I love the art! It's very unique and is a nice break from the usual art styles hentai and NTR have in general while still retaining that sexy, fantasy, 2D style. The tits look wonderfully heavy, the asses are juicy and plump.
The story in its current state is very bare bones. One thing I would change is to have more "choices". Right now there's too long of a break in between choices and it can become a chore to read through all of that text as majority of it is just backstory NTR stuff you can pass through.
Additionally, I would like it choices had an impact and not just a choice between POVs, it would make it more fun if choices would make MC more cuckier, FMC more sluttier/in love wtih bull.
I also think the storytelling might get messy in the long run if we continuously add in mom into the relationship. It might be good to seperate the two into seperate chapters with occasional overlap.
The story in its current state is very bare bones. One thing I would change is to have more "choices". Right now there's too long of a break in between choices and it can become a chore to read through all of that text as majority of it is just backstory NTR stuff you can pass through.
Additionally, I would like it choices had an impact and not just a choice between POVs, it would make it more fun if choices would make MC more cuckier, FMC more sluttier/in love wtih bull.
I also think the storytelling might get messy in the long run if we continuously add in mom into the relationship. It might be good to seperate the two into seperate chapters with occasional overlap.