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If it bothers you, just imagine putting a bag over her head while screwing her.was the title changed to Lisa's Story from Lizards story?
My word...I'm straight but the guy looks prettier than Lisa
whats up with her face?
Wait... you are telling me that that girl is not an alien?! She sure does not look like a human lolNo zombies, aliens or other not realistic stuff.
Well I agree, Her eyes and lips need to be smaller, she looks exactly like this guyWait... you are telling me that that girl is not an alien?! She sure does not look like a human lol
Later, not in the nearest updates.lesbian content ?
thank you for informingLater, not in the nearest updates.
Complains about the story being forced and non-convincing, then proceeds to cite Elena and Anna as better examples.Tried it and - ugh!
At first sight my thought was 'A different face at least' so I downloaded and looked at the images after unpacking. Wasn't attracted by what I saw there but thought the writing might be good and save this. How wrong I was.
The writing's awful (although the spelling and grammar ain't that bad - I've seen worse today!) and the story's forced - not convincing at all. I stopped playing at the scene in the lobby when her fiancée is knocking over Aldo (sp?) with that present box (is that supposed to be her luggage?! ) and the ensuing inner monologues from the two old leery geezers.
Too bad really as the potential is there - who wouldn't want to see this arrogant bitch's fall from grace, getting used and degraded, corrupted and used? The setup is convincing (her as the proverbial bubblehead) but the execution is lacking. In that regard Elena's story or Ana is better. YMMV.
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2/10
I love them too. As I said, it's my first tryout in 3d so it will be a linear visual novel, without possibility to choose actions. I decided to proceed from simplest things to more complicated. I hope you understand.I love corruption games. Will player choice play a role in this VN or are you planning for it to be a kinetic novel?
Well the first impression for me is good and i think when you upgrade your skills in 3d software the graphics and the animations will be better. I hope you to continue this game and personally i don't have a problem with MC face (specialy when she gives a BJ).Thanks for your posts guys. Let me reply as honest as I can.
- It's my first project and I am not master in 3d software, but I try to do my best. I have created the MC from zero and didn't use standard faces or morphs. I wanted to create an arrogant, spoiled girl, who despises the ordinary people around and who used lips injections of hyaluronic acid etc. Sorry that many of you are disappointed. But I didn't mean to create an ordinary and natural girl.
- I agree about eyes. I think it's because she wears ophthalmic lenses. But on the second day she decided to throw them away.
- English is not my native language. I tried to do my best to avoid mistakes in my text, but... I would be glad if native English people would help me to improve it.
- About rendering quality. Yes, some of the images have poor quality, but it's because some of the renders took about 24 hours to finish. So I stopped rendering earlier. Sorry. I will try to avoid that in the future.
- I will use this MC model in the future updates of this game, so if you don't like her, I'm sorry. When I'll be more experienced creator then I will create better models with less distortions. I hope so. But it will be in the next game. This is just a start and my tryout..
Thank you all!
Dee