VN - Ren'Py - Long Road Home [v10 Part 4 Beta Update 1] [OBDGames]

Man this is an awesome story and I can't wait for the next update. Great work on the script, still needs a little polish here and there to correct typos, but honestly it was engaging and fun, keep up the great work

Really fantastic start.

The renders are really well done, the MC seems like a decent albeit troubled dude which I prefer over creepy teenager MC's that are commonplace, the story is pretty interesting and the pieces are all there for a long, entertaining game, and there seems like there will be a variety of hot LI's to choose from. There already is an older milf who is very hot, a young daughter who is just as hot and we will be introduced to her friend in the next part most likely.

The writing is natural and the characters are humorous without being overly edgy or cringy. I certainly can see this game gathering quite a lot of support if the quality of the updates are as good as this first release.

For a first release, this has more content than a lot of games a couple updates in. This is definitely one of the most promising starts to a game I've seen in quite a while. Give it a shot.

The story is very interesting and full of new elements .
Original plot very well placed is time.
Character building also very possitive, building up in the right pace telling you all you need to know about the personalities.
Story 10/10
Characters 10/10
Renders 10/10
Animations 9/10 , need some more work but they do look great.
Very good work
Well done so far !