[R>Proofreader] Looking for aid with US Army dialogue

EchoFoxtrot

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Sep 5, 2018
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Project:
-Little Regina
- This version is the one currently being fixed
- https://f95zone.to/threads/little-regina-v0-1d-echofoxtrot.125743/

Developer:
-Echo Foxtrot

Looking for:
- Someone with relevant knowledge to help with US Army dialogue in my opening scene

Employment Type:
-No Employment

Preferred method of contact:
-PM or email

Additional comments:
- Several people have mentioned that parts of the soldier dialogue at the beginning of my VN are off the mark.
English is not my first language so while I have already had a very talented writer fix my grammar and make the dialogue sound American, he could not help with the military aspect.
My service in the Danish military also seems to be more of a hindrance than help as my military slang is based on that.