beautiful and arrogant girl and it's about her adventure in a big city to where she had moved with her fiance. She has a lot of expectations and dreams of easy life with a lot of money and pleasures, but let's see what will be there in reality
WARNING:
- It's a "Kinetic Novel", where the player may only click to proceed the story line.
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Thread Updated: 2020-10-29
Release Date: 2020-10-27
Developer: DeesCo
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Censored: No
Version: 0.07
OS: Windows, Linux, Mac
Language: English
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Extras: Italian Translation*
*These unofficial ports/versions are not released by the developer, download at your own risk.

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Tried it and - ugh!

At first sight my thought was 'A different face at least' so I downloaded and looked at the images after unpacking. Wasn't attracted by what I saw there but thought the writing might be good and save this. How wrong I was.

The writing's awful (although the spelling and grammar ain't that bad - I've seen worse today!) and the story's forced - not convincing at all. I stopped playing at the scene in the lobby when her fiancée is knocking over Aldo (sp?) with that present box (is that supposed to be her luggage?! :ROFLMAO: ) and the ensuing inner monologues from the two old leery geezers.

Too bad really as the potential is there - who wouldn't want to see this arrogant bitch's fall from grace, getting used and degraded, corrupted and used? The setup is convincing (her as the proverbial bubblehead) but the execution is lacking. In that regard Elena's story or Ana is better. YMMV.

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