They say that first impressions are the most important and this really proves that saying right. I don't think it's possible to have a worst first release than this.
And to get this our of the way now this isn't a demo, it's barely a proof of concept. Everything shown in the five minutes of dialogue that exists so far really should have just made into character cards if the devs wanted to drum up attention. Everything they would've needed to do so is in the developer notes already.
The reason this feels like such a let down though is the writing. Visual Novels live and die on the strength of their story, and even looking past the little issues like missing punctuation and typos, this feels like someone didn't really stop and review their own work before sticking it in renpy, Introducing seven characters in such rapid succession doesn't give anyone, not even the protag, time to establish themselves leaving them all feeling generic as hell. I get it, having character personalities be defined by the fetish they represent is the standard for porn games but three of the five sexable characters personalities being "unreasonably abusive" makes it so that the only memorable thing about them is their art. This really needed at least one more scene showing just the protag and one other person interacting for more than a few sentances to give them more of a lasting/distinct impression.
There's literally nothing there in this build so I feel like I'm being overly pestimistic but I really want the devs to feel like they're putting more thought into thought in their future releases.
